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Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2013 5:00:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

I just read this in one go and don't know how everyone else did it having to wait for updates. This is one of the best lab captured Marie stories EVER!!! And your Logan... I swoon just imagining how gentle, kind, and loving he is with Marie through all this. Most stories have him not being able to completely bottle his feral side but you had him perfect here. I'm so glad that I found this and now I'm looking for more stories in your profile.

Excellent, excellent work!!!! And I hope a mod can get those random spam messages off this site. It ruins the awesome feedback and praise ya'll deserve as writers!

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2011 11:42:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nevermind, just the rest, this ones finished, i was confusing it with "The Girl" which I plan to read once I finish all your completed stories

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2011 11:41:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow its so fascinating! Cant wait ro read the rest (so far)

Reviewer: Lorelai Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2010 1:45:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

It was a really nice ending that fit with the rest of the story. I liked the way you ended it, although you could absolutely do an epilogue of course! :) It seems a little unfinished with the x-men and Xavier but I like that you show that Marie is healing and getting better and more like who she was before it all happened to her. Great story! I hope you continue writing here.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, for all of your reviews and this. I love that you liked it. >hugs, bounces<

Reviewer: likelandm Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2010 11:19:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hi,
I read in your A/N that you didn’t want to write this story..and in a way, I didn’t want to continue it after I read the first couple of chapters…not b/c of the writing, but b/c I hate to read about Marie getting tortured..esp. when it’s so violent, cruel and she loses herself…but, I’m so glad I did, cuz honestly, I don’t even think of this as that kind of a story anymore..but as a true love story.
I figured that Logan would be the one for Marie..since he literally saved her in every sense of the word..but the way that Marie became everything to him unexpectedly and how it changed him completely was so amazingly good I’m in awe of how you did it. The transcendental nature of Logan’s love was so beautiful..I don’t think I’ve read anything quite like it.
As a Rogan shipper I want them to end up together…yet in this, I really wasn’t sure if they would end up that way (in the romantic sense) and I was okay with it. Until your glorious final chapter, I thought she was so fragile and almost child-like (in how she had to re-learn everything) and wondered how she could be with him while still like? w/o being an equal?..ie. would he see her as more than a vulnerable girl?...(though there were hints with the nuzzling/kisses/touches)…so it was a pleasant surprise how it all tied up together. I loved everything about the conclusion..their cabin, the glimpses of their everyday lives (including Logan cooking), that she has pretty clothes..and if she hasn’t already, how she will enjoy that feminine aspect, how Logan slowly brought about their physical relationship and culminating in the profound and deeply moving three unwritten words. I’m sure you can tell..but it needs repeating..I really, really love this story and am so thankful that you shared it with us.

Author's Response: Man, after no sleep and a billion gillion hours reheasing, this review was like....like...Oh, heck. I'm too sleepy for analogies. But thank you. A lot... I'm glad you liked Logan cooking. I was considering having it be a hobby of Marie's, but I thought that would be sexist.... >hugs< Gracias.

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2010 10:48:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

yeah....it does.....but i do hope i see another one by u that was this awesome!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you think so.

Reviewer: Geeves Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2010 1:03:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm so sad its over. I'm glad they finally did it! Wow. Good to scratch that itch AND WELL WORTH IT! Such a good story. And I repeat, such a good story.

Epiloge?

Author's Response: Me too. I'll really miss writing this-even the parts where writers block attacked me. And, of course, the awesome reviews. Thank you. ....No epilouge though; sorry. :~)

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2010 3:45:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

First chapter. And I'm hooked. Very very well written. Can't wait to see what's in store. Oh And Xavier's an asshole.

Author's Response: Thank you!!!

Reviewer: Lorelai Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2010 2:43:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

I've been checking almost compulsively since you said it might be up today, and I'm so excited it was! It's a great chapter, and I'm so happy it wasn't as bad as it could have been and that he got her back so quickly! I'm sad it's almost over but also a little relieved that there won't be anymore cliffhangers!! Great writing as always :) I can't wait to see how you end it.

