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Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2010 12:31:57 AM Title: Chapter 5

WOWW!!!!! So THRILLED to see this updated! Lots of heavy thinking on Logan's part here, glad to see that, he had some serious f-ups to get thru and figure out. I think he's on the right track now.
And WHOA!!! Such nice smut too!! Gotta love these 2 for 1 deals...Logan's finally getting his sh*t together AND we get great sex!! FANTASTIC!!

Author's Response: Ct - I am glad to hear you see Logan as back on track, he does do some major decisioning here. We have more decisions coming but I am glad I was able to convey the subtle changes occuring in him. One of the primary things I promised myself with this story is that the conection between these two, as people, wouldn't be instant, that it would have to grow and be nutured, so I am really glad you saw the beginnings of that, cause I tried to drop the seeds in this chapter. Hurrah! Thanks for the feedback.

Reviewer: Amoraluv Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2010 2:32:41 AM Title: Chapter 4

totally hot but grammar is off in some places.

Author's Response: Thanks for pointing out the grammer issues, I have corrected them and chapter 5 is up if you are still interested.

Reviewer: annie77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2010 6:58:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

LOVE this dominating logan, specially when he's tender with Marie and takes care of her. And Im also very fond on the way Marie seems to need at the same time the protection of logan and how she tries to please him even when he acts as an asshole sometimes. This is so kinky and exiting lol I love your story please update soon!!!

Author's Response: Annie - I FINALLY got chapter 5 up so please please let me know what you think of their dynamic at this point. They make progress...or do they? Thanks so much for the feedback you have nailed some of the complexity in which they find themselves - need vs want vs survival.

Reviewer: dulcesweet Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2010 12:11:52 PM Title: Chapter 4

great chapter this is really a fav!!! I can't wait to read more chapters. and I really don't like Jean I hope that she get's hers!!!!!

Author's Response: Don't worry, Dulcesweet, there are interesting things in store for Jean when Logan gets home. Chapter 5 is up, have fun.

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2010 12:34:15 AM Title: Chapter 4

yays. cant wait for next chappie. i almost forgot about this story

Author's Response: Thanks for hanging in, RL kicks my ass pretty regularly so I just got chapter 5 up, but let me know how you enjoy it.

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2010 11:41:37 PM Title: Chapter 4

AHHHHHHHHHHHH! my reaction when I saw that this story was updated. I read this a while ago and the premise kept floating around in my head for a while. Hard one to let go (I wonder why, wink wink). Anyway, I liked the exposition in this chapter. While just about everyone here would sell their souls for Rogan smutty goodness (sounds like a candy filling of some sort) it was important to see into the dynamic of their relationship that doesn't involve sexin'. Especially true with Marie's past. I'm rambling: in conclusion I love this story and I love that you're back!

Author's Response: Sahara - I had meant to respond to your review earlier. Thank you for the wonderful feedback. Chapter 5 is up and there is a bit about Logan's past in this one and...well...I have to say it...SEX!! :)

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2010 11:02:34 PM Title: Chapter 3

good job Logan, just scare the shit outta her why don't ya!

YAY Jean hating commencing, love it. that silly red bitch really needs to stay dead for once.

$10 says when he comes back Marie is all sorts of freaked out or even took off running.

update soon, this story is awesome!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Chapter 6 just went up and I would love to know what you think.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2010 10:41:33 PM Title: Chapter 2

jesus, that was loooooong and exciting. whew, more smut in this one chapter than in about 5 other stories put together!

god, he's a sexy control freak!

Author's Response: Glad you like it. Chapter 6 has a few bits you might find enjoyable as well!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2010 9:58:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

oooohhhh, that made me shiver. i love a dominating Logan.

not to be TMI, but i'm kinda a control freak dominate myself and this kinda gives me idea for the next poor sap i date LOL!

Author's Response: Corinne - Oh honey you want ideas let me turn you on to some really good NCIS fanfiction - her name is Chirgul and she is on fanfiction.net. If you love dominating Logan, you will really love dominating Gibbs. Read all of Chirgul's Sir/Little Tease stories, hot, hot, hot. BTW, do you think Logan and Marie need a safe word? Any thoughts would be appreciated.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2010 8:59:18 PM Title: Chapter 4

Oh yes...MAJOR Jean issues...she deserves whatever he does to her in later chapters.
And, YES, a MAJOR "f" up with Marie, lots of apologizing and making up ahead...Dom/sub issues all aside, he NEEDS to make this right, PERIOD!

Author's Response: CT_Xfan - I agree that Logan has to make things right but he isn't quite sure what 'right' is or how to get there. Basically 'right' might have to bite Logan in the ass before he gets it. :) Hang in there and let me know if you think he makes any progress in chapter 5. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Elliesmeow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2010 8:43:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

I do indeed. I'm well familiar with Bad!Jean via Terri's works.LOL I hope she'll get what's coming to her.

Surprised that Xavier has no clue at all what the woman gets up to. You'd think he'd keep a fairly close watch on the situations involving Logan, since he's so important and vulnerable due to his amnesia and PTSD.

Oh well. Post more soon?

Author's Response: Elliesmeow - Never underestimate the Professor. I will tell you one of my things about fics with Xavier is that he doesn't seem as powerful or as informed as he should be (or he is the bad guy, which I don't mind but anyway) so don't count our good Charles out of this one. And Logan is never all that far from Charles's mind, never fear.

