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Reviewer: aranenumenesse Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2009 11:04:51 AM Title: Through the Gateway

Spell checker is our friend. It would be a good idea to run your story through it before posting, and perhaps you could try and divide each chapter you post in to paragraphs. Wall of text hides the story you're trying to tell from us.

Oh, one question. Is the girl in the story Rogue? If so, her name is Marie, not Maria.

Grammatical issues aside (I'm no expert, either), I like the way you started this. No nonsense, we get to jump in the middle of things from the get go. And you have an interesting situation going on, it's usually Logan who's amnesiac, not Marie.

Author's Response: Read the next one in the series to see!!!!

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