The Wolverine & Rogue Fanfiction Archive
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Personally, I really like the attention you are focusing on Laura and the relationship that is developing between her and Logan and Marie. I think it adds to all their characters, and makes me care for them more, plus the fact that it opens up the story and lets me see the world around them more vibrantly. I absolutely adore Rogue/Logan-centric stories, but I really like stories like yours as well in that it brings other well fleshed out characters that they can interact with. Great chapter, as usual. I am really enjoying this! :)
What's not to like? She's cute, she's bright and she's a miniature Logan in girl form. As if all that's not enough, she continues to bring out the 'father' in the feral and there is nothing sexier on the planet than a man who is truly engaged with his children. Laura is welcome anytime in my book. And I also really liked what happened with Jean. The fact that her loss of control scared her makes her seem just a tad less creepy, but I still don't trust the wench. --Wendie