Reviews For Who's the man?
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Reviewer: askita Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2009 10:03:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

LOL, this was awesome. Great stuff. Congrats, btw, 2nd Person is hard to do sometimes.

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review :) Doesn't matter which way I write it's all hard for me!!! [more of a reader than a writer] I can spend ages rearranging 1 line let alone doing the whole thing! I know what you mean, 2nd person doesn't always work and can be annoying to read so I'm glad you enjoyed it x

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2009 5:14:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

Yes!!! "Yummy" is the perfect word to describe this little goodie!!!

Author's Response: I really should get rid of my dirty little mind putting yummy and goodie[s] in the same sentence was lethal! Afore mentioned dirty little mind instantly added the extra letter as I read! Thanks for fb glad you enjoyed, sweet dreams of yummy goodies!!!

Reviewer: JaqofSpades Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2009 6:03:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it. Need 3000 words more, but ... what a yummy little tidbit!

Author's Response: Knew from the start this wasn't going to be a story as such only a little snippet, but as I said before I do think there's room for a series of little scenes like this but I'd have trouble with the last one [cause they'd have to get 'down and dirty' if you get my drift and doing it and writing it are two completely different things!] who knows though, never say never. Thanks for fb x

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2009 12:22:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Chocolate teapot? Now, who could that be? Sweet.

Author's Response: Based on the films rather than the comics so that should give you a clue [would it help if I said it was a frozen chocolate teapot?] though I don't think it really matters for this little scene - pick you're least favourite and away you go! Thanks for the review x

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2009 4:48:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

I dig this, a lot. It took me until the last line to get why you wrote in second person, a very unusual--and sometimes annoying--voice for most stories. But for this, a very short story, it works perfectly. Nice job.


Author's Response: I agree with the sometimes annoying part it doesn't always work, [although there are some great writers on here that can pull anything off puting the rest of us to shame!] I just keep on trying, was toying with the idea of making this a series but I'd just have to finish with some serious *action* and when I attempt that It's Bad [notice the capitol B!!!] I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks for taking the time to review [lightningly quick I might add!!]

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