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wow steamy, sexy without being real graphic. Nice. Its hard to do that.
I want a Logan
I am sooo glad that this got a happy ending! YAY! It is such a good story...well, intense, anyway. There were moments there...whew! A little sad, a lot scary, but in the end definitely worth it.
Author's Response: NOW it has an ending. Thank you for your lovely FB, and I hope you still feel it's worth it.
Okay, I'm officially stripped of my pride & I will BEG you to finish this! Whatever your muse needs I will find, steal/kidnap, & send it to you.
Also, I'm going to New Orleans in a month for my birthday and I would love it if you could point me in the direction of growly mutant cage fights there. Please! It's bad enough I'm going to have dirty thoughts when I come across a beignet because of this story ;) Throw me a bone!
Author's Response: My muses seem to be slow on the uptake. I apologize for not providing directions to Toby's place and hope you had a fabulous time in the Big Easy. I want to go back...
Okay, I'm jumping on the Scripture fix bandwagon mentioned by Moviemom and Hobbit. Please, please post the rest of this story ASAP!
Author's Response: Not exactly ASAP, I know. But done.
At the risk of sounding like an inexperienced and uncouth (?) lover -- Are you done? The little 'complete?' box is still checked 'No' and it seems like there are a few loose ends yet to tie up -- Logan's 'release' being one of them. I was also really hoping to learn the location and the significance of the little church in the painting. Truth is, I need my 'Scripture' fix, but failing that, I guess, I need a definitive 'THE END'. Any chance of an update--or something--soon? --Wendie
Author's Response: I now give the definitive "the end." Thank you so much for your support and your patience.
Amazing. Every time I read a part of this story I have such a hard time putting to words how much I love what you continue to do because it is all just wonderful. The patience Logan has with her from beginning to end is just beautiful and I'll I can do is wish for a guy like Logan who can handle me at my worst and deserve my best. (just like these two)
And that hot hot hot scene was played out just perfect. I was getting all hot and bothered just like everyone else. That grin was weeeelllllll deserved and makes me love him all the more ;)
Wow. You know, just when I think that this story can't get any better, it does! I find myself rereading it over and over. It's just so complex, heartbreaking, sweet and realistic. I also like the fact that when you add another character's POV, like Kitty or Jubilee, it's not filler. Instead it just adds yet another rich layer to an already compelling story. These last several chapters have been especially great! As usual, I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Omg, that last sentence made me grin. This chapter was so good! I loved it, absolutely can't wait for more!
Oh wow, Wow! This is delicious, like a N'Awlins pastry.
Need clarification: is this the conclusion, or is there more to come? Please advise!
Also, I wanted to mention a continuity glitch: Seems like there is an extra overnight added: They are getting busy, but they stop, she pretends to fall asleep, then it is morning. But it still feels like the same day. Pacing feels a bit wonky just there. Otherwise the flow was perfect for the story to unwind with delicious languor.
Author's Response: More now at last provided. (And I hope this chapter clears up the continuity for you...not a glitch, but possibly not as clear as it could have been made...)rnrnAnd thank you!
...and I jizzed in my pants.
Jeepers that was hot.
Oh, am I relieved, you MAKE it! The last chapter was, forgive me, kind of the average shipper stuff, and it seemed to have so much pink icing and "cutey Jubes makes it all right", I got seriously worried. Well, shame on me, I could've known better.
And no Moviemom, Logan isn't patient, it's "tenacious" you are looking for!
:-) And yes, after so much shattering pain, you need to take it slow, and you need to go back to being 16, just to heal those old wounds before you can start growing any further. WELL done!!! (For whatever my praise it worth... :-)
damn, love the chapter, lol kinda good for valentines day
"Holy Christ. Hallelujah. World without end" - That about sums it up! Hot damn!
And I have to agree, he certainly earned that self-satisfied grin!
I just, wow, yeah...kind of at a loss for words after this chapter. Wish I had some grand praise, but some synapses seemed to have shorted in my brain ;)
Woot! I am Miss Clevah! New Orleans! Love this chapy little miss. Look and you and being on the roll and stuff ;)
No one in the history of the planet has ever been more richly deserving of a self-satisfied grin, wouldn't you say? 'Patient' and 'long-suffering' don't even begin to cover it. I love that his best advice is 'don't try so hard' and that he made this first experience all about her. And for Marie, it's apparently been an almost religious experience.
'Holy Christ. Hallelujah. World without end.'
Amen, sister. AMEN! --Wendie
wow....just wooooooooow