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Reviewer: Sabertooth1973 Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2009 5:18:15 PM Title: Money, it’s a hit / Don’t give me that do goody good bullshit

I like this story a lot...a little grutty but feels so real. Please send more

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad it feels real. Much more to come!

Reviewer: Dita Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2009 11:32:09 PM Title: Money, it’s a hit / Don’t give me that do goody good bullshit

wow, great start. I can't wait to see how you mix this up with the rest of the movie (or if you go in a totally different direction). I'm loving your characters. Good Rogue, much more comic book-like.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! It's a mix, definitely, and I hope you stay tuned. There's plenty more to go.

Reviewer: Alana Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2009 12:06:13 PM Title: Money, it’s a hit / Don’t give me that do goody good bullshit

Have I expressed yet how much I love this story? If not, please, allow me to elaborate. I love how well you write these two wonderful characters. There's no need to write their dialogue phonetically, which I absolutely adore, because we already know they have accents. It's just two people, being smartasses, and we the reader enjoying the repartee. Another thing I love is that you've given Rogue Carol's powers, but she isn't close to having them mastered just yet.

You've got a great story here that keeps getting better. I'm really, really looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for updating so regularly.

Author's Response: Thank you for your amazing feedback! :D I'm so glad you're enjoying the story better and better, and that the characters' voices are resonating. There's a lot more to go, so I'll do my best to get updating regularly. And I have a beta now, so hopefully she'll keep me on track as far as time and characterization goes, haha.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2009 8:39:49 AM Title: Money, it’s a hit / Don’t give me that do goody good bullshit

Evil cliffhanger!

Author's Response: Haha, I know! But it will be resolved soon. Hee.

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