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Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2009 11:58:15 AM Title: Closer

Damn. Wasn't actually expecting that. The girl is unbreakable isn't she. I kinda want to marry her. I also kinda want to run away from her screaming and peeing on myself. Thank you for the ...ride.

~Mia

Author's Response: you should run from this version of Rogue, she is messed up and evil. but it's not over yet. i've finally gotten the epilogue/next chapter (who knows?) sorted in my head and it will be up in the next few days, by the end of the weekend definitely!

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2009 1:11:46 AM Title: Closer

This story leave me a little conflicted. Not because of the basic rape of a minor just because I understand that's what you were going for with the characters and the writing was good. But more so that I think the sex sort of blocks some of the potential of this story, speaking of the idea of this being the last chapter.

There were a few places that you mentioned things like Rogue's issues with Juggernaut where Logan had an interesting reaction to it, given their reactions to each other. Things like that I would have liked to see deeper into but now I'm not sure they could go there, given what just happened.

Anywho. Writing was wonderful. I'm a Rogue girl so I'm at least glad she got a good stomp it, epilogue or no.

Author's Response: thanks for the insightful feedback, definitely gives me something to think about. the next chapter will be not just Rogue getting even but along the lines of "taking it out in trade." hopefully you guys won't think i'm some monster deviant, but i'm just having so much fun with making Rogue as amoral and vicious as Logan, not something we normally see on this site.

Reviewer: Ms_H_Wallbanger Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2009 11:35:21 PM Title: Closer

O man, I am so conflicted! Part of me knows that Logan is just getting whats coming to him, but another part of me is like, 'dude, that ending is harsh!' Can't wait for the epilogue! Perhaps there will be a real round 2? :)

Author's Response: trust me, the stomping leads up to the epilogue...or maybe just the next chapter since i've got ideas for more to this story that be covered in one more episode. and yes, it was harsh and Logan totally deserved it!

Reviewer: dulcesweet Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2009 9:09:33 PM Title: Closer

wow, Sexy and naught!!!! I've already read it twice, and really really hope you write more chapters. Nasty logan has finally found his match with Rogue. I love it when Rogue gives it as bad as she gets it. Great chapter. hope to read more and soon!!!!!

Author's Response: new chapter is up now. hope you enjoy the new twist i threw in, leaves the door wide open for future chapter.s

Reviewer: silverthorne Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2009 5:29:56 PM Title: Closer

I am really getting tired of and snarked out by this bitchy, nasty, ugly depiction of characters I love. Get them together in some soulful way or destroy them as a couple of sick-hearted, soul-dead trash.

Author's Response: i'm taking this a compliment that i did a good job making them horrible people. :)

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2009 12:42:09 PM Title: Closer

Brilliant, Sexy and naught. My kinda story. love it. xXx

Author's Response: thanks! i like naughty myself!

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2009 10:31:08 AM Title: Closer

Loved this!The only thing better than a dirty,nasty Logan is a dirty,nasty Rogue! Please write this.

Author's Response: i know. it's not a side we see all that often on this site, leaves me a lot of freedom to mess with her.

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2009 10:00:17 AM Title: Closer

WOW. Really thats all I have just wow.

Author's Response: wow as i you are totally horrified or wow b/c you are secretly digging it? LOL!

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2009 6:19:22 AM Title: Closer

Love, love, LOVE this! (Does that make me a sicko??). Please do an epilogue. xx

Author's Response: nah, only if you actually wound up in a relations hip like this would you be a sicko. i was just tired of the innocent!Marie and torutured!Logan and decided to make them totally amoral and screwed up, which is what i suspect would be more likely with their dangerous powers and messed up histories like they do.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2009 3:12:09 AM Title: Closer

Just an epilogue... this need a few more chapters.

More please!

Author's Response: we'll see wheremust smutty muse takes me in the epilogue. but if i keep getting desperate please from ppl for more smexy nastiness maybe i will add more chapters. the whole Logan/Rogue hate each other but have deliciously violent sex definitely has potential for more stories. ;)

Reviewer: Epic Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2009 2:38:26 AM Title: Closer

Oooooh... you have to write the epilogue!!!!! You can't just leave it like this!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: sorry to say the epilogue won't be up for another few days as i'm going out of town...but i promise to write one next week in which Rogue gets even.

Reviewer: Sakashi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2009 1:45:12 AM Title: Closer

Oh dear lord. The Guidance Counselors daughter part of me is saying 'This isn't right, you shouldn't be reading nor endorsing anything that portrays such acts.'
The dirty little almost Sub!Pervert in me is relishing this story, saying something along the lines of 'Well, she deserved it. And I mean, really, who wouldn't submit to a man like him.' I have got to stop enjoying dub!Con so much. *g*

Author's Response: heh heh, i know the inner moralist in me also bucked against the idea of this relationship and how disturbed and sick it is, but still smexy!rnrni'm going to write an epilogue which probably makes the question of "is this a good or bad thing" even more problematic.

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