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Reviewer: Catchfire Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2009 1:34:22 PM Title: Chapter 5

Yay you're still continueing this story. It's really a great idea and with really good writing. I can't wait to see more. Although these tiny chapters are probably going to drive me nuts. Oh well maybe I'll just wait until you either have several chapters at once for me to read or even better have finished the story. I really hope that that doesn't happen until this fic is really long though. The idea of Wolverine having to take care of all these kids especially the little one. It's just mind boggling. I really really really really really really really really really can't wait for more. Especially with this cliffhanger. What ever you do please, please, keep going until you finish it even if it doesn't seem like very many people are reading your fic. Besides once it's finished I plan to rec it on on of those rec sites (I have on in mind but for some reason I just can't remember the name right now, ah well it's bookmarked.) but they only take finished work or very long wip's that have a chance of being finished or are worth reading anyway. So please finish. And remember that sooner or later I will come back looking for more. Probably sooner. And even though I probably won't leave another review right then I will be looking to read more. And then once you finish it I'll probably read the entire thing at once. I have a feeling this fic could end up becoming one of my favorites that I periodically come back to and re-read again and again. I really wish there were a lot more fics like this one out there. Of any kind. It certainly seems that the plot premise of Logan having to take care of a bunch of the students on his own would appeal to a lot of people. Since there are so many stories you could write about them. From short stories to novellas to novels so to speak. In fact I was really surprised that when I tried to search for fics that have Logan on his own with a bunch of the students that I wasn't able to find any really. Except a couple of extremely short one shots that weren't very good. Anyway keep up the great writing. Or at least keep writing even if you think what you write stinks just keep writing anyway. It causes the creative juices to flow and then you can always go back and edit it or rewrite it or something. If needed. By the way I give honest ratings so you aren't ever going to get a ten unless you actually finish this story. I'm going to give you an 8 but I'm still debating if that shouldn't be a 9 because it's so good but the shortness of it just kind of takes away. Oh ya while I was just writing this I remember that the higher a rating you get from more people the more likely more people are to read you fic and they should read it so consider an 8 maybe a 9 your real rating and the 10 I'm giving you a publicity boost.

Author's Response: WOW that is like the lngest review I have ever got thank you so much for it. As for chapter 6, I have finished it, had it finished along with chapter 5 BUT i sort of forgot to send to my beta *hides from anything being throughn* and dont worry I do plan to finish this story, it was eating at me for about a yr lol. Im nearly dont with work and will have 6 weeks so a lot more will be coming out for the summer. Thank you so much for the review i was having a real shitty day and it made my day.rnrnP.S. about the longer chapters I will try but I feel like im feeling it out just for the sake of it. But there is a more to come dont worry :D

Reviewer: Epic Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2009 9:03:04 PM Title: Chapter 5

oh wow... you have to update soon like before ten tonight (Pacific) so that I can read it while i'm at work. great cliff hanger!!!!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2009 7:26:08 PM Title: Chapter 5

oh god, this is getting good!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2009 9:54:20 AM Title: Chapter 5

Damn!

Author's Response: Like it then?

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