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2010 6:31:15 PM Title: Chapter 4

This story is so great. Just when I start Hating Logan for being a fucking douche-bag he does shit to basically negate his douche-factor. And I feel so sorry for Marie... oh lord.

Author's Response: Yeah Marie's not had a good time recently. We will hear more of that story shortly. I am glad you see that Logan isn't a total douche. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Solidae Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2010 6:09:06 PM Title: Chapter 4

Yay! Glad you came back. Thanks!

Author's Response: Thank you, glad you are still enjoying it.

Reviewer: Elliesmeow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2010 5:29:35 PM Title: Chapter 4

Wow, I'm glad you're back. I'm glad Logan saw what game Jean was playing with him and relaized exactly how much influence he has with Marie. Both good and bad.

I hope he'll be more considerate now that he doesn't have to worry about steeling himself against Jean. That ship has sailed, and sunk spectacularly, like the Titanic.;)

Can't wait to see how his homecoming will go. But preferably after he and Marie are a tight unit. He may be aware of the mind-fuckery Jean engages in, but Marie is not prepared for it.

Thanks for the new chapter. Hope we'll see another one soon!

-Ellie

Author's Response: Ellie - Thank you for the review. Logan has a bit to learn still and Jean well - she is Jean so you know how that goes. :)

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2010 4:55:03 PM Title: Chapter 4

:-D YAY!!! xXx

Author's Response: :) thank you

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2010 2:27:15 PM Title: Chapter 4

More Please! I was so happy to check this site and see that you had updated! My computer is down so I've been without my regular Rogan fix for days! It was almost worth it to be able to finally get more of your terrific story!

Author's Response: Thanks, hope your computer is fixed soon and don't fret I am hoping to have another chapter up by the end of the month.

Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2010 12:12:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

so happy you are continuing this.

love the concept and of course an evil jean to boot.

i do agree with anami, however, that i hope he falls head over heels for her.

cause if not and their relationship goes on this way, she is still just a prisoner.

can't wait for the next update. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback, I am having a wonderful time trying to determine just where Logan's feelings will lead us. Let me know what you think of chapter 5.

Reviewer: Geeves Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2010 11:14:53 AM Title: Chapter 4

Well I'm very glad you continued this story. I must admit I have been waiting for this update forever but now I hope they will come more frequently.

Good chapter. Things that needed to be said...but I hope for some more smut....smut is good

Author's Response: Smut is on the way have no fear. I have a smut checklist for this one. I hadn't really thought I would go two chapters with no smut. I will make it up to you next time - promise!

Reviewer: jnet Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2010 8:13:11 AM Title: Chapter 4

oh hell yah finally! phew. damn good thing he was able to start fixing what he was just starting to build with her.

Author's Response: yeah, he has some more work to do, they won't just fall in love here, they have to have trust first. Logan made a good start.

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2010 6:48:45 AM Title: Chapter 4

As good as this story is I would very much like for Logan to fall for her, heart and soul ( I think you have the body part covered). But I don't think it's in the near future. So I'll just keep reading this great story of yours.

Author's Response: Thank you for your feedback, I too would like to see them fall for each other, but they have a bit of work to do to get there. Latch on to the fact I hate to read angst and don't know that I could ever write it, so I believe you will get your wish but it may take some doing.

Reviewer: replaying Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2010 6:13:40 PM Title: Chapter 3

this needs to be updated sometime soon. it's too wonderful to leave unfinished

Author's Response: Chapter 4 went up tonight. I am hoping to have 5 done by the end of the month. It is all pretty much mapped out at this point, 2/3s of it are outlined, some with fully developed scenes so it is coming along. I fully intend to finish it.

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2010 12:54:22 PM Title: Chapter 3

Why did you stop updating? I love this story. You HAVE to write more. My mental stability depends on it. (so hurry because it's slipping every day) xXx

Author's Response: I got stuck, really stuck, but I have resolved it or at least I think so. The problem was in a scene from several chapters from now mucked with my timeline as mentioned in chapter 3 so I had to reconcile the two. I just couldn't get the later scene to lay right. We wrestled for awhile but I think I won. We will see how everyone enjoys it.

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2010 9:17:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

Seriously, going into withdrawal waiting for updates. Anything I can do to help?( waves cattle prod) Nothing in RL could possibly be as important as this story!

Author's Response: Taminsnead - Thanks for the nuggle the other day, I finished chapter 5 the day you emailed me and started typing chapter 6 so never fear we will get there. I is afraid of the cattle prod! :)

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2010 4:28:43 PM Title: Chapter 3

Just reread your wonderful story and still awaiting the next chapter. Please update soon.

Author's Response: I just posted chapter 4, I hope you are still interested. Chap 5 should be along much quicker.

Reviewer: blah39 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2010 7:52:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

Please update soon. I loved "Anything" as well and was thrilled when I found this. Very good extension of the original one-shot. Hope you post soon, I'm really curious as to how the inhabitants of the mansion react to the relationship.

Author's Response: We will get to the mansion but not just yet. There is much for Logan and Marie to figure out about themselves first. Chapter 4 is up now so please provide your impressions both positive and negative as to where they have ended up at the end of the new chapter.

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