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Date: 01/04/2011 3:34:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
Whoa! So intense! Amazing chapter, and I hate (as in I love that she's evil). jean
[Report This]Date: 04/21/2010 4:27:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
God he is such a wonderful man. No one else sees it. But he's becoming her only tie back to reality.
Author's Response: Hell yeah!!!
[Report This]Date: 04/14/2010 12:36:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
wow, very powerful. i love the way she finally talks and it's just desperate and sad and scared.
love this story.
and p.s. JEAN SUCKS AS USUAL! YAY I LOVE HATING JEAN! could she be more obvious in that new green low-cut dress. desperate harlot lol!
Author's Response: Super-duper thank you!!!!!!!!!! .....and desperate harlot indeed.
[Report This]Date: 04/12/2010 3:02:27 PM Title: Chapter 4
That poor kid. The nice thing, if it can be referred to as "nice", is that while you're putting Marie through so much trauma, you've established such a realistic protector in Logan that it's not as horrific as it could be. All the kid needs is someone to finally be there to protect her from everything bad in the world, even if one of those bad things are the residents of the mansion. Please keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to your next update.
Author's Response: Oh, my. I dont even know how to thank you for this review. I can't find any grateful words in my dictionary that I havent used already. Just...thank you!!!
Date: 04/12/2010 2:06:30 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: THANK YOU!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 04/11/2010 2:14:23 AM Title: Chapter 4
This was very epically good. And the ending was so bittersweet. I do love what you're doing here... I'm just so desperate I'd wish you'd update everyday! But as a writer, I know how difficult, if not impossible, that is. But excellent work! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you understand. I am writing as quickly as I can, without trashing the story.
Date: 04/11/2010 1:00:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm so excited to find out where this goes and I'll be heartbroken if you never finish.
I love it!
Author's Response: Oh, I promise you I won't quit this story until the end. Unless I get a long weekend, it usually takes me about a week to write each chapter. :) Thank you for the review; I hope you continue to enjoy!
[Report This]Date: 04/10/2010 11:26:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
:( i want more chapters.......i get sad now that i see in my emai that u only updated 1 more chapter i want more then one chapter. im greedy. but its reallyreallyreallyreallyreallyreallyrealy good
Author's Response: So sorry! But I swear it isen't from laziness on my part. I write every single day, but it takes me about a week to finish, with my other responsibilities. I'm happy you enjoy it so much!
Date: 04/10/2010 11:15:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
Yeah...! Definitely good. I love the way you ever so slowly thicken the bond between Logan and Marie. And the fact that the Mansion's geeks are total asses, gives Logan's feelings an even greater depth (in my opinion at the very least).
I can't wait to read more about Marie's feelings about Logan's devotion to her. You did a Master's job with the nightmare scene and the introduction to the world inside Marie's head.
I was already in love with your story, but now... (won't say more)
Please, update soon, you'll make somebody very, very happy!
Author's Response: Omg. >hugs< Super mambo thanks. You have no clue how bouncing-in-my-seat-yes!-yes!-happy this review made me. I'll try to make the rest of the story just as good, and I promise to update as quickly as humanly possible.
Date: 04/10/2010 10:41:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
You've really nailed Logan and how he would handle all of this! I love it. Keep going.
Wondering if you know what story it might be where Rogue was raped, got pregnant and came back to the mansion. Logan then decides to build her a nursery but doesn't talk to her much until he really takes care of her and they fall in love. If you find it please, please let me know! Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you!.....Logan building her a nursery sounds vaguely familiar, but I'm not sure...You might want to check Terri's fics, and the old WRFA(because some of the old fics were not uploaded). If those do not work, if you can remember any sentance in the story, Google it. Good luck!
Date: 04/10/2010 10:11:49 PM Title: Chapter 4
I could just kill the slut bitch...I mean Jean. What the hell is she thinking?! Obviously she isn't. You;re good. You have me worked up over this story!
