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Reviewer: Dianora Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2016 5:05:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

I have now read all four longshots on this archive; I loved this story the most with Lifetimes as close second. You have a truly great gift in weaving the story and apart some issues with grammar - I have to say your stories are among the most creative and thought-provoking that I have read here. I simply adored your Rogue in this one; she was such a mystery in the beginning but as the story unfolded - you have shown so many layers to her character. The reasons she left the mansion were so poignant and Logan slamming the door in her face after Jean's death was truly shocking. You explained it so well - he was her rock, an outcast just like her. And that was her place of belonging. I especially loved the entire conversation in the coffee place - especially the part when Rogue explained she was no failure even though she was not walking the same path as other X-men. Mystique and Gambit were so well-done, I simply loved the ending and how it all came together. Rogue destroying the dairies showed she was ready to make her own future. Great work!

Reviewer: Gimpy1 Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2014 11:21:09 PM Title: Chapter 22

I loved this story a lot. Not only was the plot intriguing and the characters wonderfully crafted, I loved you're version of Rogue. She was more than a victim, she had brass and strength, with still being vulnerable and sympathetic. My only complaint would be that the subplot dealing with the prophecies could have been developed further. There was so much potential there and I'll admit I was disappointed that it didn't come find her despite her having destroyed the books.

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2011 1:50:23 AM Title: Chapter 22

this was quite the ride! Very well done!

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2010 2:01:36 PM Title: Chapter 5

I really adore the way you twisted the multiverses together. Makes me ten kinds of happy.

~Mia

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2010 1:55:20 PM Title: Chapter 4

Holy hell, batman! She drugged her and threw her from a plane?!? I may just learn to love Mystique yet. Beautiful, beautiful.

~Mia

Author's Response: haha yeah Mystique sure does have an odd sense of humour about things

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2009 2:40:04 AM Title: Chapter 22

"she knew the price that came with stolen knowledge. The burden that could behold the seeker."

damn, you are a wise woman! what an amazing story! i am soooo glad i found it!

Author's Response: Thanks alot, I'm glad you found the story and enjoyed and took the time to review still :)

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2009 2:33:22 AM Title: Chapter 21

awwwww, a happy return to the mansion for Rogue! YAY!

p.s. screw Bobby, he really needs to get over himself LOL!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2009 2:29:11 AM Title: Chapter 20

“We’re both free"

so true...soooooo truuuuueeee!

ok, this chapter made me tear up a litle, i admit it. i'm a total pansy!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2009 2:19:12 AM Title: Chapter 19

oh...my...god! i am soooo glad she burned those diaries! having your fate spelled out for you, ugh nothing i would ever want. it would steal away my ability to make my own choices, to live my own ife.

good for her!!! just hope this doesn't come back on her badly.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2009 1:22:41 AM Title: Chapter 13

omg, is it a double cross, is she going to kill Graydon, or is it something else? gripping stuff!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2009 12:40:01 AM Title: Chapter 10

"but the world can be a hard place, Logan and just because I grew hard with it does not mean I’m a failure.”

ok, that is the BEST line! it totally sums up how Rogue has changed. gorgeous writing!!!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2009 11:46:23 PM Title: Chapter 8

ooooh Destiny appears. good lord, this is gripping stuff!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2009 11:06:30 PM Title: Chapter 5

ooooh, i have to know more about these mysterious diaries! excellent stuff so far! and i love how you incoporated Graydon Creed in it...will we seek Victor at some point? i hope so!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2009 10:57:00 PM Title: Chapter 3

heh heh flying strong Rogue is my fave!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2009 10:46:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

i just stumbled across this story at 11pm at night and DAMN YOU i just know i'm going to be up late trying to finish it b/c this first chapter hooked me! LOL!

Reviewer: freelke Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2009 6:47:44 PM Title: Chapter 22

I just realized this is the last chapter...NOOOOO!!! I sincerely hope that you will write a sequel to this story. This is one of the best stories I have ever read. i want to see how their lives start from here

Author's Response: I'm really glad you enjoyed the story, and I appreciated all of your reviews along the way. But I can say that there is no sequel for this story, this story was more about ending with Rogue and Logan together again and on the same road, hence all the angst in between lol

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2009 9:43:53 AM Title: Chapter 22

Poor Gambit. Always out done by Wolverine.

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2009 3:11:23 AM Title: Chapter 22

now its a perfect ending xXx

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2009 3:06:46 AM Title: Chapter 22

Awwww. This is nice ending.

Reviewer: Rogue1189 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2009 1:14:35 PM Title: Chapter 21

ahhhhh I sense something in the near future... and it ain't good...

but this chapter had me smiling. They needed this little happiness and it's so good to see them like this

Author's Response: haha I don't know what you're talking about ....*looks around mischievously* ...but...I promise things won't be too bad, has to be some growth after all this.

Reviewer: freelke Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2009 4:38:07 PM Title: Chapter 21

yay! thanks for another happy chapter. Not that I don't love your angsty chapters, but sometimes I need good old fashioned happiness too :) I can't wait for the next one!!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2009 5:13:48 PM Title: Chapter 20

Nice!!! Loved this chapter! I love that they finally made it back to one another!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: freelke Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2009 12:23:06 PM Title: Chapter 20

so exciting!! I loved this chapter!! I love that they finally found each other again. I can't wait to see what others' reactions are. If they don't want her to stay there, maybe they can leave together :) I love this story!

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2009 2:52:07 PM Title: Chapter 19

Awwww. I love these endings.

Reviewer: freelke Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2009 11:01:32 PM Title: Chapter 19

wow. great chapter. It was about time :)I can't wait until the next chapter

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