The Wolverine & Rogue Fanfiction Archive
Barely Legal Since 2000
Date: 01/25/2010 1:27:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
now was that door shut before or after Logan walked through it. Hopefully after......
Date: 01/25/2010 11:30:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
You MUST continue! If you leave us not to mention Logan dangling this way there is no telling what will happen! I would suggest sleeping with one eye open.
Date: 01/25/2010 7:30:57 AM Title: Chapter 2
That is without a doubt the best and yet most deeply hated cliffhanger I have ever encountered on this site. I may have dreamed up The Chair, but you, my dear, are well on your way to making it your own. Holy-fucking-WOW! --Wendie
[Report This]Date: 01/25/2010 6:38:26 AM Title: Chapter 2
Maybe more? are you insane woman? There HAS to be more. xXx
[Report This]Date: 01/25/2010 3:11:31 AM Title: Chapter 2
AUGH! So, which side of the door is he on? Gotta know! Great story, keep up the good work. hot hot hot... *fans self*
Date: 01/25/2010 12:35:07 AM Title: Chapter 2
OOOOOooooohhhhhhhh!!!! Hobbit!!! You'd better DAMN well have our favorite Logie on the INSIDE of that bloody door slam in the next chapter, or I fear a bunch of us are gonna be hunting you down for a "little talk"!!!
Author's Response: hey, hey, hey people! (Grins evilly) I don't respond well to threats. ya know. i'm a good little hobbit girl really- I might not want to continue writing smut... Oh, who am i kidding? just review if i do do it, lol!
[Report This]Date: 01/22/2010 4:46:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love it, but have one tiny little suggestion - format the paragraphs. Even just putting a full space between one and the next would make this fabulous story even easier to read.
Author's Response: hey, thanks for the review. i finally managed to fix the spacing, had to learn how to save something in the HTLM-whatever format. hope it looks better now and glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 01/22/2010 2:31:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Lust-and-trust! Loved that! If Logan had a slogan that would be it.
Author's Response: hmm, everyone seems to like that... well, everyone that reviewed. think you might be right about it being his slogan, lol. thanks for the review though:-)
Date: 01/22/2010 10:52:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
It's a miracle. Period. Disasters have no business showing up. Miracle.
Date: 01/22/2010 9:52:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow – I loved this! Such an intense and intimate scene between the two of them I found myself holding my breath as I read.
“It had taken Hank, Kurt, Storm, Colossus and Warren to pull him off the bastard.” – What an image this portrays of one furious Wolverine!
“He wasn’t sure whether he wanted the moment that came after This Moment to arrive just yet,” – great line.
As suggested by Moviemom I’d love to see this continue…please? xx
P.S. I can’t offer any advice on the ‘technicals’ of the round robin posting, given I managed to stuff it up royally! :-)
Date: 01/22/2010 8:00:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Man, oh, man! Amazing! There are some outrageously great lines in this:
'lust-and-trust presence of Logan' -- perfect!
'Because hope was fer morons. Everyone knew that.' -- perfect and funny!
'she couldn't un-know that she wanted him' -- if you're going to invent new words, this is the way to do it.
There are more but I'd have to practically quote the whole story to acknowledge them. I'd be so happy to see this continue as a multi-chapter addition to the series. --Wendie
Date: 01/22/2010 1:01:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was really good! :D You really captured them well - I like your Logan, he's nice and rough around the edges in a fabulous way!
To add it to Logan's Chair the series (it took me a minute too so don't feel bad, and about five tries to figure it out right, lol!) just click on the series link when you're logged in. Underneath it'll say, "Add a story to this series," or something like that. Click on it, and you can pick a story from your own personally authored stuff to add to the series.
Author's Response: so do people want a sequel to this? (grins evilly) because, ya know, like logan i ain't easily persuaded...
Date: 01/22/2010 12:37:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
I didn't quite get that this one takes place chronologically before the first one until closer to the end but I like it. I think you have to click the round robin button to link this one to the others.