Author's Response: YES!! >pumps air with fist< that's what I'm talkin 'bout. So glad I could have that effect on a reader. Thank you!
Date: 04/10/2010 6:56:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ok I really hate, absolutely HATE Jean! But my question is, Why in hell did Logan let that happen to Marie? He should have stopped Jean!
Author's Response: Yeah, I hate Jean too.It's just so fun. :)..... Marie's injuries did require her to see a doctor. I stretched reality in the previous chapter, let her heal a bit or else she would have died without medical attention--a saline drip, for example. Logan could not stop Jean because he knew he'd have to come back later with Marie to finish the tests, and he wouldn't have been able to put her through that again. Thank you for reviewing, I hope I clarified things!
Date: 04/10/2010 6:13:03 PM Title: Chapter 4
OMFG! Once again, I bow to your amazing ability to set the scene, for example, when they first approach the institute and how you described their surroundings in only one or two amazingly descriptive sentences.
Jean is perfectly portrayed and Logan’s protectiveness over little Rogue is so compelling and adorable. This is certainly a dark story, but there are ribbons of well-placed ‘Logan sweetness’ running through it, which I absolutely love.
When I first started reading this story I honestly thought it couldn’t get any better. But I was wrong.
Most amazing line: “But she grew silent, motionless. Logan watched pieces of her die, one after another. Like tiny murders.”
Author's Response: There are very, very few words that can express my response online that I haven't used already to other reviews. I hope you believe how sincere I am when I say thank you, I'm happy you liked it, and I hope you continue to enjoy the rest. Your review put a huge smile on my face and made me bounce on my chair.
Date: 04/10/2010 5:53:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
God how can Xavier and Jean be so dense? And heartless? They can read minds!!! Grrrr. This is still one of best stories around, Keep it up.
Author's Response: Thank you!!! Thank you!!! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 04/10/2010 5:42:16 PM Title: Chapter 4
This story moves me more than I have been moved in a very very long time. You have such talent, thank you for sharing and please please continue.
Author's Response: I'm so happy that my writing could make anyone feel that way. Thank you. >hugs< Next chapter will be posted about the same time next Saturday. Only three or so chapters to go.
Date: 04/10/2010 5:34:22 PM Title: Chapter 4
I bow to your awesome talent--describing a gang rape with one line and making it feel more menacing and horrific than any ten pages of description by a lesser writer--Holy Mother, that was amazing! Actually, everything about the whole mansion/med lab experience was perfectly played--her progression from wide-eyed wonder to catatonic oblivion--excellent. Logan's guilt was positively heart-wrenching.
And I'm sorry it was what it was, but thank Christ something finally shut Jean up. (Between your story and mine, she's getting way too much action with Logan to suit me. Damn her!)
I am so anxious to see what Xavier's problem is--and how Logan deals with it.
Nice job on the italics. Looks good. --Wendie
Author's Response: Thank you! Thank you! You wouldn't believe how crazy happy I am right now. After years of reading everything on this site, all the brilliant authors and stories, I am always shocked at even the idea of someone liking my writing. I don't think I'll ever get used to it. :) In a good way.
Date: 04/10/2010 3:04:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
*growls*
I'm angry because of what happened to Marie and that's why I had to growl - wait till you make me sad and I'll be crying all over my keyboard.
I'm known for growling and blubbering with mass tissue use around here ;)
Author's Response: Oh! Lol. Make sure u put a protective sheet over your computer. ;) Gracias.
Date: 04/10/2010 1:59:23 PM Title: Chapter 4
This is so heartbreaking! Poor, poor Marie. What's up w/ the prof? I'm not entirely sure what kind of mind juju he did on Marie, but I don't like it.
Your description of Jean and the way she carries herself was perfect, but then again I also think that Jean needs to be pushed off of the Blackbird so I'm a little biased. Just sayin'...
Author's Response: Lol, thank you. I think we all wanna see her pushed out of a plane. >sigh< Someday....