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Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2010 4:39:30 AM Title: A Stranger In The Land

Well i am on at all times of the day or night. I tend to stay up all night when I am home anyway. lol Besides I am always looking for something new to read.

Author's Response: I see. Well, all I can say is I'm impressed with your speed. ;)

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2010 1:57:15 AM Title: Many Waters

Please God let it be Logan on the other side of that door.

Author's Response: Go and find out. ;)

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2010 1:42:49 AM Title: Many Waters

Ooooh, a knock. :DDD This chapter was really great, loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you! Now there's more...

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2010 1:18:04 AM Title: Many Waters

Cliffhanger!? Not fair!

Well, we all know that Logan has a pretty strong personality & I guess we know what he really wants now, don't we ;)

Pretty please update soon! Another chapter would break up the monotony of shoveling ridic amounts of snow tomorrow!

Author's Response: Strong personality, yes, but let's let him tell us what he really wants. ;) I may have missed getting to break up the snow shoveling, but at least maybe you can relax with a long chapter now that you're done?

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2010 12:00:59 AM Title: Many Waters

ooo u bad bad person, good cliffhanger........ was she thinking about logan?

Author's Response: Thank you, I think! ;)

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2010 10:45:30 PM Title: Many Waters

This would never have occurred to me. You are a genius. --Wendie

Author's Response: Oh, no such of a thing. Just trying to amuse a few people during a snowstorm (or so I hear--we didn't get any here!).

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2010 10:49:35 PM Title: The Conviction Of Things Not Seen

Ooooh, this was great. I loved seeing his POV.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2010 1:43:49 PM Title: The Conviction Of Things Not Seen

Once again you've captured the voice of a character so well. We don't usually hear from Piotr in fics & while I'm dying for more R&L scenes it was nice to see this POV.

Sadly I don't speak Russian. My English isn't even up to par most of the time...and that's my first language ;p

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Yeah, I don't speak Russian either. Fortunately, Piotr does okay in English. But your English seems fine to me. ;)

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2010 10:17:49 AM Title: The Conviction Of Things Not Seen

hey, i liked this. always liked pyotr, so it was good to hear from him. and the russian didn't sound too weird (i speak the language a bit, i would know). looking forward to reading more

Author's Response: Oh good! Not much Russian really used, of course; not more than he'd usually speak in the comics. I don't speak the language, unfortunately. More up now, more on the way...

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2010 8:46:11 AM Title: The Conviction Of Things Not Seen

I always knew I liked that big metal brute. Turns out he's really a big metal teddy bear of a philosopher. Even better. This was a stroke of genius to use Peter to take us from 'how could she?' to 'there but for the grace of God, go I.' --Wendie

Author's Response: I always liked him too. Big lug. Thank you!

Reviewer: SummerSky Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2010 7:48:13 AM Title: The Conviction Of Things Not Seen

I like the conflicked feelings he has. It's not easy to admitt being angry with someone who's tried to kill themselves and the pain it causes the people who love them.

Author's Response: This is true. I originally thought this would have been Kitty speaking, but sometimes the little voices just want to be heard...

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2010 7:02:13 AM Title: The Conviction Of Things Not Seen

I am actually really enjoying the look into these other characters. It is refreshing to be able to see our two main characters through the eyes of others. I didn't comment on the last chapter but I wanted to say that I am glad you made it ackward and hard between them - Rogue's right it will be okay but not right away. I am glad you choose to have them go that way. I look forward to what you have in store for us. I would love to hear what the Professor is thinking of all this.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like all the little nooks and crannies. We have a few more twists and turns to go...

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2010 5:22:54 AM Title: The Conviction Of Things Not Seen

I liked this new insight. Very interesting. Update again soon.

Author's Response: Again with the quick-draw response. You're obviously in a different time zone from me...thank you!

Reviewer: Alana Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2010 6:17:39 PM Title: This Present Time

These poor children have been through far too much crap, and I hate to admit, but it's wonderful watching them dig out of it. I think right now they've found themselves on equal footing and they're not sure how to go about it. I look forward to your next chapter!

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2010 3:15:53 PM Title: This Present Time

"He’s looking at me like I’m some sort of unsecured explosive"...haha. I loved that line. I also loved this chapter. Definitely my favorite so far. I think you wrote their interaction perfectly, nothing felt forced or OOC & it was true to the characterizations that you've constructed throughout the story.

As always, can't wait until the next one! :)

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2010 1:44:30 PM Title: This Present Time

How do you make this fic so AWESOME? I think I have a new favorite chapter. :D

Reviewer: SummerSky Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2010 12:50:17 PM Title: This Present Time

I'm the same if my place is clean I'm a mess. Loving this story

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2010 7:32:26 AM Title: This Present Time

And so it begins...the journey they started together a long time ago but got interrupted by stuff neither of them were prepared to handle back then. Here's hoping they can now. --Wendie

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2010 5:52:16 AM Title: This Present Time

that was intense. I really enjoyed it a lot. I do however feel like Jean is up to something> I know she is probably not but I am naturally suspicious of her. Update again soon!

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2010 12:47:43 AM Title: Strength Out Of Weakness

You made me like Scott! I'm looking forward to the next bit. :)

Author's Response: Go me! ;) Next bit coming up.

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2010 11:42:25 PM Title: Strength Out Of Weakness

so is he going or not?

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2010 10:09:17 PM Title: Strength Out Of Weakness

nice to hear from scott's perspective, makes him more human and less of a jerk.

this story is well on its way to being the most reviewed on on the site and it TOTALLY deserves it!

Author's Response: Yes, I thought he deserved a shot at explaining himself. It's not like we haven't heard from everyone *else* at Xavier's. (And...really? Holy cow. That's amazing. You guys are awesome!)

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2010 9:38:42 PM Title: A Stranger In The Land

its more than that actually. The movie is about kids trying to get their parents to pay attention. Its about lifting the veil to see what is behind the faces of others. To miss the obvious by not paying attention to the ones closest to you. Its an excellent movie if a bit depressing. I really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2010 8:49:04 PM Title: Strength Out Of Weakness

GIMME MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: YES MA'AM!!!!!! ;)

Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2010 7:02:00 PM Title: Strength Out Of Weakness

hey, really enjoying this. had me from the first chapter, i read it almost the entire way through. really looking forward to seeing what happens next...

Author's Response: Your username is cracking me up...thank you! I'm looking forward to it myself...

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