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Date: 05/06/2011 9:26:01 PM Title: Chapter 42
This is going along WONDERFULLY!! I love the new addition of Laura and the funny mix ups she's bringing...keep the updates coming!
Date: 05/01/2011 8:02:09 PM Title: Chapter 42
I think you've done a wonderful job of conveying the crazy situation Logan is in right now. As for Laura's level of trauma, she was created in a lab and, I assume, had no nurturing, so emotions would be as foreign to her as they would be to a lab rat. I'd have been more surprised if she acted any way other than how you portrayed her. I don't know a lot about this character, so I look forward to seeing how she and Logan fit together as well as how she fits into the overall story. Excellent. --Wendie
Date: 04/30/2011 10:50:10 PM Title: Chapter 42
I love the way you integrated Laura into your story - I kind of hoped you would bring her in when you had brought up her name as a possibility for Becca's in one of your earlier chapters. In the comics, Wolverine has been portrayed in so many different capacities in regards to her (Father/Brother etc) but his protectiveness towards her always grabbed at me. Good job! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I intended to bring Laura into this story from the very beginning,that's why I had her name mention but then again drop it; so you're right :)
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2011 9:41:18 PM Title: Chapter 42
Aww...the family is growing...looking forward to see where you go next...
Date: 04/30/2011 1:02:22 PM Title: Chapter 42
I loved this chapter! It was so cute! I can't wait for you to write more!