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[Report This]Date: 05/24/2011 10:25:15 AM Title: Chapter 3
Very intense chapter.
His thighs looked like they could hold up the weight of the sky.
It's descriptions like these that stun me. Your thought process is mind-boggling.
Like I said, very intense chapter - you explained the relationship he had with Jean with such clarity, I never hated her as much as I did reading about how she strung him along. The silk boxers? Wow. What. A. Bitch.
Poor Marie - a real Jekyl and Hyde moment with Logan at the end! :)
Author's Response: Logan is going to have to work on that Jekyl and Hyde thing, he has to learn he must think before he reacts when it comes to Marie, but sad to say we aren't there yet.
[Report This]Date: 04/12/2010 11:02:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
good job Logan, just scare the shit outta her why don't ya!
YAY Jean hating commencing, love it. that silly red bitch really needs to stay dead for once.
$10 says when he comes back Marie is all sorts of freaked out or even took off running.
update soon, this story is awesome!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Chapter 6 just went up and I would love to know what you think.
Date: 03/25/2010 6:13:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
this needs to be updated sometime soon. it's too wonderful to leave unfinished
Author's Response: Chapter 4 went up tonight. I am hoping to have 5 done by the end of the month. It is all pretty much mapped out at this point, 2/3s of it are outlined, some with fully developed scenes so it is coming along. I fully intend to finish it.
[Report This]Date: 03/02/2010 12:54:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
Why did you stop updating? I love this story. You HAVE to write more. My mental stability depends on it. (so hurry because it's slipping every day) xXx
Author's Response: I got stuck, really stuck, but I have resolved it or at least I think so. The problem was in a scene from several chapters from now mucked with my timeline as mentioned in chapter 3 so I had to reconcile the two. I just couldn't get the later scene to lay right. We wrestled for awhile but I think I won. We will see how everyone enjoys it.
[Report This]Date: 02/13/2010 4:28:43 PM Title: Chapter 3
Just reread your wonderful story and still awaiting the next chapter. Please update soon.
Author's Response: I just posted chapter 4, I hope you are still interested. Chap 5 should be along much quicker.
Date: 11/27/2009 8:49:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
I really, really hope you are busy writing the next update to rhis story. It is my absolute favorite WIP right now and I can't hardly wait to see where it goes.
Author's Response: I am flattered that I am a favorite, I hope that is true after all of this time.
Date: 10/13/2009 3:57:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
Ah, the ubiquitous OOC Bitch!Jean. I'd forgotten that this was going to be that sort of story. As I've never understood W/R fandom's vitriolic hatred for Jean, nor the bizarre love of seeing her written OOC, I'm afraid this is where we part ways. Still, the first two chapters were hot, and I'm glad I got to read them.
Good luck with the rest of the story!
Author's Response: I am sorry to hear we will be parting ways. There will be fewer mentions of Jean until we get to the mansion at least and that won't be for a while yet. (And in my own defense, the ubiquitous bitch!Jean is Logan's impression right now, but that doesn't mean that is all that there is). rnrnTruely though, I will feely admit I have hated Jean long before I ever became a W/R girl. Jean always struck me as spoiled little Bezzatch who never appreciated what she had and whine way too much about what she did have so needless to say I loved the idea I could openly hate Jean in the W/R world (and I learned to write it from Terri). But to each his own and I appreciate your feedback all the same. Thank you for the well wishes.
Date: 10/13/2009 12:37:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
This is great. Really good. Perfect in my opinion.
Author's Response: Hope you like chapter 4 just as much.
Date: 10/08/2009 11:02:49 PM Title: Chapter 3
He's really not handling her right, but then, this BS from outta nowhere with Jean is a TOTAL bitch to deal with.
Author's Response: No, he didn't handle her right, did he? Now he has to deal with the consequenes. Logan hasn't quite recognized the responsibilities of his role in this relationship yet, but see how he does in chapter 4 and let me know what you think.
Date: 10/08/2009 3:09:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
Okay firstly - I love, love love and adore that you are contnuing on Kristine's story. It's one of my favs, and I love the idea of a darker Logan. Loving it - and cannot wait to see more.
Only concrit is that you need to watch for typos - your grammer and flow are great, but I noticed a few times you'd use 'ascent' instead of 'assent', or 'beat' when you needed 'beet', stuff like that - spellcheck doesn't pick up on. So keep an eye out for them. If you need someone else to look it over besides your beta - I've betaed a bit for W/R stories and a lot on others, let me know!
