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Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2010 12:57:13 AM Title: Behold, A Pale Horse

Its all down to timing at this point isn't it? Will he get there or won't he?

Author's Response: All I know is your timing is 'within seconds of hitting post'. How do you DO that?

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2010 9:25:58 PM Title: A Vision In The Temple

Soooo good! I really liked Julia in this, and of course Logan was fantastic. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm usually not that into original characters, but Julia was rather fun to imagine.

Reviewer: Solidae Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2010 8:29:37 PM Title: A Vision In The Temple

Ooohhhhh. This one made me catch my breath. More please!

Author's Response: Take a deep breath and move on to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2010 7:11:53 PM Title: A Vision In The Temple

oh lordy, let him be in time!

Author's Response: Time to see if he is...

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2010 5:00:40 PM Title: A Vision In The Temple

This is another excellent chapter. I'm addicted to your story and your frequent (thank God!) updates are feeding my habit. I can't wait to find out what happens next but I'm also a little scared too. If there's no happy ending, I'm going to have to sign up for that support group that Sahara mentioned. Regardless of the outcome, I really enjoy your stories. Thanks for sharing this.

Author's Response: /adds name to listserv/ Thank you so much for reading it and letting me know you enjoyed it. Hearing what people like is really what makes it all worthwhile.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2010 4:37:03 PM Title: A Vision In The Temple

well he came but I hope he isn't too late.

Author's Response: I hope so too. ;)

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2010 1:04:20 PM Title: A Vision In The Temple

I am too invested in this story. Could you do me a favor & set up a support group for your readers? Especially if this isn't going to have a happy ending.

Will Logan get there in time? can they save her? Will she warm to the idea of being saved? You're up there w/ the writers of my favorite show "Lost" when it comes to keeping me on the edge of my seat!

Of course I should be nice & actually review. This chapter, without being verbose and overdone was written with such clear emotion. It wasn't even completely in Logan's POV to feel his persona & what the paintings evoked. *sigh*...can I steal you're writing skills for a day?

Author's Response: I'll start a listserv or something if people are interested. ;) And wow! I only ever saw the first season of "Lost", but that's quite a compliment. Thank you!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2010 12:50:41 PM Title: A Vision In The Temple

Thank you for showing us the paintings. I've got way too much invested in the outcome of this--however it goes--to quit now, but I've pretty much had to reconcile myself to the notion that not all stories are meant to have happy endings. And that's not a bad thing. --Wendie

Author's Response: You are most welcome. We're nearing the end now--well, we're closer to the end than we are to the beginning. Which sounds like a riddle, but it's not. Anyway, I'm glad you'll be there for the finish.

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2010 12:04:22 PM Title: A Vision In The Temple

Brilliant, brilliant, bloody beautiful. You have me on pins and needles with the effortless, yet breathless way you write.

~Mia

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate your taking the time to let me know you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2010 11:55:48 AM Title: A Vision In The Temple

Oh man. Please update. Soon. I'm totally caught up in this story. Your Rogue and Wolverine are a lot different than I imagine them, but you've sold me on the characters and I have to know what happens to them. Ack! How am I ever going to concentrate on my work now...

Author's Response: Ack! I will hurry and tell you what happens next. Only then, you're just going to want to know what happens after that...aren't you? ;) Seriously, thank you so much for the kind words.

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2010 1:46:04 AM Title: Strive To Enter

why would i hate you?

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2010 1:40:53 AM Title: Tarry Till I Come

finally, logan is back

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2010 12:51:52 AM Title: Strive To Enter

wow that is intense. there better be an update real soon! please....?

Author's Response: Thank you. There is now an update.

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2010 12:37:26 AM Title: Strive To Enter

WHHATTTT??!!! Okay, I will be the first person to admit that I'm really quite painfully slow on the uptake. So this came out of left field for me, going about 90mph, hit me smack dab in the middle of the face & even knocked some of my teeth out.

I really had to go re-read this chapter & a few back, others' reviews & then re-read this chapter yet AGAIN to get my brain to catch up. Hot damn! Make Logan come back! Fix things! Pleeease! I'm not above a little begging!

Author's Response: That was quite the baseball metaphor. I admire that!rnrnFixing things...um...well...I did make Logan come back.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 11:15:30 PM Title: Strive To Enter

OK, first, don't lie. You haven't lied to us yet, so don't start now. You're not sorry. If you were, you'd have done something differently, but you didn't, so let it stand without the apology.

Hate you? No, although, to be honest, I found myself using the 'b' word a time or two as I cried my way from 'And that's not a lie. I will be fine.' to the end. I knew this was coming; you laid a very careful and well-marked trail, but that doesn't mean I'm not a little pissed about the hope you gave me in the previous chapter. Was it a false hope? How could it have been, when there has not been a single false note in this entire 'overlong, convoluted AU how-they-met' story. Now, my last shred of hope is that not getting that bag over her head will make all the difference. Or maybe I'm just a naive romantic who believes too strongly in happy endings. --Wendie

Author's Response: Reality check noted. No more nonsensical apologies, I promise.rnrnI knew you were onto the foreshadowing, so I'll just hope you'll stick around to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 11:09:38 PM Title: Strive To Enter

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

oh...my...god! please tell me it doesn't end here!

Author's Response: It doesn't end here. ;)

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 11:07:28 PM Title: Strive To Enter

yep she did what I thought, what I remembered. please post soon

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 10:54:25 PM Title: Strive To Enter

DDDDDDDDDD: I WAS AFRAID OF THIS. After that chapter in Marie's head. DDDD: I... I hope you fix it somehow? Either way, SO AMAZING. Reaaally looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response: Next update is here; though it may not have all the answers you await, it does have some.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 9:09:51 PM Title: Tarry Till I Come

oh my god, please update soooooon! i am madly in love with this story!

Author's Response: Okay, I can't resist the mixture of enthusiasm and flattery. ;)

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 8:55:49 PM Title: A Vision Of The Night

oooh, wonder what those portraits are...i bet at least 1 is of Wolverine

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 8:52:02 PM Title: My Father's Mansion

the idea of the 4 doored room is so apt and fitting and you describe its appearance and use so perfectly.

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 4:58:52 PM Title: Tarry Till I Come

Im addicted to this story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Next fix, coming right up.

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 3:40:10 PM Title: Tarry Till I Come

Eeee, this is exciting! Logan's back. :DDD I'm dying for the next chapter now.

Author's Response: Funny you should phrase it that way. All right, more coming up.

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 1:28:20 PM Title: Tarry Till I Come

Yay! That about sums up how I feel about this chapter :)

Author's Response: I hope you feel the same about the next one...

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 1:08:36 PM Title: Tarry Till I Come

Hot damn, we are close now, they are at least in the same city.

Author's Response: This is true. New York's a big place, though, 'specially when you count in Westchester County.

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