The Wolverine & Rogue Fanfiction Archive
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Date: 02/01/2010 7:42:52 PM Title: Games
Wow, your story is pitch perfect. It's sexy, sweet, funny and just a phenomenal read!!! You've done a fantastic job depicting the characters and life at the Mansion. Please update soon! It feels like forever since your last chapter. Sorry, I'm very impatient when I'm hooked on a fantastic story. ;)
Author's Response: yeh, i know its been over 2 weeks insce my last update. i have the idea for this chapter and was sitting down to work on it tonight, but something wasn't working...then inspiration struck. so the next chapter will be up tonight or tomorrow evening at the latest. sorry for making you wake. this chapter will get us moving towards the end of the story, i had to throw in a couple of chapter of fluff just for fun, but one reader rightly pointed out they were concerned the story was losing focus. so back to the real plot!
[Report This]Date: 01/24/2010 3:51:50 AM Title: Games
great story. great characters. Plot, however, is losing focus.
Author's Response: yeh, it has. i promise the next chapter will get it back on track. gotta bring back Mutant Underground naturally. gonna be at least 2 HUUUUGE fights...and some smoochies too of course!
Date: 01/20/2010 12:32:27 PM Title: Games
I’m loving reading your explorations around the mansion. Great chapter, love the chaos, it reminds me of my life. :-)
“What do you want, hairy?” – hahaha!
Author's Response: the chaotic life of a kid *sigh* i'd trade my chaotic adult life for that one any day! except the whole being in high school stuff!
Date: 01/20/2010 11:02:32 AM Title: Games
I like Poitr. He's a big metal teddy bear with a good sense of humor. Mutant Dodgeball. Man I'd play more sports if they were mutant related.
Author's Response: me too, especially dodgeball! god, that was the best game ever and now ppl are trying to drive it out of our schools. grr.
[Report This]Date: 01/20/2010 7:49:49 AM Title: Games
Stupid bobby. poohead. xXx
Author's Response: yeh, he totallly is a poohead XO
Date: 01/20/2010 3:49:52 AM Title: Games
I really dig all the attention you are paying to the whole motley crew, not just Wolverine and Rogue. Great job of showing the subtle changes in Cyke and Wolvie's attitudes toward each other. It ain't exactly a lovefest, but a level of detente seems to have been reached. I love the group action, but I'm looking forward to more of 'Wolvie's head' as he suffers the frustration of the next chapter. --Wendie
Author's Response: thanks! i was beginning to think i was neglecting pyro and his basketball dreams and the other students a bit, so i had to give me a few minutes in the sun so to speak. next chapter should be up in a few days.
Date: 01/19/2010 11:19:14 PM Title: Games
I love this bit of fluff and hopefully the Professor is getting ideas for the danger room and the team. The way you wrote the kids coming together and the developing relationship between Wolverine and Cyke is really well done and feels very natural. Well done as always.
Author's Response: welllll, i don't know if the prof is ready to unleash these kids in the DR considering how much damage they do during to the yard recess but we'll see ;) and thanks for the compliment on Cyke and Wolverine, yeh they drive each other nuts but they can't hate each other forever...OR CAN THEY? *cue ominous music*
[Report This]Date: 01/19/2010 10:03:05 PM Title: Games
Oh the mayhem. Great to see you back.
Author's Response: thanks! i think in a school of kids, who are usually out of control impulse driven maniacs even w/out superpowers, mayhem would be the norm.