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Reviewer: nikkibelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2009 5:09:51 AM Title: An Explanation

yes, finally =)
update soon, this is getting better and better

Author's Response: Update coming after this weekend. I have to work until midnight for the next 3 days, so after that I'll have time to get to the good stuff! So nervous, never written a sex scene before!

Reviewer: manda-dee Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2009 8:54:29 PM Title: An Explanation

I lied. This story isn't retarded it's fantastical. Not just fantastic- but fantastical- the next level up!

Oh and I'm sorry about what I said about it being too shipper before, because I have to say my favorite part of this chapter was them in the parking lot when they're talking about who hit who where and whose blood belonged too who, that was shipper but in a great way.

This story is awesome and it was worth the wait, I mean hey thank god they finally got together and all but lol it was and is a really good story. can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: No worries manda-dee. I needed the nudge to move this stuff into the hot and horny arena! Next chapter, hope you like it rough ha ha! rnrnI have to admit that for some reason writing explicit stuff make me feel embarassed, even though there's no one here but me, which is why it's taken me 20+ chapter to get them to it! But they neeeeed to get it on so bad I'm practically hurting over here. So I'm working on the mucho overdue sex scene now and will post it tonight or tomorrow.rnrnMaybe I should practice my erotic writing and do some PWP for practice, loosen up the old smut muscles so to speak LOL!

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