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Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2011 3:26:00 PM Title: A Stranger In The Land

Ohh I like the way this story is going!!

Author's Response: Holy schlaMOLY, you just chugged through Scripture in a single day? Good heavens. Thank you for all the lovely comments; I'm very honored.

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2010 12:05:42 AM Title: A Stranger In The Land

o no! i LOVED the story I was asking if u had a sequel in mind. im too lazy to type. lol i really want a sequel lol

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2010 11:55:52 PM Title: A Stranger In The Land

wench?

Author's Response: It was meant fondly. As in, "This almost killed me to finish and your comment is 'sequel'? *faints*" (Or, sorry, I was trying to be jocular. No offense was intended.)

Reviewer: DarkDragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2010 8:14:55 PM Title: A Stranger In The Land

Not cool, totally NOT COOL!

You do not leave rabid rogan fans hanging like that, COME ON!

lol..but in all seriousness this series is stellar so far and needs to be updated ASPAP, real life be damned!

Author's Response: You're right. Totally and completely not cool. Mea culpa, mea maxima culpa.rnrnIt is finished. Now on to the next one...

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2010 7:41:32 PM Title: A Stranger In The Land

of course i loved this, adored it in point of fact. but where's the rest? pleeaaase?
ps glad you like my pen-name. but please, as wendie said, give us our fix...

Author's Response: The rest is here. Sorry. Can I still coax you out of your hobbit-hole?

Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2010 7:09:47 PM Title: A Stranger In The Land

First off: thank you. Thanks for taking such a wealth of time and care with your characters and settings and the small inefficient detail that make a good story better (and as an aside, whose absence makes a mediocre film worse: X3). Thanks for allowing even minor characters to be more than types, and thanks for having no simply bad nor plainly good guys.
And now, I hope you allow me to be dense: You say that this is a finished story, don't you? I think I quite get the ending, and it makes me really sad. Which is why I looked at the reviews, and there seems to be a general expectation of more to come. So... ? (I'd be very hapy if there was more!)

Author's Response: First off, thank YOU, for such a marvelous and detailed review. And you're not dense. The comment at the beginning is there because this was posted once, long ago, on another website...and stalled out at the current chapter. I mentioned it in case anyone recognized it (and one or two people did, but were nice enough not to spoil anyone else, so far as I know). It is now a finished story as in, finally finished after all this time, but no--not finished yet in terms of chapters. (And now there is one more! I hope you like it too!)

Reviewer: Rogue1189 Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2010 4:04:34 AM Title: A Stranger In The Land

I can't believe how long I've waited to submit a review for this story. I started reading this on the fourth or fifth chapter and I'm completely and utterly in love with your writing. The way you nail all the characters down to the perfect detail, the emotions, the fights, the writing.... it screams amazingness. Once I saw someone review your story saying to look on the top ten reviewed stories on WRFA I wanted to help make sure it stays number one for awhile ;)

Thank you so much for this story and for your originality. We are all waiting on tippy toes for every chapter that keeps coming our way. Even with you posting everyday I get impatient after I read a chapter haha. Anyways thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and for slogging through the whole thing! (And your help is appreciated.) More up now; more yet to come.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2010 4:39:30 AM Title: A Stranger In The Land

Well i am on at all times of the day or night. I tend to stay up all night when I am home anyway. lol Besides I am always looking for something new to read.

Author's Response: I see. Well, all I can say is I'm impressed with your speed. ;)

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2010 9:38:42 PM Title: A Stranger In The Land

its more than that actually. The movie is about kids trying to get their parents to pay attention. Its about lifting the veil to see what is behind the faces of others. To miss the obvious by not paying attention to the ones closest to you. Its an excellent movie if a bit depressing. I really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: alwayseemsudden Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2010 7:52:05 PM Title: A Stranger In The Land

damn, I really just can't get enough. everyone gets to have so much depth and texture and vitality. thank you for my daily digest of brilliance!

Author's Response: Blushing madly here. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2010 10:08:55 PM Title: A Stranger In The Land

Hey Artemis...maybe we met when the ARtemis virus infected my computer this weekend. you blew my dang hard drive up LOL!

Author's Response: Oh no! No! That wasn't me! I swear! I hope it's recovered...

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2010 8:09:54 PM Title: A Stranger In The Land

I read fast. LOL Love the fic but I still hate when Logan doesn't pick Marie first.

Reviewer: RoseSumner Signed star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2010 4:55:28 PM Title: A Stranger In The Land

Holy crap! This was shere brilliance! I can't begin to tell you how much I love your writing. Your characters are dead-on. Please write more, pretty please with cherries and cheesecake.

Reviewer: curikitten Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2010 11:31:17 AM Title: A Stranger In The Land

I reading you correctly? (/end channeling of Avenue Q's Christmas Eve)

Whee! As you are aware, I've been waiting for this story's completion for years. And now it's coming! Huzzah! O, Happy Day!

Author's Response: Yeah, I know, I know...all too aware. My apologies, and I can only hope you'll find it worth the wait. Thank you for coming back!

Reviewer: alwayseemsudden Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2010 10:58:30 AM Title: A Stranger In The Land

so much great character development every step of the way. and I love a 3D Jean Grey. makes it easy to view her as a human and not merely some hated obstacle. better reading experience this way.

Author's Response: Thank you! I think three dimensions are always better than one. G

Reviewer: alwayseemsudden Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2010 12:41:55 AM Title: A Stranger In The Land

you nailed Logan's attitude toward everything in a way that I find consistent with his character in the comics and movie if put in these circumstances. AU can be difficult but you struggle not. I can't wait to see how you develop Rogue. I'm glad you're taking your time. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: lunarkitty Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2010 12:51:38 AM Title: A Stranger In The Land

This is fabulous! Can't wait to read what's next!

Reviewer: alwayseemsudden Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2010 9:29:34 PM Title: A Stranger In The Land

deliciously painful!

Reviewer: alwayseemsudden Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2010 12:13:21 AM Title: A Stranger In The Land

fantastic! I'm a huge fan of this story so far. bring it on!

Reviewer: alwayseemsudden Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2010 12:13:11 AM Title: A Stranger In The Land

fantastic! I'm a huge fan of this story so far. bring it on!

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2010 11:32:20 PM Title: A Stranger In The Land

Abita!! Logan's drinking Abita!! :)

I love the appearence of Lynn and Toby (Artist and Fighter being some of my favorites). I am having a great time reading this particular adventure. It will be interesting to see where we go next.

Author's Response: Congratulations on spotting them again! Thanks so much for reading.

Reviewer: alwayseemsudden Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2010 8:38:07 PM Title: A Stranger In The Land

"This story starts slowly, goes slowly, has entirely too much character exploration and essentially no superhero action. Be warned."

Sounds good to me. Too many readers and writers are in too big of a hurry to have things happen lately. I like character and plot DEVELOPMENT.

Author's Response: Heh. Well, settle in. That's mostly all there is to see around here. But I hope you enjoy it!

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2010 7:13:39 PM Title: A Stranger In The Land

lol yes i get what u mean by slow, so when do they meet?

Reviewer: SummerSky Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2010 11:48:14 AM Title: A Stranger In The Land

Yep everyone who shouldn't tell a story has a million travel ones they'll tell over and over again. really like it so far

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