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Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2011 6:29:03 PM Title: Chapter 3

wow that was intense. very well written. i was surprised with how u explained marie's pregnancy and it was satisfying i guess. i couldnt think of a better word to explain it.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2011 5:42:13 AM Title: Chapter 3

Logan hast super sperm... I knew it ;)

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2010 4:46:15 PM Title: Chapter 3

And a very successful attempt I do say!! Bring on the next chapter honey, we're all waiting with bated breath for the Prof's judgement on what he's seen.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2010 11:31:02 AM Title: Chapter 3

Nice job on the smut, but you might want to change 'nibbles' to 'nipples' and 'jar' to 'jaw'. Other than that, it was outstanding. As for how she got pregnant, my thought was pretty much exactly what you wrote. They got as far as him being inside her enough to have sperm from the pre-cum find its way to where it needed to go, but didn't actually 'go all the way', so to speak. The only hitch in that theory is that you don't say whether or not he actually broke her membrane. If he didn't, it would have been near to impossible for his little swimmers to get to the egg. But then again, we are talking about Logan here and he's nothing if not virile and potent. Wouldn't surprise me if his 'little swimmers' were Olympic gold medalists. Anyway, regardless of how it happened, now I'm looking forward to how Logan and Marie go about parenting their precious surprise. Does she have a name yet? If you're taking suggestions, I'd like to offer 'Belle', because it means 'beautiful' and because Marie is sometimes referred to as 'the Southern Belle'. I am so anxious for your updates. --Wendie

Author's Response: Thanks, already corrected the two mistakes. I already wondered while writing, if 'jar' was right, but I had just read another story and there it was spelt in that context 'jar', so I wondered, but didn't look it up. Next time I will...rnSorry to contradict your opinion, but it IS possible to get pregnant with an intact hymen. The membrane doesn't block the whole way, otherwise the blood during the period would be hold back by the hymen and wouldn't flow out... Anyway, I also looked that scenario up on some medical/pregnancy sites, and a few girls wrote they got knocked up without popped cherry. One even through sperm on the finger of her boyfriend, when he fingered her... so no Olympic gold medals for Logan XDrnBelle is nice, but I already decided on another name. But I now contemplate to make Belle her middle name...

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2010 11:27:05 AM Title: Chapter 3

Oh wow. That was amazing. I love it.

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Date: 02/19/2010 10:55:17 AM Title: Chapter 3

well i thought it was smuttastic. xXx

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