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Reviewer: Samantha_McKay Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2010 3:08:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

I agree that this story does need another chapter. I love open endings but this one is begging for more.

Reviewer: Blue Morpho Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2010 11:45:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

Whoa. Okay, you NEED to write another chapter for this story. Very unique story idea, and a very, um...different Rogue. More, PLEASE!

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2010 2:51:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

*votes for a second chapter*

I love stories that twist Marie around into the predator in the relationship. Please do carry on, since it's apparent Marie will!

Reviewer: annie77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2010 3:55:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

Go psycho Marie go!!! lol I just pictured in my head logans face when he figured out what was going on. Very nice fic!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2010 10:29:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

*is speechless*

*applauds*

Reviewer: pwaller93 Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2010 10:28:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

Holy schmoly, this was all sorts of weird and kinky and so Logan and Marie it's insane. I don't really know what to say apart from this is incredibly unique, and something I never imagined for this ship... but it works. Nicely done!

Reviewer: immiD Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2010 4:21:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great job! keep it up!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2010 3:35:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

Call me crazy, but this seems like a Chapter 1 meant to be followed by at least a chapter 2, yet you checked off the little 'complete?' box. Then again, maybe Marie is the crazy one in this story...*whistles theme from 'Twilight Zone'*...This is very well-written, but decidedly weird. And I mean that in the nicest way, 'cause it seemed like 'weird' is what you were going for here. --Wendie

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2010 3:27:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, this is such an unusual story! And I mean that as a positive; I love unique ideas, especially those that are well-written. It’s edging on dark, which I love, and I hope you plan to continue this...?

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2010 3:15:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

Shit. He's really going to leave.

And he probably thinks she's a fuckin psycho.

I like this.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2010 2:39:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow thats a really different story! I went into reading this dreading the outcome but I came out really liking it. You did a great job showing that Logan 'knew' what as happening even if he couldn't admit it to himself consciously. Marie was the picture of desperation and longing. I was really surprised at the end with the pregnancy. I would really like to know if Logan comes back and what Marie does next. So please consider writing more of this!

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2010 12:01:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

i think it needs a second chapter

Reviewer: Freespirit Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2010 10:28:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

Okay, I read it, I liked it, and now, you *need* to make a sequel, you know that, right? Can't bear to see Logan running away like that, knowing that Rogue is in BIG trouble! Please...!

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