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Date: 02/25/2009 2:03:52 PM Title: Chapter 1-Reminiscing
So far the story is pretty good. Like another review said, the intro was a bit wordy. You might want to get a beta reader to catch some small grammar mistakes (apostrophes where they don't belong, and such)
Otherwise, I'm interested to see where this ends up. =) I'll review when I'm done the other chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Yeah I do need a beta pretty bad but I appreciate the input, hope you liked the other chapters!
[Report This]Date: 02/05/2009 5:36:18 PM Title: Chapter 1-Reminiscing
your Logan - Marie scene was good;
sexy, playful and hot.
I like a badly behaved drunk logan ;)
The 12 paragraphs of backstory were a little much though, it's rather tiring to read reams and reams of 'thoughts' rather than have the relevant information unfold during the story.
Author's Response: LOL this was a good review because I was scared the way I wrote it all out seemed to verbose but I appreciate you telling me that because I was thinking it but I was so happy after I edited it I didn't want to butcher it- I don't have very good editing skills, If I'd been in charge of editing the film from the Titanic it would have been a 30 minute movie- oh and thanks a bunch I was agonizing over my Logan Marie scene so your input really fueled me
Date: 02/05/2009 10:20:26 AM Title: Chapter 1-Reminiscing
This was wonderful. Is there going to be more?
Author's Response: I'm trying to do the polite thing since I love reviews and I just realized there was a way to respond to them...yeah sometimes I can be a little dense, anyway it seems sorta pointless to answer this because obviously I posted a 2 & 3 chapter...but I hope you're enjoying them!
Date: 02/05/2009 9:38:22 AM Title: Chapter 1-Reminiscing
If you don't post the second chapter soon I just might finde a way to kill you:-)
Author's Response: Hope you liked the second chapter ; )