Oh, I never said porn WITH plot was a bad thing... ;-) Really very much enjoy your girls fighting, though. They are tough and inventive and can stand their own - such a relief from so many "I need him to protect me" girls.
Oh, and Wolverine? With the "I'm not letting her go again"? Not your decision, I'm afraid.
And now the boyfriend is saving her life. It's about time he became a little less of a type (much as I enjoy bashing him), if you don't mind me saying so. Anyway, Logan does know about obligations, and his own shortcomings, and he'll have to chew on this one quie a while, I'd imagine. Ha, angst!
Hobbits away indeed!

Oh, Jesus, it's going to KILL Logan if Callum saves her when he couldn't. He's gonna feel like he owes the jerk Marie's life...the angst will be hip deep -- again. Damn!

This is positively epic. I know because I read the entire thing sitting, quite literally, on the edge of my chair, shoveling chips and dip in my mouth so fast you'd have thought I hadn't eaten for a week. If my fingernails weren't already too short to chew on, I'd have ravaged them, too!

I can't get enough of this story! --Wendie

Yeah yeah yeah yeah! And *hell* yeah! I was thrilled when I saw you'd updated and then I read the chapter. I'm practically hooting with excitement. You are *so* good at action, hobbitmydear. So very good. I'm now totally charged with energy and wishing I could go kick someone's ass and save the world. Unfortunately, that's not what's "on the agenda" for today. Drats. Anyway, may someone deliver a colossal chocolate fudge sundae directly to your desk, so you may sit and enjoy and keep writing writing writing. Wahoo!