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Reviewer: Corinne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2009 10:58:55 PM Title: Chapter 15

awwwww, Logan's going to the prom LOL!

i know it's not supposed to be funny but it struck me that way. i think i was imagining corsages and powered blue tuxes and Foreigner playing on the stereo.

Author's Response: It was supposed to be one of those 'huh' moments. I wanted them to dress up, and, hello, they are in a school. Prom!!!!rnrnby your description of corsages and tuxes, I get the feeling your prom was a lot like mine!!

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2009 2:10:32 PM Title: Chapter 15

Awwww. very sweet.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2009 5:49:57 AM Title: Chapter 15


Reviewer: Sabertooth1973 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2009 6:01:26 PM Title: Chapter 15

the story is okay, apart from one thing...Logans reaction to having riping out his meatl skeleton, what did he have to be sorry for. Rouge was seeing Bobby when he came home so he was a free agent whils she was in a relationship....then she punishes him for this by almost killing him...and he just forgives this ?..yeah right.

Author's Response: Ok, first of all, I do apreciate the criticism. I do feel that negative is better than positive when it comes to learning. But, what you seemed to have missed is that he wasn't sorry for any relationship. He was sorry that she had to wake up completely alone after she saved all of their asses. And it wasn't really her that did it. If you read the whole thing, you realize that it was Phoenix in control, not her. But that wasn't really touched on until later. But it will all come together soon, promise. Again, thanks.

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