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[Report This]Date: 04/05/2010 6:26:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
Ug Chuck in this story makes me want to smack him around. Great job so far. I don't know what would be off on this chapter. It keeps with the slowly improving of the girl.
Author's Response: I have a hard time writing good Chucks. Something about him and Jean....
Date: 04/05/2010 5:21:11 PM Title: Chapter 3
I hope Logan hands Xavier his ass. I love the realism in this story. Good job. Can't wait for your next update!
Author's Response: >hugs< Next update will be about Friday/Saturday.
Date: 04/05/2010 4:30:04 PM Title: Chapter 3
I liked the change of pace. In this chapter it was shorter snippets of time moving quicker as opposed to the more detailed smaller sections in the last - I also liked the moments of ‘what was and now is’ [no driving fast/no quick release - putting Rogue 1st] The caring and protectiveness there for us to read even if Logan doesn’t understand it yet!
‘She said his name’ – simple but extremely effective – definate ahh factor!
Gold star for the quick update :) Keep it coming so I can keep reading!
Author's Response: >pins gold star on poster board< Thank you. I guesstimated this story would be about 5 chapters, but its looking like more. I hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: 04/05/2010 2:44:35 PM Title: Chapter 3
Xavier better get some good brainstorming and tongue lashing when Logan returns (very tiny voice : and Jean too). This is turning into a masterpiece. I absolutely love Logan's cold rage, when he beat the guy up.And anyone saying that your story is destroying the page is insane and intentionally cruel. Yes, both.
Author's Response: Thank you!! I've got the biggest smile on my face.........Nobody really said that to me(thank god), it was a nightmare I had. But I'm grateful, regardless.
Date: 04/05/2010 1:34:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
This was another amazingly written chapter, slowly and quietly filling me with hope as our little Rogue recovers. I absolutely love the way she creeps nearer and nearer to Logan over time and the line, “She said his name,” was perfectly placed.
Also, this made me smile, “He made some quick, experienced calculations. Three minutes of mandatory, introductory flirting. Eight minutes to get her outside. Five minutes to her motel room. Twenty minutes inside aforementioned room. Two minutes recovery. One and a half minutes of her pleading with him to stay.” lol!
I can’t wait for the next chapter, this is one of the most anticipated stories I’ve read in a long time. xx
P.S. In response to your concerns, in my opinion there is nothing ‘off’ with this story. Nothing at all.
Author's Response: "Thank you" seems meaningless after awhile, but I do greatly appreciate your review. Muchas gracias.
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2010 6:06:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
this is such a great chapter. the attention to detail you pay in his careful nurturing care for her wounds and frailness is very chilling. he's almost clinical...but only to a point where the man in him feels sympathy and pain for her...and anger, but its muted by his concern for trying to keep her alive.
very well done and i can't wait to read more.
glad Storm at least has a heart...was starting to think all the X-men were cold bastards like Xavier.
Author's Response: Thank you!nnI've always liked Ororo, but I have trouble repressing my feelings for the other xmen. Its just so fun to hate them.
Date: 04/04/2010 2:00:07 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hard subject to write but you've done it so well. Again so descriptive, tugging at the heart as you read.
‘50 miles to here, 200 miles to there. The view out the window shifted back and forth’ - there’s a real loneliness in this line, nothing changing/everything the same, knowing for him this is how it always has been.
Loved the last line - Wonderful way to finish, even if I caught myself shouting at you for stopping there :)
I’m completely hooked – damn you and damn my impatience!
p.s. would love to help but know absolutely nothing about tags/ html tags or anything computer related at all – complete technological phobic, usually just hit a few buttons and hope for the best!
Author's Response: Oh my god, thank you. I was actually worried that line wouldnt go over well, but you got it. Im deliberately keeping locations vague, so its accessible to everyone.
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2010 12:13:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love how meticulous he's being in his care for her. And I love the detail you use in describing all that he is going through trying to keep her alive. You are doing an excellent job, please keep up with this story.
Author's Response: Thank you. I promise I will.
Date: 04/04/2010 11:50:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
This is just getting better and better. Now I want Xavier AND Jean to suffer the consequences of their actions. It would be nice to see Scott, of all people, to stand up to them. I shamefully admit it's because I want to see Jean grovel (blushes completely).
Author's Response: Lol. Happy you like it. :) :)
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2010 9:34:58 AM Title: Chapter 2
I am really, really enjoying this story so far. You're right, it is very dark, but it's realistic and that's what counts in a story like this one. Real but not graphic. I eagerly look forward to your next chapter.
