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Date: 05/03/2011 5:36:08 PM Title: Chapter 22

I really want to bash Jeans and Scotts heads together!

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Date: 05/03/2011 5:30:28 PM Title: Chapter 21

Awww purring Logan ^-^

"Don't stay up the whole night watching porn, k?"

*g*

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Date: 05/03/2011 5:24:20 PM Title: Chapter 20

Yes Scott it was Marie who climbed all over Logan... not the other way round ;)

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Date: 05/03/2011 5:18:52 PM Title: Chapter 19

Maybe Marie overreacted a little bit because Becca is as save as she can be with Logan.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2011 8:03:55 AM Title: Chapter 43

It's not that short, and besides, in just 1600 words, you explained Laura's mental state, hinted at what her life in the lab was like, established that Laura is going to be an exercise in patience for her father--her incessant questions are not something he would tolerate from anyone else--and given us, as your other reviewer said, a lovely family moment. Who could ask for more? --Wendie

Author's Response: Thanks again for your feedback! Logan will need a lot of patience soon ;)

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2011 6:58:49 AM Title: Chapter 18

Someone should shut Scott up.

Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews! I first thought my eyes would fool me or the site's review-counter was messed up (like the word-count seems to be at the moment), but then I saw the many feedback from you. Be sure, Logan will 'shut up' Scott and I have evil plans for Jean.
Also keine Sorge ;)

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Date: 05/03/2011 6:54:44 AM Title: Chapter 17

Never knew that blue can have such an effect.

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Date: 05/03/2011 6:48:06 AM Title: Chapter 16

Nobody talks bad about the Wolverines mate!

I think they need a better sex ed teacher.

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Date: 05/03/2011 6:43:25 AM Title: Chapter 15

This could end up nasty.

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Date: 05/03/2011 6:40:22 AM Title: Chapter 14

Idiot Jean!

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Date: 05/03/2011 6:36:58 AM Title: Chapter 13

Good one.

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Date: 05/03/2011 6:31:17 AM Title: Chapter 12

"He's so proud that his young mate gave birth to a healthy cub. His cub."

Awwww

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Date: 05/03/2011 6:28:08 AM Title: Chapter 11

*wants to hit Scott with something hard*

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Date: 05/03/2011 6:24:48 AM Title: Chapter 10

"Then you're quite new to this grandfather thing."

ROFLMAO

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Date: 05/03/2011 6:12:14 AM Title: Chapter 9

Can't wait for Ikea.

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Date: 05/03/2011 6:10:18 AM Title: Chapter 8

"I have an eye on you!"

Logan smirked. "Then how you gonna watch Jeannie, One-Eye?" And off he was.



LOL

Logan at Ikea oh my.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2011 6:05:43 AM Title: Chapter 7

Nice deal... Marie puts something inside of Becca and Logan has to deal with what comes out of her... good one ;)

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Date: 05/03/2011 5:57:28 AM Title: Chapter 6

"Next time you aim at Scooter, kiddo."

LOL

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Date: 05/03/2011 5:53:03 AM Title: Chapter 5

Scott really needs to keep his mouth shut for some time.

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Date: 05/03/2011 5:46:43 AM Title: Chapter 4

His mate... that good!

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Date: 05/03/2011 5:42:13 AM Title: Chapter 3

Logan hast super sperm... I knew it ;)

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Date: 05/03/2011 5:34:36 AM Title: Chapter 2

I can picture enraged Scott just fine.

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Date: 05/03/2011 5:30:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm sure the baby got the best dad ever :)

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Date: 05/02/2011 4:44:16 PM Title: Chapter 43

Cute family moment :-)

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2011 8:02:09 PM Title: Chapter 42

I think you've done a wonderful job of conveying the crazy situation Logan is in right now. As for Laura's level of trauma, she was created in a lab and, I assume, had no nurturing, so emotions would be as foreign to her as they would be to a lab rat. I'd have been more surprised if she acted any way other than how you portrayed her. I don't know a lot about this character, so I look forward to seeing how she and Logan fit together as well as how she fits into the overall story. Excellent. --Wendie

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