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[Report This]Date: 05/05/2013 5:17:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
"I am...gimme one second. Go on, got something to take care of." Love Logan when he's focused on fulfilling a promise ;-)
Another awesome story. Hope to see more from you in the future. Please!!!
Date: 07/06/2011 10:32:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was just chilling and perfect. I love the outsider's perspective given by the POV. Really, really good. I look forward to digging into more of your stories . . . If I ever get the time /sigh :)
Date: 04/01/2010 8:39:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Deadly beautiful.
Date: 01/06/2010 4:25:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
OOOOOoooooooooo nnooooooooo!!!! This was perfect!! Absolutely flippin' PERFECT!!!
"They were the last thing she ever saw."
Date: 01/05/2010 4:23:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like the atmosphere you set, especially when Genna came face-to-face with Logan. The way you describe him looking her up and down and how uncomfortable it made her feel - “His expression was filled with contempt, like she was the worthless one.” – was great!
I’d love to read the same scene written through Logan’s POV? x
Author's Response: First, I would like to thank everyone who has reviewed. You have no idea how ecstatic it made me. When I saw them, I did a Happy Dance-not an easy thing, as I was sitting down at the time. It probably looked like I was having a siezure. rn Thank you for the wonderful constructive criticism. I contemplated each one seriously. I know there were a few...what's the word?...uncertainties concerning the motivations behind other characters, and that was on purpose. I wanted to restrict the POV to the nurse's character, instead of the all-knowing third person.rn....I hadn't considered writing a sequel, or the story from another POV, but now that sounds kinda interesting...I can't get the idea out of my head.rnSo-hope you don't mind my rambling, once again: thankyouthankyouthankyou!
Date: 01/05/2010 11:48:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
I hope her ending was tidy and effective. I know she would appreciated it. Nice one.
[Report This]Date: 01/05/2010 3:20:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
I thought the details of the nurse's life and how you clearly painted a picture were very well written but would have liked to hear that amount of detail coming from Logan's noggin and especially during the dialogue between him and Rogue. Really liked when Logan said "Is that so?"-- sounded very loganish ;-) Will there be a second part, maybe a post mission with a debriefing? As I really liked this form of the rolo combo. Keep writing!
Date: 01/04/2010 10:06:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
The character of the nurse was very clearly drawn and I liked the dialogue between Logan and Rogue. But if and/or why Rogue was not supposed to be going on missions was not very clear. It seemed like she was happy he asked her to go to Canada with him, but she also seemed perturbed that he was overly worried about her being on this mission. And it felt like there was a rather large piece of plot missing.
We got to see how orderly Nurse Genna was and that she clearly hated mutants, but we didn't get to see why Logan felt it necessary to spike her when his 'undercover' mission was apparently to sniff out the location of this 'lab' and rescue the mutant prisoners/patients. He'd only been there a day. What could he have seen that warranted such drastic measures? Or did I miss something? I see a lot of potential here. You handle dialogue well and your descriptions of the nurse and her quirks are riveting. I hated her guts almost instantly, due entirely to your painstaking detailed description; I just didn't think we were given enough information to justify Logan killing her. --Wendie
[Report This]Date: 01/04/2010 9:52:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
woo hoo, gut that bitch!
whoops, did i say that out loud? LOL!
Date: 01/04/2010 9:31:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was very awesome. Just great! I'm looking forward to more from you. Wonderful job!