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Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2010 4:13:24 AM Title: Simulations and Spars

I can't wait for this! next chapter please!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Its up!!!! Enjoy!

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2010 3:38:41 AM Title: Simulations and Spars

Oh that last line, what a cliffhanger. God, you had me! Normally I'd pitifully beg for a quick update to satisfy my junkie-like cravings, but since you posted two chapters I'll reign it in a bit. Please more!

Author's Response: well here is your update! enjoy!

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2010 3:12:09 AM Title: Simulations and Spars

I have never been so excited to read about a sparring match. This can go 2 ways: 1. Bobby wins, possibly offends Rogue and Sabretooth steps up to protect her then Logan gets in it. Or 2. Rogue kicks ass and his hatred for her and her team grows. Hmmm... I would hope for the latter but the first one would be more fun to read. I cant wait! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! The sparring chapter is up now so go read it. I am working on it.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 6:48:23 PM Title: awakening

god, could he pick a worse moment to show her how he felt lol! he has the worst timing and i don't blame her for pushing away from him.

now she needs to tell Bobby to go to hell.

Author's Response: Of corse he has bad timing!!! I don't want the story to end yet, so she has to push him away, even if it is just because she's afraid of her own feelings. As for Bobby, she's not going to tell him to go to hell, she's going to give him hell... And a lot of pain. Keep reading and thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 7:08:44 AM Title: awakening

Im amazed at the emotion put forth in each character. the loyalty. The betrayal. The love. The hatred.

Please write more soon!

Author's Response: People are so complex in real life. It should be the same in fiction, also. Especially fiction like this, where so many people already no and love these characters. it wouldn't be doing anyone justice to keep them all so monotone. Keep reading!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2010 9:21:36 PM Title: awakening

wow every chapter blows my mind. I loved this one just as much as the last! you really are awesome at drawing me into the story and making me feel what the characters feel. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks. I've always felt that the best stories are only good because of the depth of feelings put into them. There's always a some kind of twist or turn. Keep reading!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2010 11:52:44 PM Title: Fantasy and Memory

“It’s my head, Logan. I can feel all of you.”


damn, that was a CHILLING line! wow! can't wait for the next installment, this such an intense, intimate, and thrilling story!

Author's Response: I actually didn't initially like that line, but I couldn't bring myself to remove it. But I see what you mean. Thanks for the feed back! Next chapter is now up!

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2010 7:21:35 AM Title: Fantasy and Memory

Oh ouch. Gut wrenching. More please?

Author's Response: Next chapter is now up! And I am working on a new one. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2010 5:40:30 AM Title: Fantasy and Memory

Sigh. Logan, Logan, Logan...Did he really think it would be that easy? And why does he always have to lose something to realize what he had? I hope he can fix it somehow. And Victor rocks. And Storm...Well, let's just say I didn't like her in X3. So out of her usual character.

Author's Response: Nothing is ever that easy. At least, nothing worth obtaining. As for realizing what he had, he's thick headed. Victor is just cool. period. No matter what he's doing, while Storm... I didn't like her in X3 either, so I needed to change some things about her. Thanks!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2010 6:29:59 AM Title: Foes and Friends

Ice Princess

*snickers* Good one!

Author's Response: It was either that or drama queen!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2010 6:20:08 AM Title: returns and insinuations

*lol* Nope Wolvie doesn't like it when someone, 'specially Vic, knows more than he does ;)

Author's Response: that's just the kind of guy wolvie is.

Reviewer: Cuthalion Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2010 8:25:39 AM Title: Prologue: a cure and a scam

With the hard drive of my laptop crashed, I had to snatch my Hubby's laptop to do some readig at all. But yes, this continues to be good, and I throroughly enjoy the twist you gave the relationships between people (setting the ship into fresh waters, so to speak...). And a hearty Hip Hip Hooray for Pyro!

Author's Response: Thanks. I thought it was time to give the others a little moving room, too. And I wanted to put a new dynamic on Kitty and have Pyro start a few things along the way. Keep reading!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2009 7:06:26 PM Title: Foes and Friends

wow, this is such a good chapter, i esp. love how Pyro is stirring up junk with Bobby. oh yeh, Iceman better watch his back of there's gonna be some major Havok LOL!

Author's Response: Thanks. Pyro has always been one of my fav characters and even though I've made him a dick in this one, I still wanted to give him some fun! Keep reading!

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2009 12:00:14 AM Title: Foes and Friends

So, So glad I decided to check back here one more time tonight. Truly one of my favorite stories!

Author's Response: Thank you! It's readers like you that keep me going.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2009 8:20:42 PM Title: fixations and mutations

wow, this story keeps getting better and better! i love that Victor is kind of becoming the instructor for both Rogue and Logan in this puzzle.

Author's Response: He's a lot smarter than the movies made him out to be. thanks!

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2009 6:44:25 PM Title: fixations and mutations

Gorgeous. Thank for the boost.

~Mia

Author's Response: Thanks! I just put up the new chapter!

