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Reviewer: jnet Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2009 11:25:31 PM Title: Reptile

i kinda liked the non-smuttiness of this chapter. though i'd never say no to more smut. ;)

its bringing a nice depth to the smut of the other chapters.

deep smut. mmm mmm good



How do you do the rating thingie? Is that what the stars are for? Does 10 = 5 stars?

Reviewer: Sakashi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2009 7:55:39 PM Title: Reptile

D'aaaawwwwww

Love at first... fight...
Yah, not such a witty comment, it sounded better in my head. [Referring to Xaviers and her fight, not R/W]
As always, I love the story, and it's good to just go with the flow of the rabid plot bunnies, they usually know what they're doing.
I love how the relationship is progressing, it's nice to get some confirmation that maybe they won't kill each other... although, that rain check comment has me a little worried, the plot bunnies could make a sick little turn further in the story.
I'm happy at the thought that maybe Rogue will settle her demons a bit, get to see that maybe not she's as diseased and evil as she thinks she is. Letting down the shields can be a good thing.
As always, you're doing a great job with the characters and the plot, and I can't wait to see where it goes from here. The possibilities are endless!

Author's Response: no worries, i have ZERO intention of letting her kill Logan. although another death had struck me as particularly fitting for this story. may not be for a few chapter but it'll happen. i was going over NIN lyrics tonight trying to find the right one for the next chapter and 2-3 of them inspired me for ore plot development. so much for my 4 chapters idea! the next chappie will be up Thursday night. i find promising you guys the date of the next update makes me accountable for the deadline LOL!

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2009 3:19:02 PM Title: Reptile

This chapter was beautifully written and I love the whole scene on the shore. It’s a perfectly placed ‘pause for breath’ before more of the hard stuff. Brilliant. x

Author's Response: Thanks! now finish breathing and get back to work on "Dare Me" woman!

Reviewer: Ella Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2009 1:32:11 PM Title: Reptile

I agree with everyone else's comments. This story has been dark and sensual, but somewhere along the line they started to feel for each other. It's inevitable. There is something amazingly compatible between those two: his inner beast, her being 'poison'. But, their never-ending sense of loyalty and honor - isn't that what makes us love Rogan pairings so much? At the end of it all, it’s Wolverine and Rogue, and then the rest of them. Good job, keep going!

Author's Response: thanks! their compatibility was something i couldn't get away from, that if two people like this existed in real life they would both be tortured sods with screwed up outlooks on life, only Wolverine might be more mature about the struggle Rogue is going through, having been there himself and still fighting it every day.
rnrnnow i just need to figure out where the heck to go from here LOL!

Reviewer: freelke Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2009 12:13:56 PM Title: Reptile

WOW! that took my breath away. I think it was refreshing to have some real emotional issues after everything else. I look forward to see their dynamic change in the next chapters. Really beautiful story as always!

Author's Response: thanks! i was so unsure about this new tone to their relationship, but they pulled me inextricably to something more genuine and less brutal than before. i like it, but have to admit i am soooo stumped right now where they will go from here. I was enjoying the evilness, so now I have to figure out how to keep that hard edge going even though they're changing.rn

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2009 11:35:45 AM Title: Reptile

Their first real kiss...maybe they will eventually both win at this game. Loved this chapter, even though you said all this patience and gentleness won't last forever. It's sort of like a moment of comic relief in a really suspenseful movie; you have to have that now and then to break the tension, in order to be able to build it back up again, 'cause its the up-and-down, up-and-down, that makes the roller coaster ride so much fun. -- Wendie

Author's Response: whew! glad someone felt this chapter wasn't some weird fluke after all that angst and evil. i like the way you said it. yeh, i just needed to cut some of the ever rising tension before someone died or something LOL!

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2009 9:09:39 AM Title: Reptile

I love this chapter. They're both finally beginning to learn. xXx

Author's Response: yeh, at some point there had to be something under all that bitterness and lust or they'd really be as another reviewer put it "soul dead trash."

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2009 7:20:11 AM Title: Reptile

Awwww those two can be so nice if they want to.

Author's Response: yeh, but nice apparently only when they've been drive near to the point of self-destruction.

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