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Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2010 10:10:02 PM Title: Chapter 7

the Chair makes an appearance YAY! i have a feeling the Chair will show up a lot in future stories.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2010 10:02:28 PM Title: Chapter 6

i love the name Becca! that's my wonderful niece's name.

and good for Xaiver coming up with some arrangments for the couple and not killing them both. god a feeling Scott or Jean is going to spill the beans tho, they're pretty insensitive.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2010 3:06:55 PM Title: Chapter 9

Bunch of teenage know-nothings! Can't wait for Logan to get word of this and find new and torturous ways of getting them to keep their mouths shut! --Wendie

Reviewer: IronAimaiden Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2010 2:11:00 PM Title: Chapter 9

Ohh, I love this story ;D
And I love Ikea hehe C:
Can't wait for the next chapter! (:

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2010 2:17:48 PM Title: Chapter 8

I love how you balance the wonder of parenthood with the trials of living in the mansion. Also, your insight into Logan's acceptance of his role coming from his 'animal' side is spectacular.

And this made me laugh out loud:

'I have an eye on you.'

Logan smirked. "Then how you gonna watch Jeannie, One-Eye?"

HILARIOUS! --Wendie

Reviewer: Freespirit Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2010 4:17:49 AM Title: Chapter 8

Awwww!!!!
Please, pretty please, update soooooon!

Can't wait to read more about our 'little family'... ^^

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2010 5:03:49 PM Title: Chapter 8

OH SNAP. When are you going to update??

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2010 4:23:26 PM Title: Chapter 8

looool ikea. they're ganna get lost. i always do. xXx

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2010 2:55:03 PM Title: Chapter 8

This was just day one, desy.... kids always lull you into a false sense of security! I'm sure the next night will be just as much of a nightmare or more!
I feel so bad for Marie, being #1 on the Rumor Mill Hit Parade. As if she doesn't have enough stress! Be kind to her, if it fits in with your story plans.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2010 11:29:34 PM Title: Chapter 7

Nice snapshot of "Life with the Logans"...and the nighttime schedule? Dead on, desy!! Every couple of hours...either food or diaper, pick one, if the kid don't stop, do the other!!

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2010 10:18:13 AM Title: Chapter 7

This is quickly becoming my absolute favorite story. It is just amazing how Logan has dealt with the situation. The way he is so sweet and kind.. I LOVE IT!

Reviewer: whitelala Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2010 7:38:30 PM Title: Chapter 7

Very sweet chapter!!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2010 8:21:18 AM Title: Chapter 7

Oh, I think they're making perfect use of the chair for now. I love how 'parental' Logan is and how in awe he is of the way his whole life changed in the space of one day. Nice trick on the 'tummy tuck'. Don't we all wish it was that easy! I can't wait for more. --Wendie

Reviewer: jnet Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2010 11:59:55 PM Title: Chapter 6

Excellent story so far, Can't wait to see how long it takes for folks to figure out that Becca is Logan's.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2010 11:05:46 AM Title: Chapter 6

You got Xavier down just fine. And Becca is a beautiful name. She reminds me of my daughter--at least in her eating/spitting up habits! I can't wait to see how a baby will effect life in the mansion for all concerned. --Wendie

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2010 9:40:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

YEAH!! What Cherry said!

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2010 6:06:35 PM Title: Chapter 6

I really wanna know if Logan is going to play nice with the rules...

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2010 9:37:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm still as pissed at Scott as Logan is, and I'm still rootin' for his ass kicking! This new plot twist sounds interesting, can't wait to hear Ro's inner thoughts. Keep 'em coming!!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2010 11:44:15 PM Title: Chapter 5

Something about Logan as the wise, nurturing dad is sooooooooo appealing. I'm glad Marie is beginning to take an active part in caring for her child. Twists are good, but only if they eventually 'untwist' and lead to happy endings. --Wendie

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2010 8:43:30 PM Title: Chapter 5

Wow. I wasn't expecting her to actually want anything to do with her baby. Finally! Sheesh, if this doesn't make her grow up I don't know what will...

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2010 2:21:31 PM Title: Chapter 4

I'm normally not a violent person, but I really REALLY hope you let Logan kick Scott's ass... and SOON!! He's being a first class prick in this, Rogue's age not withstanding.

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2010 2:08:45 AM Title: Chapter 4

NOOOOOOOOOOOO I dont wanna wait a week.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2010 3:26:49 PM Title: Chapter 4

I really wish folks would quit referring to Logan as a pedophile. OK, so she's 16, which makes her jail bait, but it isn't her youth that attracts him--which is how pedophiles operate. He loves her and she happens to be 16. He tried to wait until she was older, but SHE had other ideas and he is being more than responsible for both of their actions while she has been in major denial and now has retreated into her head. I look forward to her 'snapping out of it'. --Wendie

Author's Response: Good thing I apparently brought it the right way over - never intended Logan to be a pedophile. K, Rogue looks like a little Lolita now, but I hope I'll get HER actions explained as well in the next chapters. She has Logan in her mind and knows that Logan loves her and Wolverine had already chosen her as his mate. And she also loves Logan - so why not simply approach him when she had finally gained control of her powers?! If Logan would be her age, it would be considered normal, wouldn't it?
Concerning her denial: That wasn't a first time (if it was a 'time' at all) any girl would wish for. He kicks her out, tells her to be only friends for the next two years and takes off for who knows how long. And afterwards she finds herself pregnant from something she doesn't count as sex. And her only friend is gone and she doesn't know when he'll return and how he would react to the baby and all the questions and trouble it would bring with it. So best thing is close your eyes and pretend everything is right...

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2010 4:46:15 PM Title: Chapter 3

And a very successful attempt I do say!! Bring on the next chapter honey, we're all waiting with bated breath for the Prof's judgement on what he's seen.

Reviewer: SamiSweet Signed star [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2010 4:31:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

I usually don't post negative reviews as I know how hard people work to write these stories but I have to say I don't like pedophile Logan. Whether they actually did or didn't, she's 16 when she gives birth in this story and likely 15 when she gets pregnant. It's squicky and should carry a greater warning than teenage pregnancy.

On top of that I guess I'm disappointed because when I first started the story (before hints at the "incident")I thought it was going to go in a different direction, one I thought would be an interesting twist. But that disappointment is on me for getting ahead of the story.


Anyway, I if your Marie was older I'd probably enjoy this story because it has potential, but as it is, I think I'm gonna have to stop reading.

Author's Response: Sorry, you're disappointed that the story took a different direction than you thought. I had thought long about posting this story, but then again I read a few Rogan fanfics, in which the two were also together (with kid eventually) before Rogue was 18 - those stories also hadn't a pedophile warning. Anyway I added a warning now. The idea for it came to me during watching a TV reportage about teenage-mothers, the next day I watched a few Fan-videos of Rogan on YouTube, where I noticed how very young Rogue looked in the first movie...rnThough, by the way I already hinted in the first chapter that Marie's 17th birthday isn't far away, what made her 16years when she got pregnant.

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