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Date: 01/04/2011 7:27:31 PM Title: You Shook Me All Night Long
Another awesome chapter! 22 minutes later. LOL!
Like the previous chapter, I really like how they are finally talking to each and being honest and mature about it. I'm glad she told him that loves him and wants him her life but admitted that she needs time. And that she was clear about how she feels and what she needs from him. It was good that she had gotten over her anger and was willing to talk to him and not leave him hanging or try to punish him either. And the fact that he is going to work on giving her the control and romance that she needs--just perfect!
Date: 01/04/2011 5:59:08 AM Title: You Shook Me All Night Long
freakn epic fic! this is one of the best fics I've read in ages. I only hope my own fic will someday come somewhat close
Date: 01/04/2011 2:24:23 AM Title: You Shook Me All Night Long
awesome as usual, and so looking forward to another chapter- yeah!
I love how Logan showed up 22 minutes later after the text, pure hilarity.
My fav line from this chapter, " “No! Ah’m done punishing you, you should know that. That’s why Ah kicked Callum to the curb. But Ah wanna have some control over what we do. Ah wanna decide the pace for a while. Ah wanna-” She took a deep breath, “Ah wanna- Ah wanna be chased, Logan.”" It's awesome how Rogue is woman enough to demand to be treated better. And so she should...Logan's put her through a lot.
I love how you write Logan's POV, btw. "He’d promised he’d give her time and that’s exactly what he intended to do- Even if it killed him." Ha, you definitely have his self-depreciation, honorable intentions, and humor down that the wolvie of the comics is famous for.
I highly anticipate some dating followed by some smut. Aw, good times.
[Report This]Date: 12/28/2010 1:58:20 PM Title: You Shook Me All Night Long
Nice ending to the tale!
or is this an ending? I've noted, just now, that it's still posted as "incomplete". You *could* end it satisfyingly right here if you're running out of juice ... but if you have further adventures for Logan & his girls, I certainly have no objection!
In fact, I would *love* some little one-shots of past and/or future action with this bunch. I really enjoyed the way you characterized Jubes & Kit-Kat in this story; it's unique!
[Report This]Date: 12/25/2010 7:43:50 PM Title: You Shook Me All Night Long
I don't know a woman alive -- young or old -- who wouldn't benefit from some 'control' lessons from your Marie. God knows I would have -- should have -- but that's another story. And if she's ever gonna be romanced by her muscley feral, she's gonna have to ask and keep askin', 'cause it sure ain't in his nature, now is it? Good for her for knowing what she wants and good for him for being smart enough -- and in love enough -- to give it to her. I love how grown-up they both are, using their heads as well as their hearts (to say nothing of other parts) to make decisions about their future together. Then again, you're pathologically incapable of writing anything that isn't smart and honest in both plot and characterization, so I am not the least bit surprised this is all those things, too. --Wendie
[Report This]Date: 12/25/2010 5:10:20 AM Title: You Shook Me All Night Long
I'm glad I could encourage you, and I think it was the perfect decision to have this little interlude before jumping into the smut headfirst. Very nice imagery in this chapter.
Date: 12/24/2010 8:14:40 PM Title: You Shook Me All Night Long
Tease! Tease!
I'd be put out if I wasn't so sure that you'd eventually deliver the goods. You're right though - this does feel necessary. While I like some good ol' fashioned Rogan smut like the next WRFAer, sometimes you've got to put it on the backburner until you get the characters' heads out of their asses.
I'm glad you followed your Marie-muse - she *did* have a point.
So.....uh....not to sound like a pervert or anything, but uh...can we get that smut now?