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2009 9:49:57 PM Title: fixations and mutations

AWE! I have to wait until after Christmas????

But I really love this story. It pulls out emotions in me that I didn't think I would get brought out in me from a story.

Author's Response: Even though I am working on the next chapter now and hope to have it done by tomorrow night, I am still going to send it through to my Beta reader. If I have it back by Christmas day, I will post it then. Otherwise, probably not until after the holiday. But I am glad to see people emotionally invested in this piece. It will help push me along to finish it! Thanks for the review and keep reading!

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2009 9:08:50 AM Title: fixations and mutations

Hey Rogue can have Victor, I want Logan...or maybe vice versa. Victor isn't so bad once you realize that he's fruitloops.

Author's Response: He's always been one of my favorite villans. And, just because he isn't all about the rules and laws doesn't mean that he can't be loveable! Thanks for the feedback. If it was up to me, we would all have a Logan to look out for us. Oh well. Keep reading!

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2009 4:11:03 AM Title: fixations and mutations

Nice progress. I wander what will she do when she wakes up? Who will she choose?

Author's Response: Thanks for the feed back. She's going to be a little messed up in the head when she wakes up, but she will make the right choice for herself at that moment. Keep reading!!!

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2009 12:19:31 AM Title: fixations and mutations

I'm so glad I decided to check in one more time before gong to bed, now I'll have great dreams. And there was another Jimmy.... great job once again.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Hopefully, I will get the next chapter up before the new year!

Reviewer: LeeMinKyo Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2009 9:50:04 PM Title: returns and insinuations

I love your fanfic.

I see it everyday in fanfiction, but I donīt know why I never read it. Today, I was so bored and well... here Iīm asking myself why the hell I was so stupid. The fic is SO SO good!

Poor Rogue, it must be so hard. I only find a little something that doesnīt look very real for me. Rogue was raped, but itīs like nothing happens. I think I miss more emocional pain, more tears... It was so "easy" for her to have sex with havok. Sorry, I hope I donīt sound like a bitchy reviewer.

Really, I love everything. Youīre so good. A very talented writer. The story is so real, the characters have the same personality.

I CANīT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!

Itīs so cute (in a strange way) the relationship between Victor and Rogue. I love it. Itīs so different, but so real. I can perfectly imagine Victor like that. After all, heīs Loganīs bro. Isnīt he?

And that jealous Logan. *evil laugh* thanks for that! Iīm tired of poor-little-rogue-because-she-must-see-logan-and-his-large-sex-live. I wanted this. Rogue with some men sniffing around her, and Logan jealous.

PLEASE, UPDATE IT SOON!

Iīm sorry about my sucking-english. Iīm spanish.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the feedback. I am really glad to see that you decided to read this little fic. The whole thing with Rogue is that she's slowly healing. She hasn't let go of what has happened with the rape yet, but she's on her way. She's still kind of running from it. There will be more on it later, though. She will have to confront what she has had to go through. The whole thing with havok is that, even though she went to him easily, it will ultimately be essential in her healing process once she gets to that point. She's already touched on it to some extent, but, for the most part, she's trying to push the whole experience away and ignore it.rnrnWith the relationship between Victor and Rogue, it's something that I've always wanted to try. The three mutant (Rogue, Sabretooth, Logan) are so similar to me. Their personalities and how none of them hold back. Seeing as how Logan and Victor already have the hate/hate relationship, it just makes since that Rogue would be the one to bond with both men. But, no, I have made it a point from the beginning that the two feral men are not brothers. But, they do have a past together.rnrnWith Rogue and Logan, she needs to know that he's not her only option, which was why I decided on the Havok/Rogue pairing. rnrnThanks for the review. The next chapter will be up soon!

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2009 1:15:44 AM Title: returns and insinuations

I read all of it.

Very very nice.

I would love to see this one continue.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. It will be continued. I should have the next chapter ready in a couple of days, actually!

Reviewer: Cuthalion Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2009 2:19:26 AM Title: returns and insinuations

Ohhh dear. Two alpha beasts, all too ready to rip each other's throats out. Poor Havoc right in the middle of it all, a disapproving Storm and Logan, confronted with a past he doesn't even remember. I really see happy things ahead... *ironical grin*

Author's Response: I've got something special planned for Havok! As for Logan, well, he's just going to have to wait. Thanks for the review and kee reading!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2009 1:00:26 AM Title: Prologue: a cure and a scam

i got a bit stuck on MH, but i am going to power through my writer's block and post the next chapter tomorrow night. and what makes you think Scooter is the only person going to get his ass kicked in the next update. ;)

Author's Response: Yeah!!!! Can't wait for it! And I really can't wait to see who else gets their ass kicked (JEAN??? Hint)

Reviewer: Corinne Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2009 11:29:47 PM Title: Prologue: a cure and a scam

ok, Bobby can stay if he's made to suffer heh heh *wrings hands evilly*

Author's Response: Now when are you going to update mutant high? If I have to beat Bobby to a bloody pulp just so that I can read about Scooter getting his ass kicked..... Well, I am willing to make that sacrifice.

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