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Reviewer: Corgio Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2019 6:57:17 AM Title: A New Thing On Earth

I’ve always loved this story. Read it So many times over the years. Such a well written favorite.

Reviewer: CzarinaKristi Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2015 3:04:11 AM Title: A New Thing On Earth

Freaking awesome! 😙

Reviewer: jessness Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2014 7:26:17 PM Title: A New Thing On Earth

This story is beautiful. I think it realistically portrays the way Logan and Marie would develop their relationship. I think you do an excellent job writing from the perspective of multiple characters. I could immediately tell who was speaking because of the character's strong voice. One of my absolute favorites!

Author's Response: I'm sorry to be so late responding--did not see this till now! Thank you very much for the kind words!

Reviewer: FaythBrady Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2012 6:25:55 PM Title: A New Thing On Earth

Perfect. Just... no words

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2011 4:15:52 AM Title: A New Thing On Earth

Fantastic! I loved it!

Reviewer: JadeFeonix Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2011 6:39:37 PM Title: A New Thing On Earth

Absoulute love for you right now....thats all i can say...well except that speech....and the one expalining that speech...you know what imma shut up now ;3

Author's Response: Holy cow, what a slew of wonderful comments! Thanks so much, you made my day!

Reviewer: JadeFeonix Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2011 6:23:50 PM Title: When I Awake

wow steamy, sexy without being real graphic. Nice. Its hard to do that.

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Date: 05/22/2011 5:26:18 PM Title: Many Waters

steamy ;3

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Date: 05/22/2011 5:22:38 PM Title: The Conviction Of Things Not Seen

Wow...never read a story from Pictors point of view. Very interesting. He seems very wise

Reviewer: JadeFeonix Signed star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2011 5:01:49 PM Title: Strength Out Of Weakness

Jeeze you almost make me want to LIKE scott! How dare you lol! but pretty good chapter. You don't hear a lot of things from Scotts perspective around here. But yea nice chapter

Reviewer: JadeFeonix Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2011 4:56:29 PM Title: By His Wounds

SUPER DUPER powerful this one is. The force you have....for wirting powerful stuff! Man if your writing was crak...i'd be an addict lol

Reviewer: JadeFeonix Signed star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2011 4:39:56 PM Title: A Vision In The Temple

Yay you finally tell us what the three portaits were! Im so happy! they were nothing i thought of :3 which makes me happy even more so! Awesomely Awesome chapter.

Reviewer: JadeFeonix Signed star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2011 4:34:32 PM Title: Strive To Enter

i dont hate you! i wub you lol. it was a good chapter, it seemed as if her anger was almost wolverine calbur angry but yea luv ya ;3

Reviewer: JadeFeonix Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2011 4:27:39 PM Title: Tarry Till I Come

Yay! Logan :3 but wow never heard anyone write Jubes they way you have. Every one else writes her as either a slut, bimbo or just plain unpleasant!

Reviewer: JadeFeonix Signed star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2011 4:21:26 PM Title: When The Bow Is In The Clouds

Another good chapter...liked hearing about some of the paintings!

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Date: 05/22/2011 4:12:22 PM Title: A Vision Of The Night

Nice chapter...Im guessing that one of the portaits was of Logan. But i really wish you wouldve said lol that kills me to let my imagination wander so carlessly

Reviewer: JadeFeonix Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2011 4:08:02 PM Title: My Father's Mansion

Another powerful chapter. not as powerful as the last but this has its own type of power. This has the power of pain, loss, and so many more deeper emotions. the imagry is blindingly beautiful yet dark. I feel for Rogue more in this chapter than i think i ever have. Bravo. Bravo.

Reviewer: JadeFeonix Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2011 3:48:05 PM Title: Has The Rain A Father?

Wow...just wow. Even though there isn't much in the action department this is a very POWERFUL chapter. I-I don't know if i can really describe it. This chapter is possibly one of your best (that i've read) in terms of...well proffesional quality (sorry if i spell stuff wrong...im not a strong speller), it has all the markings of an essay/story i would find in my English 102 book. As i was reading it...well lets just say it also has the feeling of coming from the character and with that all the wisdom from Charles. It also shows his sensitve side we only see glimpses of in the movies...the slight darkening of the eyes...the wrinkle of worry and doubt. This chapter was just...just amazing. I'm giving you the highest rating rite now and adding you to my favorite authors!

Reviewer: JadeFeonix Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2011 3:11:44 PM Title: Worthless Physicians Are You All

heh i dont mind that its jean only because it seems shes suffering so much. x3

Reviewer: JadeFeonix Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2011 2:21:19 AM Title: Call Me Mara

Good chapter... I kinda like angsty Rogue!

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Date: 05/22/2011 2:11:26 AM Title: Claiming To Be Wise

Oooohh pretty decent chapter. Though it seems you like Jean D: at least a little but eh i GUESS that's acceptable x3 any way good job

Reviewer: JadeFeonix Signed star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2011 2:03:02 AM Title: Yet He Bore The Sins Of Many

another great chapter and again with the awesome inserting of the movie dialogue.

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Date: 05/22/2011 1:52:13 AM Title: The Night Is Long

This is an awesome chapter love how you intergrate stuff from the movies and i love how you explained some stuff that shouldve been explained in the movie like the whole memory sucking thing that shouldve happened but they didn't show!

Reviewer: JadeFeonix Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2011 1:37:00 AM Title: A Good And Broad Land

Good chapter. Love how Logan is ANNOYED at that hoebag and not as "aroused" to put it in my own words :3 also like how you change each chapter to someone elses P.O.V

Reviewer: JadeFeonix Signed star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2011 1:25:38 AM Title: Cruel As The Grave

Good chapter...but of course i HATE Jean AND Scott. But other than that pretty good :3

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