PS: I can answer any html questions you have. Feel free to ask.
Author's Response: Thank you so so much. This story looks like its gonna be much longer than I thought, but Im enjoying it...............are html tags what you use to italic/bold/underscore stuff? Could you email me? luenluvelia@gmail.com
Date: 04/04/2010 4:30:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
Once again, this is so beautifully written. You create such an eerily-dark atmosphere and stir up heart-breaking emotion. Love it. xx
Author's Response: Thank you. Im glad you like the heartbreak! ;)
Date: 04/04/2010 3:57:01 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love his connection with Ororo. So few words, yet so much information.
My heart broke when he had to help her use the bathroom--like a parent with a toddler, or a hospice worker with a dying patient. You do an amazing job of showing us the depth of her helplessness and his compassion.
I noticed in the first chapter that your Rogue reminded me of the one in aranenumenesse's 'The Glass Butterfly' --and then in this chapter you compare her hand to a pale moth. If you haven't read ara's story, you should--it is, in a word, unforgettable. Your story feels to me like what might have happened if Logan had found 'the butterfly' even one day sooner.
*sniff* --again. Fave, again. --Wendie
Author's Response: Thank you. I always love your reviews....just read The Glass Butterfly. Cried my eyes out. Oh. My. God. It's just not healthy to write that well.
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2010 3:05:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
i loooooooove it, cant wait for next chapter
Date: 04/04/2010 2:03:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm so happy to have a new story to be excited about! I love your plot and hope you keep writing.
Author's Response: Sorry this took me so long to respond to-I must have accidently overlooked it. But thank you!!!!!!!
Date: 04/04/2010 2:00:34 AM Title: Chapter 2
Very nice!!
I think I'm falling in love with this fic!!
Oh, and I loved the passionate past you made up between Logan and Storm (blush)...
Author's Response: Gracias. I surprised myself with that Rolo touch. I didnt know I was gonna add that til it was on the paper.
Date: 04/04/2010 2:00:23 AM Title: Chapter 2
Again, wonderful start you have here. I can't wait until Marie's strong enough to at least speak. That'll be wonderful. Can't wait unitl your next update!
Author's Response: >hugs< I cant wait either. Next chapter soon.
Date: 04/04/2010 12:03:50 AM Title: Chapter 2
I like how gentle he's being with her. This story of pain and degradation is artfully told. Eagerly waiting for your next update.
Author's Response: Omg. Thank you. :)
Date: 04/03/2010 11:07:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
I am love, love, loving your descriptions.
Once again you're still doing a great job of balancing Logan here: his unwavering care of Marie & his ahem... extracurricular activities.
Author's Response: I am love, love, loving your reviews.
Date: 04/03/2010 9:58:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
First, I still love it. Xavier is such a hard ass. The idea of Logan seeking out Hank's help just makes my heart sing. I like the touch of Logan/Ororo too.
Second, you have 'took' instead of 'tool' in section about Xavier calling Logan. You may want to change it.
Can't wait for the next chapter. BTW I went back and reread the Terri story.
Author's Response: I went back and corrected 'tool'as soon as I read this. Thank you for pointing it out, and for your review!
Date: 04/03/2010 8:08:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
As I said before, absolutely brilliant work.
I so thrilled to long on today and see an update.
I am much less adept at expressing myself through text but I do hope you realize the talent for capturing emotions and details that you have.
Eagerly awaiting another update lol!
Author's Response: Im so thrilled with your review! Thank you, I really appreciate it.
Date: 04/03/2010 7:53:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
Rosesummer-- you have a real talent for the heart-rending. Man, I hope this all ends well or I'm just gonna cry. Keep up the good work and keep posting... frequently!
Author's Response: Thank you so so so much. I was worried that it *wouldnt* come out heartrending.....I promise to never take more than a week between updates.
Date: 04/03/2010 2:45:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
And this is unbelievably wonderful. The hairs on the back of my neck stood up on 'And something in him fierce and ancient reared up.' The connection is made...let it never be broken. Bring on Chapter 2 --Wendie
Date: 04/03/2010 7:06:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love it so far!
I wonder what kind of relationship you thought of for Logan and Marie in this fic.
Please, update fast!
[Report This]Date: 04/03/2010 4:03:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT! update soon plz
Date: 04/02/2010 6:39:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely stunning, Your method of writing really draws a picture in the mind of the reader (atleast for me)
I am itching for an update ASAP!!!
Author's Response: And you'll get it. ASAP!!!! :-) :-) ;-) Thank you.