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Date: 01/04/2011 3:13:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
I don't think there were any glaring medical inaccuracies, but Im not in the medical field either.
Wow this is such a fascinating story! I love Storm
[Report This]Date: 04/21/2010 3:56:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
Brilliant. :D
Date: 04/06/2010 2:08:54 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm kind of glad I discovered this with more than one chapter written - but I'm already sad that I'm catching up...
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2010 6:06:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
this is such a great chapter. the attention to detail you pay in his careful nurturing care for her wounds and frailness is very chilling. he's almost clinical...but only to a point where the man in him feels sympathy and pain for her...and anger, but its muted by his concern for trying to keep her alive.
very well done and i can't wait to read more.
glad Storm at least has a heart...was starting to think all the X-men were cold bastards like Xavier.
Author's Response: Thank you!nnI've always liked Ororo, but I have trouble repressing my feelings for the other xmen. Its just so fun to hate them.
Date: 04/04/2010 2:00:07 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hard subject to write but you've done it so well. Again so descriptive, tugging at the heart as you read.
‘50 miles to here, 200 miles to there. The view out the window shifted back and forth’ - there’s a real loneliness in this line, nothing changing/everything the same, knowing for him this is how it always has been.
Loved the last line - Wonderful way to finish, even if I caught myself shouting at you for stopping there :)
I’m completely hooked – damn you and damn my impatience!
p.s. would love to help but know absolutely nothing about tags/ html tags or anything computer related at all – complete technological phobic, usually just hit a few buttons and hope for the best!
Author's Response: Oh my god, thank you. I was actually worried that line wouldnt go over well, but you got it. Im deliberately keeping locations vague, so its accessible to everyone.
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2010 12:13:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love how meticulous he's being in his care for her. And I love the detail you use in describing all that he is going through trying to keep her alive. You are doing an excellent job, please keep up with this story.
Author's Response: Thank you. I promise I will.
Date: 04/04/2010 11:50:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
This is just getting better and better. Now I want Xavier AND Jean to suffer the consequences of their actions. It would be nice to see Scott, of all people, to stand up to them. I shamefully admit it's because I want to see Jean grovel (blushes completely).
Author's Response: Lol. Happy you like it. :) :)
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2010 9:34:58 AM Title: Chapter 2
I am really, really enjoying this story so far. You're right, it is very dark, but it's realistic and that's what counts in a story like this one. Real but not graphic. I eagerly look forward to your next chapter.
PS: I can answer any html questions you have. Feel free to ask.
Author's Response: Thank you so so much. This story looks like its gonna be much longer than I thought, but Im enjoying it...............are html tags what you use to italic/bold/underscore stuff? Could you email me? luenluvelia@gmail.com
Date: 04/04/2010 4:30:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
Once again, this is so beautifully written. You create such an eerily-dark atmosphere and stir up heart-breaking emotion. Love it. xx
Author's Response: Thank you. Im glad you like the heartbreak! ;)
Date: 04/04/2010 3:57:01 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love his connection with Ororo. So few words, yet so much information.
My heart broke when he had to help her use the bathroom--like a parent with a toddler, or a hospice worker with a dying patient. You do an amazing job of showing us the depth of her helplessness and his compassion.
I noticed in the first chapter that your Rogue reminded me of the one in aranenumenesse's 'The Glass Butterfly' --and then in this chapter you compare her hand to a pale moth. If you haven't read ara's story, you should--it is, in a word, unforgettable. Your story feels to me like what might have happened if Logan had found 'the butterfly' even one day sooner.
*sniff* --again. Fave, again. --Wendie
Author's Response: Thank you. I always love your reviews....just read The Glass Butterfly. Cried my eyes out. Oh. My. God. It's just not healthy to write that well.
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2010 3:05:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
i loooooooove it, cant wait for next chapter
Date: 04/04/2010 2:00:34 AM Title: Chapter 2
Very nice!!
I think I'm falling in love with this fic!!
Oh, and I loved the passionate past you made up between Logan and Storm (blush)...
Author's Response: Gracias. I surprised myself with that Rolo touch. I didnt know I was gonna add that til it was on the paper.
Date: 04/04/2010 2:00:23 AM Title: Chapter 2
Again, wonderful start you have here. I can't wait until Marie's strong enough to at least speak. That'll be wonderful. Can't wait unitl your next update!
Author's Response: >hugs< I cant wait either. Next chapter soon.
Date: 04/04/2010 12:03:50 AM Title: Chapter 2
I like how gentle he's being with her. This story of pain and degradation is artfully told. Eagerly waiting for your next update.
Author's Response: Omg. Thank you. :)
Date: 04/03/2010 11:07:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
I am love, love, loving your descriptions.
Once again you're still doing a great job of balancing Logan here: his unwavering care of Marie & his ahem... extracurricular activities.
Author's Response: I am love, love, loving your reviews.
Date: 04/03/2010 9:58:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
First, I still love it. Xavier is such a hard ass. The idea of Logan seeking out Hank's help just makes my heart sing. I like the touch of Logan/Ororo too.
Second, you have 'took' instead of 'tool' in section about Xavier calling Logan. You may want to change it.
Can't wait for the next chapter. BTW I went back and reread the Terri story.
Author's Response: I went back and corrected 'tool'as soon as I read this. Thank you for pointing it out, and for your review!
Date: 04/03/2010 7:53:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
Rosesummer-- you have a real talent for the heart-rending. Man, I hope this all ends well or I'm just gonna cry. Keep up the good work and keep posting... frequently!
Author's Response: Thank you so so so much. I was worried that it *wouldnt* come out heartrending.....I promise to never take more than a week between updates.