Reviews For Breathing
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Reviewer: MandaEvelyn Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2010 9:56:09 AM Title: Breathing

I'm a sucker for a happy ending. Loved this one. That last paragraph was fantatic. Very moving.

Reviewer: justanji Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2010 3:48:16 AM Title: Breathing

This one is nice and I like, but I liked the sad one better! Keep writing!!

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2009 4:54:38 AM Title: Breathing

My heart warmed at this alternative ending. Nice little piece of writing. xx

Author's Response: Thank you very much! =)

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2009 8:20:51 PM Title: Breathing

i love the original and the alternate. nothing like a sad, angsty ending to get me ready for a happy one!

Author's Response: Hehe! Yes, angst is good - but I'm a sucker for happy endings too. Thank you for your comment. =)

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2009 6:59:11 AM Title: Breathing

*sigh* Oh yeah, MUCH better!! Couldn't get to that "alternate ending" fast enough. The first one was good, heartwrenching, but good; this is shippery goodness, and as we all know, that's just SOOOO much better!!

Author's Response: oh... thank you! =) glad you enjoyed them.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2009 5:56:12 AM Title: Breathing

Oh, much better! Much, much better! Not that the first story is bad, mind you, but this outcome is definitely the one I prefer. Don't you just love death-defying mutant powers? --Wendie

Author's Response: Yes, and I love that Logan & Marie's powers compliment each other so well. Thank you for your comment. =D

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