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Reviewer: mandamina Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2010 8:20:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is good so far. I hope you'll continue it. My only complaint if the kid didn't have a bag, did she have her papers, and if not as I assume how did they get her into Canada. If so couldn't they use them to get her name.

Author's Response: Hey there, I will continue with the story I'm half way through a chapter but I've got a bad case of writers block at the mom. With the papers and such, I proberly should of explained it more my fault. Logan had an envlop with the safe house detail and such along with some fake papers, different names and such which could be changed. The children were told which cars to go to (apart from the Kid who Logan took). Thank you for pointing that out to me I will write it into the next chapter to explain it all.

Reviewer: Turante Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2009 11:28:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like it. Some formatting issues make it difficult for me to read (multiple lines of space between each paragraph, and the italics tag isn't closed in Chapter 4, which puts the last few chapters in italics in the Print Story version), but once I copypasta'd it into a text editor it was a very fun story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Yah sorry about that I tried to fix it many times but couldn't it as driving me mad. Thanks for the review

Reviewer: SmileyCindy Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2009 10:42:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is a great story. I love everything bout it. Please continue!! I'm waiting for the revealing of The Kid's powers!

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Date: 04/14/2009 12:31:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oooo I love it! Please update soon! I wana know what's up with "Kid"!

Reviewer: Epic Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2009 8:01:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really hope you update soon!!!! It looks like it's going to be a good one to follow!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I should have the next chapter done by the weekend if your willing to wait. Sadly real life work has just jumped on me today lol.rn

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2009 7:25:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really like this, I would love to know what 5 kids Logan gets, I would bet it is the hardest 5 to hide.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, you will just have to wait and see who Logan gets. :D

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2009 6:38:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

can't wait for more!!
:)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, you won't have to wait long I promise

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