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Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2011 5:30:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm sure the baby got the best dad ever :)

Reviewer: Isis Nocturne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2010 2:24:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

OMG please update!!! I need more!!! :D

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2010 11:30:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

The problem with your depiction of Logan not looking like a pedophile is that the premise of your entire story is that he IS attracted to Marie even though she looks young. Otherwise there would be no baby in the first place. So back tracking and now making him not sexually attracted to Maris and having him be more sexually attracted to Jean and a woman of more mature looks seems less like Logan waiting till Marie grows up and more like he doesn't find Marie to be a worthy mate.

Reviewer: glovegrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2010 4:31:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

100!! Love it, keep it coming. And yeah would love to see Scott's reaction to baby puke. Did you know some babies can projectile vomit milk? Maybe across the dinner table ? Totally gross but funny at the same time!

Author's Response: Thanks for being no. 100! I already planned Scott to be a target (not only for Becca), but the dinner table is a nice idea hehe.

Reviewer: glovegrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2010 3:38:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ok I'm loving this story but just thought I should add that Moviemom is partially right, exclusivly breastfeeding does stop ovulation and menstration but there is no time limit, it works for as long as the mother is exclusivly breast feeding, which is about more than 6 feeds a day, it can work for years so long as enough milk is being produced. Woman in Africa often breast feed for 5 or more years to stop themselves getting pregnant again.

And perhaps Marie could put in a good word for Becca's dad, without telling her friends who he is, just to make sure they don't think he's such a creep? Logan must be feeling pretty low with some of the things the kids are saying about "Becca's Dad".

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2010 9:40:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

YEAH!! What Cherry said!

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2010 9:37:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm still as pissed at Scott as Logan is, and I'm still rootin' for his ass kicking! This new plot twist sounds interesting, can't wait to hear Ro's inner thoughts. Keep 'em coming!!

Reviewer: SamiSweet Signed star [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2010 4:31:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

I usually don't post negative reviews as I know how hard people work to write these stories but I have to say I don't like pedophile Logan. Whether they actually did or didn't, she's 16 when she gives birth in this story and likely 15 when she gets pregnant. It's squicky and should carry a greater warning than teenage pregnancy.

On top of that I guess I'm disappointed because when I first started the story (before hints at the "incident")I thought it was going to go in a different direction, one I thought would be an interesting twist. But that disappointment is on me for getting ahead of the story.


Anyway, I if your Marie was older I'd probably enjoy this story because it has potential, but as it is, I think I'm gonna have to stop reading.

Author's Response: Sorry, you're disappointed that the story took a different direction than you thought. I had thought long about posting this story, but then again I read a few Rogan fanfics, in which the two were also together (with kid eventually) before Rogue was 18 - those stories also hadn't a pedophile warning. Anyway I added a warning now. The idea for it came to me during watching a TV reportage about teenage-mothers, the next day I watched a few Fan-videos of Rogan on YouTube, where I noticed how very young Rogue looked in the first movie...rnThough, by the way I already hinted in the first chapter that Marie's 17th birthday isn't far away, what made her 16years when she got pregnant.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2010 3:56:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ah, you are so right! I forgot about the 'outflow' part, but then all those questions became moot for me about three decades ago when my cherry went bye-bye. Although, to be honest, I probably didn't give it a whole lot of thought back then either. As my MOTHER, of all people, once told me, "It wasn't that I was so good back then (meaning the years after high school and before Dad); I was just lucky." Thanks for setting me straight. --Wendie

Reviewer: SummerSky Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2010 9:02:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

Brutal,honest and amazing good work

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2010 9:12:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

oh my god, what a nightmare for Rogue! and good lord is Wolverine going to be in deep trouble at the mansion!

Reviewer: jackmansgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2010 12:53:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love it so far. Please continue.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2010 10:27:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oookkk. That was very unexpected. I liked it though. I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2010 8:09:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

It's hard to read about Marie being in that much denial, but I suppose it's something lots of girls feel in that situation, especially since she didn't think she and Logan had actually had sex. Doesn't surprise me that he's 'Mr. Potent' either. I'm glad Logan is ready to take care of them both, but I hope she comes around sooner rather than later. Looking forward to more. --Wendie

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