Author's Response: Wow. Thats so unbelievably awesome to hear/read. You should see my face. Thank you. Next update....this weekend. Probably Saturday.

Reviewer: DarkDragonfly Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2010 12:06:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am running out of adjective to describe how wonderful your work it.

But, if you are planning to end it in one more chapter you better be planning a sequel...

Author's Response: >fist-pumps the air, dances< Yes! Thank you! I don't *think* there will be a sequel, but the last chapter should be sufficient; hope you'll agree.

Reviewer: DarkDragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2010 9:35:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

I have been waiting all day for you to update :D

Wonderful as usual, Im sure you are tired of hearing that.

You are a master of emotion. My heart absolutely dropped when Marie wrapped Logans vase up and hid it.. Wonderful writing.

Author's Response: Sorry I made you wait so long!! :( :( .....And, trust me. I never ever get tired of it. I honestly am that greedy. Lol. Reviews are what gear me up for the next chapter, and keep me going when I've got writers block....Thank you very, very, very, very much. >hugs<

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2010 9:49:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

yeah i deleted it cause I realized that what I posted made no sense once I finished the chapter. lol

Author's Response: Oh!! Lol. Thanks.

Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2010 12:24:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

their are no words that can do justice to how much i love this story.

but i will try.

you're writing style is excellent.

the delicate character details you bring to the story are perfect.

i feel like i'm watching a weekly tv series unparalleled by any other.

and the cliffhangers always leave me screaming for more.

those are just the tip of the iceberg.

and still i failed to do justice to the art of your writing.

if you don't already, you should start writing professionaly.

Author's Response: There are no words to do justice to how happy your review made me. But I will try.... :) Thank you, thank you thank you thank you. I'm so happy you feel that way, and I hope the next chapters don't disappoint. >hugs<

Reviewer: Lorelai Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2010 12:49:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

It was much darker this chapter, especially finding out some of the horrible things they did to her in the lab. I still like it though, and I'm so anxious for updates lol! I know you can only write as fast as you can manage, but it's so hard when a story is so emotional and tugs at you, I want to find out what happens next so badly I can't be patient very well. :) Great story.

Author's Response: I'm GLAD you can't be patient well. I'm so happy and proud, to have anyone feel that way. Thank you!

Reviewer: likelandm Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2010 11:15:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hey,
Amazing story and so well done. I admit I tend to avoid really dark/angsty, unhappy stories ..and might have skipped this, except I recently read ScienceGeek and enjoyed it so much (will post review soon :)) I couldn’t pass up reading your work ...and am so glad I did. You write such a compelling story..it’s hard and gritty yet, so full of hope and humanity, each chapter has stayed with me long after reading it. So many things I want to comment on, I’ll have to make a list LOL.
-Your Rogan-I’m pretty sure if I wasn’t a fan of W/R before, I would be after ScienceGeek and this. Your Logan is so sweet (without losing any of his Logan-ness) and caring with Marie, it almost hurts it’s so achingly good. I love that despite the fallout of his actions (ie Professor’s censure etc), he would repeat them in a heartbeat to save Marie. His care and concern are shown in every small action he’s done to spare her any more pain/discomfort.
-It’s horrific what Marie’s been through and the fact that she has to be taught to feel like a human being again is beyond imagining, but I think Logan has done (and is doing) it not only with care/concern/tenderness but keeping her respect and dignity intact so that even in the future when she looks back, she’ll never have to feel embarrassed in any way with him about anything(does that make sense?)
-I love that Logan is Marie’s safe place and hopefully will continue to be so, for the rest of their lives.
-As for Jean and the Professor-it’s horrible how callously they’ve treated Marie, especially given all their tolerance propaganda, and I’m thinking Logan is on the way to being pretty disgusted by Jean (still slightly disappointed about all of Logan’s hook-ups in the mansion, lol).
Finally, Logan’s kiss on Marie’s neck was unexpectedly sensual. I know Marie’s nowhere near that stage of thinking and Logan doesn’t think of her like that, at all, yet I suspect it was more than just affection and there was something primal about it which he’ll probably realize later on (my spec.).
Okay, I wrote way too much..but the gist of it is--I love your story and wanted to let you know (umm, kinda hoping long review= quicker updates :D) Thank you so much.

