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Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2010 10:26:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hmm, I know you're still deciding, but can I vote for the happy ending? These two get enough thrown at them, they could use some warm fuzzies at the end of the day. Why yes, yes I am a little biased since I read this after crying my eyes out over the latest episode of my favorite show. So please with the happy?...and kittens...

I am still crazy jealous of your mastery of the English language and subsequently putting them fancy words all together right nicely. Everything either of them notices/describes is so very detailed, but still delicately subtle at the same time. Boggles my mind as to how you do that.

Favorite: "The light from the chandelier glints off his face. The green in Logan's eyes absorbs it, like a forest pine tree touched by the morning light. Nothing escapes those eyes. Reading me completely, even the fine print. They widen; his nostrils flex and I feel like I'm telling him secrets I didn't even know I had."

Author's Response: Hello again. I think it's bad luck not to respond to an awesome long review(my favorite kind), so I will again. Feel free to skip it. ;-) .....I'm happy for your vote, and I gotta say Im leaning toward happy ending. (Ssh. Dont tell.) Can't promise anything, though. Im, like, 70%. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter/my descriptions, and I hope you will continue to do so. Thanks.

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