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Reviewer: VIIIMMV Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2009 7:29:28 PM Title: a funeral and a revelation

Love it!! Love your Vic. Keep it coming.

Author's Response: He's going to have a bigger part in the next chapter. Thanks for the review!!!!

Reviewer: 3togetready Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2009 4:30:29 PM Title: breaking the news and asking for help

Nice chapter. I'm anxiously waiting for the time when Logan and Rogue are thrown together again. I'm so glad he still has hope that she's alive and out there somewhere. As for Rogue leading their little group of mutants, I think that will be awesome. Rogue is so great when she's kicking some serious butt...it's the perfect job for her.

Author's Response: thanks, and I am trying to get them together as soon as possible. I'm working on it now.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2009 4:52:34 AM Title: breaking the news and asking for help

So Mystique and Sabretooth are kinda good guys and their kid is the bad guy... makes me like this story even more!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2009 8:47:15 PM Title: breaking the news and asking for help

oooooohhhhh, that was a twist! can't wait for the next chapter! adding your to my favorites so i'll know when you update!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2009 8:28:13 PM Title: Rescue and Escape

oooooh, another enemy to become a friend?

and i loooove that she killed Wayland, or at least fried his brain. that was brave of her to take him in her head, but her reasoning was solid!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2009 8:19:17 PM Title: a lead and a plan

ooooohhhh, jail break! this is like a movie!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2009 8:05:35 PM Title: new ally and a deadly promise

eeeewwww, rogue and victor breeding?

gross as that is, it opens up exciting new possiblities in the story!

Author's Response: NO BREEDING!!!! Promise, promise!!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2009 8:00:28 PM Title: thin security and an unlikely truce

wow, victor being kinda nice? shocking and definitely has me intrigued.

and you can kinda hear logan in his voice, the way he speaks. makes sense since they, in pretty much all X-men universes, they have a bond, even if it's creepy.

Author's Response: I wanted to make him the much scarier Logan, although Rogue will NOT have the same relationship with him.

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2009 3:20:36 AM Title: breaking the news and asking for help

This is goin at a nice pace, as a story. I just wish you would update more often. It's really good.

Reviewer: Sara Creed Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2009 1:55:44 AM Title: Prologue: a cure and a scam

I'm new here but I really enjoy everyting I read here. You have a Great story! I love anyting with Victor Creed in it. Hope you post more soon.

Reviewer: 3togetready Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2009 12:49:26 AM Title: threats and stories

Great chapter! I love the addition of Remy and Pietro to the mix. They will definitely help to make things interesting for Rogue. And Rogue's supposed to lead the Brotherhood? That's an interesting twist to things as well. And who the heck's life is she going to take? Questions and more questions.... I can't wait to find out the answers!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2009 2:18:16 AM Title: Prologue: a cure and a scam

ooooh, i dig this spin on what happened after Rogue took the cure.

i always thought that in X3 when she went to take the cure they would have noted her mutation and someone (I.e. bad guys in the government) would've been looking for someone like her!

can't wait to see where this goes!

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2009 10:00:41 PM Title: threats and stories

You're back! :)
I'm so glad you're continuing this, I was really missing it! and it's so great how instead of wrapping it up after the rescue you're introducing more characters (Remy, Pietro, Destiny) and setting up more storyline.. you've put so much effort in! Thank you!
Enjoying it and looking forward to more..
I just hope with all the new characters and developments Vic doesn't get forgotten, he's one of my favourites.

Author's Response: Real life's been getting in the way a little, but I am working on the next chapter now. Don't worry about old Victor, either. He's still an important part of this story and will be back in the next chapter.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2009 2:45:15 PM Title: threats and stories

Yup Rogue is strong and pissed off as hell.

Author's Response: It's the only way....

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2009 7:01:51 PM Title: threats and stories

Thank God you are back!! Now sit down and write some more. And please, please, please be faster;-)

Author's Response: I am working on the next chapter now. Sorry about that, life has been getting in the way lately.

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 8:33:09 AM Title: disappointment and awakening

Love how Rogue describes Gambit's eyes.

Reviewer: 3togetready Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2009 4:10:14 PM Title: disappointment and awakening

I just read the whole thing and it's great! I like how you made Sabertooth symapthetic to Rogue. I can't wait to see what happens between her and the rest of the Brotherhood (I assume that's basically who they are anyway).
One thing though, If Logan could smell her that well in the cell, wouldn't he have been able to trace her scent out of there? Maybe not easy in the confusion but I can't see him giving up that easy.
I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: It's basically the confusion of all the scents, there weren't as many in the cell as there were outside of it. And he hasn't really given up. I'm doing more on that in the next chapter. Thanks!!!!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2009 2:40:09 AM Title: disappointment and awakening

Interesting group!

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2009 11:19:24 AM Title: disappointment and awakening

more please xXx

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2009 7:05:23 AM Title: disappointment and awakening

Wow Logan gave up really easily. I almost want to kick his ass for that! but then I think he is in shock so I forgive him... for now...

Author's Response: He hasn't given up that easily. He might think she's dead, but there is still payback to be dished out!

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2009 2:58:27 PM Title: Rescue and Escape

Happy you're still working on this story :)

Great chapter, you handled the escape really well, though they're not completely out of the frying pan yet!

I liked how they didn't take Vic's collar off in the end, but was rather surprised that Rogue was able to take all 5 men out on her own (whilst wounded) when she hadn't been able to take them out before... oh, but I guess before she had the collar on, I'd kind of forgotten! So I guess it serves to show how great her power is and that she should value it.

Sweet scene with Rogue requesting a kiss from Victor before her powers are returned, but kind of sad that you keep stressing that there's no attraction there, so I guess I can't hope for a love triangle and her having to choose later on... bummer, love triangles are so much fun!

Looking forward to seeing where they escape to, whether Victor sticks around to help Rogue or they go their separate ways, and what Logan makes of having arrived too late! whahahahahahaha ;-)

Author's Response: I am working on the next chapter right now, but I have a lot going on so it's coming a little slower than I would like. Thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: Yasona Black Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2009 11:56:33 PM Title: Rescue and Escape

This story is really good and so is the writing. It's very intriguing and I can't wait to read more. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I owe a lot to my beta for the help.

Reviewer: Lost2bfound Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2009 8:17:51 PM Title: Prologue: a cure and a scam

Love the relationship that Rogue and Victor have. Its freaking awesome. And I'm glad that is not romantic in anyway. great story cant wait for the next chapter. =P

Author's Response: I didn't want to add too much romantic dynamic between the two, mainly because I didn't want Rogue to have to make that ultimate choice between Vic and Logan. Thanks for the feed back. I am working on the next chapter now!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2009 6:01:37 AM Title: Rescue and Escape

Wonder who else is in that lab...

more please

Author's Response: Soon, Soon. I promise!

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2009 4:07:08 AM Title: Rescue and Escape

You know, sometimes I just have to like Victor Creed. And Pyro. Next please.

Author's Response: I know what you mean... Thanks for the review!!!

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