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Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2009 9:41:40 PM Title: Epilogue

I agree-- you could've ended it without the epilogue, but I'm glad you didn't. :o) You have a great narrative style. Thanks for the story! PS- Your story has one of my favorite characterizations of Scott!

Author's Response: *lol* - Scott was one of my favourites to write in this fic. I loved having a snarky outlet - glad you liked him! And the ending :o)

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2009 8:08:29 PM Title: Epilogue

Seems like a perfect ending to me. xXx

Author's Response: Thanks :o)

Reviewer: likelandm Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2009 6:58:47 PM Title: Prologue

Yay..the epilogue..so glad you decided to go with it. Like you mentioned, even if there wasn’t an epilogue..I would’ve been happy with the last chapter..thought it ended perfectly… but this was an awesome little gift :). I was totally surprised about the pregnancy..didn’t picture it for them during this time in their lives..but..it feels right and feels like them. They’re still real (for fictional characters :D)..she’s still Marie..but-a loved, in love and looking forward to a fulfilling future-Marie and going on this journey with them, I’ve come to care about these two so much..I love that they got that.
Also, you managed to add in a couple of my fave L/M stuff..the cabin and road trip..awesome..like the variations of their meeting in the bar..it’s always fun to read..and thanks for the mention of the nuzzle *sigh*. I think you’ve created a little monster cuz now I wonder if it’s a boy or a girl and names and wanting to know all the details LOL. Finally, yay for Scott too..and that these two have the chance to go back , share their impending arrival with their friends and the future looks promising.
Thank you so much..this story is loved.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comments :oD I wasn't sure to start with, but I'm glad it posted the epilogue now. I wasn't planning the pregnancy bit for them either, but I thought that they needed something that would make them look to the future (they're both rather good at dwelling in the past!)... and like Marie said - it just kinda happened! I might post a little post fic mini drabble somewhere down the line as well. I have an image in my mind I want to play with *g*

Reviewer: notmyself Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2009 11:13:41 PM Title: No promises

You beautiful, gorgeous, crazy, manipulator of feelings. One minute I want to hang my self, then I want to kill someone, then I'm laughing like someone who has had too many shrooms, then I'm hot as all hell. Thank you, thank you for this most excellent and glorious story. I've never read better. Truly. Thank you.

~Mia

Author's Response: I just wanted to say thank you so much for all your reviews! I came home to an inbox of them and it totally made my evening *g*. Especially the ones for More than a Rogue & Through Touch. Through Touch was my first attempt at angst and I was originally terrified to post it. And MTAR took me about 2 years to write - so it's a fic close to my heart, and comments like yours make it totally worth the time spent writing. So glad you enjoyed it! Thank you :oD

Reviewer: notmyself Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2009 7:00:50 PM Title: The moves of a poet, the words of a dancer

You write the absolute fecking best drunk chick I have ever read. Bar none.

~Mia

Author's Response: I have far too much drunk chick experience *g*

Reviewer: likelandm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2009 9:49:35 PM Title: Prologue

Hi,
This is such a beautifully done story…I’m in awe of your talent and the time, energy, and love for L/M you must’ve put into it, b/c it all shows. I have so many things I want to comment on and will try not to write a mini-story lol .
To start off…you made me like Mystique as Rogue’s comrade/literal partner-in-crime(have always liked her as an antagonist-in ff and the movies), b/c I thought in her own way, she really cared about Rogue, knew her pretty well, and tried to get her to face some truths. Secondly, Xavier…he was the calm, soothing, helpful Professor I imagined way back when I watched the cartoons…and I think his presence cemented her feeling welcome/accepted, back at the mansion. Scott…I always like reading about a Scott/Marie friendship..b/c I think they have the best potential for one…and enjoyed your different spin-how it was b/c of their own damaged psyches that they saw each other differently and became
close.
Onto the main two--what can I say about your Rogue? I felt every painfully awkward moment she experienced (and there were quite a few of them)..as well as all her highs and lows. I have to admit, in a way, seeing the despair, loneliness, abandonment, hurt, and unrequited love (she thought) she felt for so long…I was almost tempted to wish she’d just move on from Logan(and I don't want that). In his own way, with his mixed-up signals, misplaced sense of nobility, and fear, he messed her up a lot. Especially since she wasn’t seventeen anymore…he could’ve stepped up a while ago..aaand..the Storm thing didn’t help either. That said…it’s Logan, with his relentless drive to keep her safe and willingness to do anything for her..so that thought didn’t last for too long. I loved how he finally admitted/and showed his feelings in Logan-esque fashion….and well, the fact that he trembled when he was finally with her, didn’t hurt either.
Finally, I’m being a shallow girl…but I like that he got to see her looking hot at least once…especially since she always ended up being a bloody or sweaty mess during their later encounters.
Thank you so much… it’s always a treat to find a long and fantastic story like this. Can’t wait to see where they end up in the epilogue…and the possibility of a post-fic fic sounds great.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comments! I've been a bit lax on the epilogue writing (I've been feeling guilty about this for weeks though - heh) and needed something to kick start me again - and I think you might just have done it *g* rnrnI'm glad you liked Mystique. I think she has the potential to be one of the most interesting characters out there and it was great fun to play her and Rogue against the world together. Scott and Rogue... I have to admit- if I didn't ship Rogan, I'd probably ship Scott and Rogue. I love playing with the potential friendship there. rnrnLike you said as well, there was a part of me when I was writing this, when Logan was being at his most stubborn, that nearly thought screw it, ditch Logan & get over it. *lol* I think I made Mystique say it too Rogue as well (Mystique was my sarcastic outlet for many things *g*) I was over the moon when I finally made L&R talk to each other though! Took me far too many chapters!rnrnAnyway, I'm rambling - so time to go. But thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2009 10:31:23 PM Title: No promises

Nice ending :)

and Scott's interruption was priceless humour!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah - it needed a bit of Scott to lighten the tone a bit *g*. Glad you liked!

