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Date: 05/04/2011 5:37:11 AM Title: Chapter 28
Hehe a blushing Wolvie.
[Report This]Date: 07/11/2010 3:05:16 AM Title: Chapter 28
I really wanna know when the school finds out...
Date: 07/09/2010 5:22:31 PM Title: Chapter 28
I didn't like it at all -- I LOVED IT! This issue was bound to arise, pun very much intended, sooner or later and I think you handled it perfectly. As a feral, Logan is very much in tune with his body and all its urges and he is not used to holding them back. Marie is very wise to have let him go, thus allowing him to make the choice to remain faithful to her all on his own. And, of course, I'm very glad he made the right choice. --Wendie
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2010 4:10:24 PM Title: Chapter 28
Loving this story still. I may take some time later and reread the entire thing. I do have a suggestion, in one of the chapters you used the word apology several times when apologize would have been the proper word. It seemed like also there was a problem with present and past tense in a couple places. I don 't want to discourage you, however, the story is really good. I can't wait to see how it ends.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. As I stated in my first chapter English isn't my first language. I'm always open for suggestions and if someone could point out my mistakes, especially if I keep repeating them, I'm more than happy to learn from my errors. The thing with the tenses is that I don't find my mistakes, that's why I would be glad if someone could be so nice and copy the sentence and write how it should be in proper English, so I can see the difference and learn from my mistakes.