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Date: 04/01/2010 6:11:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh God, I love this!
I love the way you describe the surroundings throughout. The cold clinical lab, the dingy motel, etc...
Describing surroundings can easily be taken for granted, just like when you enter a room and quite simply seeing it, I guess. But I don’t underestimate the skill that has gone into setting the scene perfectly.
And the way you describe Rogue when he gets her into the motel room - well - it made my stomach roll and there are very few stories that have that effect on me. Brilliant writing.
The darkness, the pure horror, is absolutely mind-blowing. I want more... xx
Author's Response: Can you hear? I'm shouting from the roof top. (Metaphorically speaking: Id probably break my legs climbing up there). Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2010 10:22:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very disturbing, in a beautiful kind of way. You make me anxious to see what happens next.
Author's Response: >hugs tightly< I hope the rest comes out good as well.
Date: 04/01/2010 9:55:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Disturbing and artfully told. Xavier is an ass in this story. Something you don't see often but it works. I look forward to your next update.
Author's Response: Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou...
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2010 9:44:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
2 x beautiful lines that I had to pick out:-
‘as his claws kissed the open air again’
‘A trigger-happy artist had gone over the girl, painting her skin with red and purple swirling bruises’
Your description is wonderful, contrasts of short and sharp hitting right to the point to lengthy detailed sentencing, great to read.
Further into your story I would like to see the Prof put in his place, you seem to have no problem getting the violence written and I for one am all for a bit more in that respect!
I’m also presuming the reason as to why Jean likes to be the one that calls him will be revealed? I vote for more deathly claw action where she’s concerned but that’s always going to be my opinion where she’s concerned!
No skin reaction? Because of the drugs or something else? You see this is why I like to wait, too many questions - patience is definitely not my thing!!!!!! But you promised so I’m going to trust you.
You've got the underlying protectiveness/bond set up and ready to explore, great start – now stop reading silly reviews and get back to the writing!
Author's Response: Lol. Thank you so much. As soon as I finish answering these silly reviews-and reading over them for the tenth time, I will start working on the second chapter. Short of a natural disaster, like a tornado or earthquake, or a spectacular bout of writer's block, you will see an update by Wednesday....to be honest, I'd prefer the tornado to writer's block. I'm very glad you picked up on the Jean-calling-thing, and Marie's skin, but I don't want to give spoilers. :) :) Happy reading.
Date: 04/01/2010 9:41:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
wow. Poor Marie. I am really liking this story so far. I really hope you intend to finish it. I just know this is one that I will be following to the very end! so please write more!!
Author's Response: Thank you, and I promise I will finish this...it's early, but I'd guestimate about...five chapters total. I really hope you enjoy the rest.
Date: 04/01/2010 7:47:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
wow great begining, I can feel the angst across the pages. Hope to read more soon. I love these story's where Xavier is so cold, make for great fic's. Hope to read the next chapter soon, and really hope she's not 16!
Author's Response: >takes bow< Thank you. >So happy<
Date: 04/01/2010 7:26:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Xavier can be such an ass. I would very much like him to swallow his own words and do a little groveling. After all, he promised Logan it was not a real lab. Waiting for the next one.
p.s. : What if Logan refuses to go back to the Mansion?
Author's Response: I love when I can make a reader hate a character. It's awesome! But no spoilers for you! :)
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2010 5:07:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
"Logan thought about what Xavier said, one rescue meaningless compared to hundreds of other potential victims."
i like it when the Professor is cold...makes for verrrrry interesting scenarios.
and YAY for Logan rescuing her...damn the mission, he showed his humanity, which is something most the X-men think he doesn't have.
can't wait for the next update...adding to fave now!
Author's Response: >hugs< I'm so glad you like it. You should see an update in about a week, perhaps sooner but no later.
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2010 12:50:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh...This is starting out wonderfully! Lovely start you have here. I can't wait to see where this goes next!
Date: 03/31/2010 11:48:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like it. I really like your opening paragraphs and how you set it up. I'm interested to see where you are going with this story... I'm hoping she's not actually 16 lol... that would be a risky Rogan... lol.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!!! I'm iffy about her age right now, but I promise I never put Marie too young. Very hard to answer this without spoiling!
[Report This]Date: 03/31/2010 11:14:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
heart-breaking, well-articulated, true to character, and utterly compelling. like it? I love it! please keep it coming.
Author's Response: Like your review? I love it! Thank you. You should see the second chapter soon. Off to start it now....
Date: 03/31/2010 11:01:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, pretty powerful chapter. Can't wait to read the next part.
Date: 03/31/2010 10:39:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am in love with this. I am trying to determine if you were inspired by the Terri story with Scott and him leaving Logan and Marie behind or A Month in Color, or A Natural Progression. Any of them are great and I am waiting to see how you have this go. I am looking forward to your next update.
Author's Response: >hugs very very very tightly and offers plate of cookies< Thank you...I'm not completely sure on the name, but this was mostly inspired by the one where Logan finds the mono-syllabic Marie in the woods, a lab escapee, and lets her live in his room.
[Report This]Date: 03/31/2010 10:16:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG I love where this is going. Please do continue.
Author's Response: >gleeful hug<
Date: 03/31/2010 10:14:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh mess. I like this. I really like this. Perfect balance of ass kicking & comfort from Logan - I bow at your ability to once again capture him so well. Marie is pretty damn heartbreaking here.
I can't wait to see where you go with this. I think this story is going to be an addiction so consider yourself responsible for keeping me from going through withdrawal...no pressure or anything ;)
Author's Response: I bow at your ability to make me bounce gleefully in my chair. And I promise, I'm a total fanaddict enabler-you'll get the next chapter soon.
[Report This]Date: 03/31/2010 9:56:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
ditto. i love where this is going and cant wait for the updates.
Date: 03/31/2010 9:49:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
More please. Love it so far.