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2009 10:30:14 PM Title: Same dance, different song

Awesome chapter!

Can't believe how she wouldn't just tell him why she was leaving, but then again we wouldn't get the angry Logan hot sex if she had! ;-)

Reviewer: babsiegirl Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2009 10:31:29 PM Title: Prologue

I've really just started reading this genre in the past few days. By far, this was the most enthralling story I've read. Rogue was written very complexly; she wasn't a caricature like so many other fanfics I've read. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you! She wasn't the easiest to write most of the time, so I'm glad it came across ok. Welcome to the land of Wolverine/Rogue - it's addictive *g*

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2009 10:00:15 PM Title: A seven nation army

oh my god, i totally did not see that coming. Scott's alive?

damn, great story! i am literally on the edge of my seat!!!

Author's Response: Heh, I think that was my favourite cliff hanger *g* Really glad you're enjoying it! Thanks!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2009 9:04:31 PM Title: Prologue

i have never read this story b/c i like to savor the long ones and was waiting for a new update.

now i can finally jump in and i am really looking forward to it! just the first chapter has great strength, nice explanation of how things are right now at the mansion and it builds to a great last sentence.

now. i'm going to sink my teeth into a nice loooong read and enjoy! thanks!

Reviewer: Sapphyre Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2009 2:28:09 PM Title: No promises

I really enjoyed reading this. What really scared me was that I could relate to the communication issues they had. Great story! Well written!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! You're not the only one who can relate to the communication issues - a lot of it was influenced by stuff I've been through (Ha - ok, so obviously I didn't used to rip off banks - but you know what I mean *g*) - so I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2009 1:58:25 PM Title: No promises

*swoons*

Had to reread the chapter... now I gotta reread the whole story...

Author's Response: Awww *loves you for re-reading* :oD So glad you enjoyed it!! Thanks!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2009 1:26:08 PM Title: No promises

Oooooh I love your dark sexy and horny as hell Logan... lucky Marie!

Reviewer: Silvereyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2009 8:26:22 AM Title: Prologue

Oh... I really love this! I'm so sad it's pretty much done. Definitely a story I'll read again.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2009 10:36:20 PM Title: No promises

yay Logan is going with!!! I had hoped that was what was going to happen

Author's Response: Yep. He didn't even take any persuading in the end - he made that decision all by himself. Although, it took me long enough to get him there!

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2009 7:16:52 PM Title: No promises

Aww they finally understand each other. they should take Scott with them, like a pet or kid brother. lol xXx

Author's Response: I know - finally! FINALLY! It's taken me ages! When I first sketched out the idea for this fic - I had no idea it was gonna be so long. I thought 10 chapters, max. How wrong I was. And *lol* - love your pet Scott idea. I want a pet Scott!

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2009 7:06:22 PM Title: No promises

Bravo!!!!! Please,please, pleeeeease write more.

Author's Response: Thank you :o) And there will be more. Promise. I've already half written the epilogue - so it does exist. I just need to finish it!

Reviewer: nicca Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2009 3:47:31 AM Title: Same dance, different song

oh hotness. can't wait hope you continue this with them in his room? hahaha

Reviewer: Tasa Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2009 1:17:52 AM Title: Same dance, different song

I'm still here! =D
I'm starting to run out of things to say. Yummy chapter, especially the wet Logan.
Also - walked through a rainstorm yesterday so I had no problem picturing how they felt. Grr rain. But... also yay, rain!

Author's Response: Mmm yes, wet Logan. There's something strangely romantic about soaking him with rain *lol*. Or maybe that's just me!

Reviewer: freelke Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2009 9:26:29 PM Title: Same dance, different song

such a great new chpater. worth the wait!

Reviewer: Dita Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2009 8:31:47 PM Title: Same dance, different song

oh no! I'm at the edge of my seat! Don't stop there.

Reviewer: Alana Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2009 8:20:53 PM Title: Same dance, different song

Now THAT was an update!! Excellent combination of full blown angst and hot, angry wall sex. Again, very well done. Thanks for the update and can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: You can't go wrong with a bit of angsty angry wall sex *lol*. It should have it's own genre *g* Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: bklyangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2009 9:24:27 PM Title: The window only brings rain

There is more to this...right? I, mean there HAS to be!

Author's Response: Yep there is more. And I've just posted some of it (finally!)

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2009 6:17:09 AM Title: The window only brings rain

I can't decided who is going to be more pissed about the Professor's timing - Scott or Logan. Heck, I am pissed at the Professor's timing, why would he choose to tell her something like this when her main support isn't there with her? He had to know she was going to go. I would be willing to have you break POV just for one chapter to see the fight the three of them are going to have. Logan won't necessarily have faith that she didn't get scared of the relationship but Scott will, Scott will know it had to be something else.
I just wanted to let you know I have read this entire thing start to finished and I really like what you have done. I really hope the muse gets better and you are able to finish it. You obviously have an end point, since the entire thing is a flash back. It is too good to go unfinished.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you like it so far. And don't worry, I have no problems with the muse on this one (can't seem to shut them up actually *lol*!) - my computer broke (again!) so I'm a bit behind on posting. I am working on that next chapter though - it definitely won't go unfinished!

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