Author's Response: *NOTE* THE FOLLOWING AUTHOR RESPONSE WAS WRITTEN IN A COMPLETELY PLATONIC, NON-CREEPY WAY: I love you. ThankyouthankyouthankyouThankyouthankyouthankyouThankyouthankyouthankyou. Oh my god! I literally screamed at my computer when I read this. I got up, walked around my house, leapt in the air at random moments, came back to my computer, read it again, and repeated the process. If we'd met in real life, I'd be buying you dinner. Thank you. And believe me,you could never ever have written to much. I was overjoyed, and I apologize to have taken til this afternoon to answer. I'm so glad my story could make you feel that way,and I greatly look forward to your Science Geek Series review. If it's half as kind as this, I will be ecstatic.....I wish I could promise you a chapter update tomorrow, but it'll most likely take a week. I swear it's not laziness; I write every spare moment I get, but that amounts to only a few hours at the end of the day. Once again, thank you thank you thank you.

Reviewer: Geeves Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2010 7:59:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

I have to say. I never review anymore. I read the stories on my mobile so I never sign in so me writing this is just proof of how awesome this story is. I have been following this story and the end of that last chapter (4) just made cry a bit...and smile and whisper, "it's such a good story. It's such a good story"

This is such a good story. Keep doin what your doing and I'll keep reading and saying "It's such a good story" ... cause it is.

Author's Response: Oh. My. God. I keep reading you words over and over again. I'm so grateful, so proud I could have that effect on you. Omg. Thank you so so so so much. I'll have the next chapter up in a week, and I hope I can make you say that again.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2010 6:10:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is my kind of story!

Reviewer: Lorelai Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2010 12:23:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is a really wonderful story. Interesting and unique with beautiful writing and imagery, even though it's still dark. I really like it I hope you update it soon! I'm dying to find out what happens next.

Author's Response: Can you feel it? I'm hugging you. Thank you so, so much. I'm glad you like it and hope you continue to. Next update soon!

Reviewer: Solidae Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2010 2:01:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is so sad - but beautiful. Why isn't her skin working? Hmmm...can't wait to find out!

Author's Response: Thank you!!! No spoilers for you, though.... ;~)

Reviewer: kluane Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2010 2:03:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm so happy to have a new story to be excited about! I love your plot and hope you keep writing.

Author's Response: Sorry this took me so long to respond to-I must have accidently overlooked it. But thank you!!!!!!!

Reviewer: DarkDragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2010 8:08:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

As I said before, absolutely brilliant work.

I so thrilled to long on today and see an update.

I am much less adept at expressing myself through text but I do hope you realize the talent for capturing emotions and details that you have.

Eagerly awaiting another update lol!

Author's Response: Im so thrilled with your review! Thank you, I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2010 2:45:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

And this is unbelievably wonderful. The hairs on the back of my neck stood up on 'And something in him fierce and ancient reared up.' The connection is made...let it never be broken. Bring on Chapter 2 --Wendie

Reviewer: Freespirit Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2010 7:06:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love it so far!
I wonder what kind of relationship you thought of for Logan and Marie in this fic.

Please, update fast!

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2010 4:03:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT! update soon plz

Reviewer: DarkDragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2010 6:39:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Absolutely stunning, Your method of writing really draws a picture in the mind of the reader (atleast for me)

I am itching for an update ASAP!!!

Author's Response: And you'll get it. ASAP!!!! :-) :-) ;-) Thank you.

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