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This was beautiful; their first tme was the perfect blend of sexy, tender, and sweet.
wow, you do a great job with this chapter.
i looooove the half formed phrases and short staccato sentences that mimic the rush of thoughts in Logan's mind, it does a lovely job mirroring the gasping, the shivers, the scattered thought and motion he would have making love for the first time to the only woman he's loved.
awesome!
...-is speechless- you first sex scene and you get that? -drools- can I have some of your talent? This was amazing!
Author's Response: Omg. A week after reading this, and I'm still smiling. Thank you.
It was good, really good. nice to show how gentle logan can be with her. keep it up i want update soon plz and ty
I love this! I love the 'stream of consciousness' style during their lovemaking, because who actually has complete thoughts while they're in the throes of genuine passion? And, of course, the last line is just too wonderful.
Best line: "And I have a sinking suspicion those garbled noises aren't staying in my head." Hilarious! The Wolverine babbling over a girl's breasts! Of course, not just ANY girl, but still...HAHAHAHA! --Wendie
Author's Response: I always love your reviews-they are always so thorough, so reliable, and generous. I hope you like the last chapter.
I loved it. It wasn't the hottest sex scene ever written but I love how it gave us insight into Logan's mind. It is awesome that Logan was so into (no pun intended. lol) it.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Holy Flippidyistypickle! For someone who hasn't written something like this before you did a wonderful job! Just the right blend of...ahem.."action" & sweetness.
Gotta love the shout out to what should be the world's most appropriate euphemism too ;P
Author's Response: >bows< I'm so happy you agree with the euphamism.
Loved it!!!