Can't wat for the next part - so going on my favorites, haha.
Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback. I have gone back through the entire story and looked for the flipped words as I call them. Hopefully I have gotten them all. If you are still up for a quick beta check I am shooting to have chapter 5 up but the end of the month is you have time and are still interested please drop me a note. I would love the help.
Date: 10/06/2009 5:01:21 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love this. You write so descriptively, I feel like I’m right there in the room!
Author's Response: That is what I strive for - to give you the visual of the entire story. Let me know what you think of chapter 4 if you can.
[Report This]Date: 10/06/2009 12:55:05 PM Title: Chapter 3
o o o , how long before next chapter? :D
Author's Response: Too long and for that I apologize but it is here now.
[Report This]Date: 10/06/2009 11:51:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
Excellent as always. xXx
Author's Response: Thanks
Date: 10/06/2009 11:29:42 AM Title: Chapter 3
Ooh. I like the development here. And I also like the changes you made to the previous chapter. They're subtle but enough to steer it back nicely just off the edge of dub-con. Their relationship makes that bit more sense to me now. It's still hot and dark but not so one-sided, which goes a long way to making Logan's character just that tiny (but important) bit more sympathetic.
Good stuff. Looking forward to finding out how Logan's abrupt and rather grumpy departure plays out.
Author's Response: I am very happy to hear your comments. Making sure chapter 2 wasn't over the edge was important to me. This Logan and Maire's relationship will always be a complex and non traditional one but at its center will be things we all recognize. Again, thank you for the feedback.
Date: 10/06/2009 9:25:44 AM Title: Chapter 3
Still loving this!seriously you can't do enough Jean-bashing in my book!But I admit to severe Jean-issues.not sure I can wait til the end of the month for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Chapter 6 is up, it is Jean bashing free but there is just a bit of smut!
Date: 10/06/2009 5:19:35 AM Title: Chapter 3
Logan, what took you so long to figure out what we all know allready : Jean Grey is a bitch. Heh...Can't wait for the two of them to come face to face.
Author's Response: Oh face to face is going to be fun don't fret.
Date: 10/06/2009 4:13:39 AM Title: Chapter 3
Most def a Bad!Jean here and a very confused Marie too.
Author's Response: Let me know what you think of Marie's confusion in chapter 5, I would love to hear what you think.
[Report This]Date: 10/06/2009 12:11:32 AM Title: Chapter 3
ooooh, Jean is such a BITCH! love it!
can't wait for the next update!
Date: 10/05/2009 11:25:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
oh wow, and the plot thickens. Awesome chapter, I just luv the insight and that moment of clairity for Wolverine. I wonder what's going on in Marie's head after his feeling. Hope to read an update soon, again awesome chapter!!!
Author's Response: Chapter 4 went up last night, I hope you are still interested. Thank you for the review.
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2009 10:22:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
That poor girl is never going to get a meal. Great chapter.
Author's Response: She does end up waiting quite a while doesn't she?
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2009 10:07:25 PM Title: Chapter 3
That poor kid has to be ten kinds of confused. I am thoroughly loving this story. I love your take on Jean's lone from X2 about flirting with the bad boy but going home with the boyscout. I never liked her much either. Abuse away. (I kinda like my characters battered and bruided up a bit.)
~Mia
Author's Response: Mia - Thank you for the review, they are still battered and bruised in chapter 5 (I think they will stay that way for the forseeable future) so let know what you think of a glimpse of Logan's past.
Date: 10/05/2009 9:54:15 PM Title: Chapter 3
Yay for the Bitchy!Jean. I've become such a fan of that, and I love the way you've written her as a sort of twisted conniving character, just stringing poor Logan around.
Oh goody! More upset Marie, me thinks. Or at least conflicted Marie. With the way Logan's acting, and how she's got to be confused with everything that's going on, add in the fact that he got pissed because of the shampoo issue, and when he comes back he's pissed as hell. Wooo-Eeeee. That's just going to be a big bucket load of trouble.
And I can't wait for that bucket to tip it's contents over and bathe them in it's angsty-ness.
>:3
Author's Response: Marie has definitely got a long road ahead of her and Logan doesn't always make it easy, does he? I am glad you are a fan of bitch!Jean, she just begs to be written that way in my opinion.