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Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2009 4:39:19 AM Title: Chapter 38

Heh. Goes around comes around.

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2009 4:52:28 PM Title: Chapter 35

oh dear.
that was short lived!

Rogue killing Mystique and Magneto so easily wasn't quite what I was expecting. It belittles them.

I can't help feeling that you got tired of writing this story..?

Author's Response: I know. I wanted to make it longer, but I just wasn't to sure what to do with it. Hopefully, the next chapter will be better.

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2009 4:43:58 PM Title: Chapter 34

Ooh, exciting stuff..
teatime with the family over ;)
maybe now Wolvie gets to skewer something with his shiny new bone claws!

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2009 6:16:53 PM Title: Chapter 36

Here daddy daddy daddy(malicous grin). Can't wait.

Reviewer: New Moon Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2009 12:57:30 PM Title: Chapter 35

I like when Mystique gets what's coming to her, ditto for Eric.

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2009 4:35:41 AM Title: Chapter 33

Mistique? Oh yeah.

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2009 8:04:59 PM Title: Chapter 32

I was surprised that you went with Rogue's mum being an OC, guess I thought you'd go with the comic version of it being Mystique..

Author's Response: I'm actually using a little from both the movies and the comics. Kind of mixing it up a little. Like the background comes from the movies, but the fact that she can use powers she's obsorbed is from later issues of Ultiamte X-Men. I AM going to use her, though.

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2009 10:17:53 PM Title: Chapter 31

good job on these last 2 chapters, tough ones to write!
i was surprised that Rogue's parents were rather easy on Logan given he's so visibly older, but then again they haven't seen her in 3years so they may well just be happy to see she's alive and protected.

good dialogue re Rogue's parents.. I wonder if she'll go looking for her mum and whether she'll make the connection that if Leah is a mutant it's likely that her own mother is too!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2009 4:30:16 AM Title: Chapter 31

So 'daddy' is still alive.... *feral grin*

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2009 4:50:03 PM Title: Chapter 30

Great. Now sit down and write another (tiny voice : pleeeaaasee?)

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2009 6:38:14 AM Title: Chapter 30

You sure know how to end a chapter ;)

Next one please.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2009 3:53:28 PM Title: Chapter 29

Heck yeah dun dun DUUUUUN... and what next?

Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2009 2:13:55 PM Title: Chapter 21

ha ha ha, lovely scene, love the innocent interruption by a drunken Pitor!

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2009 2:13:02 PM Title: Chapter 20

very sweet, liked it :)
would love to see/hear what others reactions are to seeing Logan kiss her in the middle of the dance!

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2009 2:10:32 PM Title: Chapter 15

Awwww. very sweet.

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2009 2:09:54 PM Title: Chapter 14

good chapter.

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2009 2:06:20 PM Title: Chapter 11

Mmm, I'm not really on board with how Rogue is getting to permanently keep the powers of everyone she touches. It's supposed to be a temporary thing unless she kills them in which case they stay with her permanently.
This way it's too easy.. she could just touch everyone for a short while and become the most powerful mutant ever!

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2009 2:02:20 PM Title: Chapter 8

Good chapter!
It would make a lot of sense if Rogue 'lost' the control to her power because her body didn't want anyone touching her again after her childhood experiences.
Can't understand why, if her adoptive mother was also a mutant, Marie would have to leave home when her own powers surfaced?

I think Logan recovered rather too quickly from his ordeal given, for example, how long it takes him in the movies to recover from a knock on the head by Sabretooth or Jean's attacks, but the last scene was very sweet.

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2009 1:54:16 PM Title: Chapter 6

Difficult scene, very harsh on poor Logan! :(
Couldn't understand at first why Rogue was so angry at Logan after Scott had explained why everyone had been kept away, and when she asks Logan he explains too, then he gets blamed for everything when Rogue was the one who made the choice to take out Jean instead of him! Understandable though given what she's now going through because of her sacrifice. Love how she loses it at the end... poor Wolvie.

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2009 1:47:00 PM Title: Chapter 5

Nice touch having Emma in this in Xavier's place!
Was surprised that Emma could read her mind on other matters but not on 'who she did it for' though.

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2009 1:44:54 PM Title: Chapter 4

wow, Rogue really comes across as needy here.. demanding why there was nobody at her bedside! She really is needy though ;)

Looks like Scott wouldn't be there either if it wasn't for the piece of Jean in her head that attracts him!

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2009 1:41:51 PM Title: Chapter 2

how sad.. waking up alone. can't believe Logan would have let anyone talk him out of being there for her!

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2009 1:40:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

interesting twist this, of Rogue killing Jean to save Logan having to do it. I wonder if he'll see it that way though. Can't help thinking she's killing Jean to get rid of the competition ;) ha ha

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2009 3:31:48 AM Title: Chapter 27

So how about letting Rogue and Logan be playful in the next chapter ^_^

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2009 1:18:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

Well, finaly. It was worth waiting, but please, don't torture me any more.

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