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Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2011 3:37:49 PM Title: Everything is Fading

I have missed this. Don't judge me for that.

~Mia

Author's Response: lol, I would never judge you!!! I'm so glad that you took the time to start reading the story. I will try not to go so long without updated! The story WILL be finished! :)

Reviewer: Shuttlelauncher Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2011 8:55:46 PM Title: Everything is Fading

Wow! What a great chapter! The whole Jason manipulation totally surprised me. I'm really glad your back with this and I look forward to more updates soon. This was a very emotional chapter...great job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the comment! So glad that you liked the Jason scene. I did too, lol! It's good to be back. I forgot how much I enjoyed writing this story and I have more things in store for our two favorite love birds.

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2011 12:49:48 AM Title: Everything is Fading

Hey, welcome back! It was great to see that you updated this! I really liked this chapter. Nice little twist with Jason manipulating her mind to try to get her to reveal Logan's whereabouts. I didn't piece that together until Jason/Logan started to really push her for info. Disturbing that Magneto and Logan had a similar bad dream about her too. I hope they can find her but I'm afraid of what condition she'll be in if/when they do. I'm looking forward to your next update!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks so much for the review! Yeah, the Jason manipulation plot actually wrote itself. I was writing an actual scene with Marie and the Logan in her head, something kinda sweet and then the next thing I know, Jason makes an appearance. It was totally weird, lol!! Magneto and Logan's dream was kinda showing symbolism that the part of them in Marie was destroyed, don't know if that came across like that. They will find her, and soon...but we will have to see what state she is in! The next chapter will be up this week, hopefully Tuesday!! Thanks again.

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