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Reviewer: Jahunta4974 Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2014 9:55:58 AM Title: Kiss of Life and Death

Oh, this story is beautiful! I hope you continue with X2.

Reviewer: Wolverine Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2010 9:33:56 PM Title: First Impressions

Hey! Its your wolverine! Wanted to let you know how much i love this one. Fun times!

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2010 11:23:41 AM Title: Kiss of Life and Death

I like this version of events better than the original in X1. Good job!

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2010 5:13:30 PM Title: Kiss of Life and Death

I like this. Please please please continue :D

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2010 12:12:28 AM Title: Kiss of Life and Death

oh plz continue to x2 PLZ!!!!

Author's Response: Workin on it! :D

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2010 1:12:53 PM Title: Kiss of Life and Death

Yeah, I say go for it on X2. But next time you post, try putting a space between each paragraph. It makes it easier to read. I like your version of the end better than the original. --Wendie

Author's Response: Thanks! I editted it with your suggestion. :) I think for X2 I'll stick a LOT less to the story line. Haha!

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2010 7:24:14 AM Title: Kiss of Life and Death

DO number two!!!! (secret meaning- kill Jean) not 3 though. that film sucked. xXx

Author's Response: Ah yes. Death to Jeanie. That--(insert crude name here) :P

Reviewer: LexiAbby Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2010 2:02:32 AM Title: Kiss of Life and Death

Love the title and the story's end! Good first try. Loved it.

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