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Reviewer: JadeFeonix Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2011 4:08:02 PM Title: My Father's Mansion

Another powerful chapter. not as powerful as the last but this has its own type of power. This has the power of pain, loss, and so many more deeper emotions. the imagry is blindingly beautiful yet dark. I feel for Rogue more in this chapter than i think i ever have. Bravo. Bravo.

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2011 6:14:58 PM Title: My Father's Mansion

Is she gonna kill herself???

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 8:52:02 PM Title: My Father's Mansion

the idea of the 4 doored room is so apt and fitting and you describe its appearance and use so perfectly.

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2010 8:04:49 PM Title: My Father's Mansion

soooooooo is Logan gonna come back? are we gona hear what hes been doin thepast 5 years?

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2010 4:58:46 PM Title: My Father's Mansion

wow this story gets better and better. More interesting... Update soon!!!

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2010 1:20:26 PM Title: My Father's Mansion

Aaaaaaaaah. DDDD: This chapter was so good! And now I need the next one, please. :)

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2010 12:43:36 PM Title: My Father's Mansion

Ahh! What are these plans!? Now you're just teasing ;)

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2010 12:31:39 PM Title: My Father's Mansion

OK, now you're scaring me. I almost dread the next chapter, but bring it on, darlin'. Bring it on. --Wendie

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2010 7:03:38 AM Title: My Father's Mansion

ANOTHER great chapter. :-D xXx

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2010 6:55:10 AM Title: My Father's Mansion

I haven't had the chance to review the last couple of chapters but I wanted to let you know I am still reading. I am in awe of how you have built, released and are rebuilding the tension in this piece. It ebbs and flows so gradually you don't even know it is happening until you find yourself in the trough of the wave with the crest pressing down on you. I think I remember what happens next but I want to see what you have done with it. BTW I thought the last chapter fit Xavier perfectly - tone, texture and all of the English Lit references.

Author's Response: I'm very happy you liked Xavier's chapter. More soon...

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