Reviews For Outside Looking In
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Jahunta4974 Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2015 11:24:44 AM Title: Outside Looking In

Wow! Such an awesome story! I just love the whole role reversal, with MARIE losing her memories and Logan trying to help her recover. It's intense and emotional and Logan's pain at failing to protect Marie shines through, even without his POV. It's such a beautiful story.

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2013 4:38:25 PM Title: Outside Looking In

Wonderful. Very emotional, and such a satisfying ending. Beautiful story!

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2013 8:35:55 PM Title: Outside Looking In

What a wonderful story!!  I'm almost sorry it's done. It was written so very well, my heart in my throat as Marie evesdropped, as she convinced Logan, as the memories returned!! Any chance of some sort of continuation? (No clue how, but this was just wonderful!)

Reviewer: askita Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2010 10:50:11 AM Title: Outside Looking In

Awww.... that's awesome. Although I find myself wondering why no one can ever turn those damn bracelets into a fashion statement and give them some hinges. *grin*

Author's Response: *G* Thanks. Hinges *would* be amazing, but somehow, I'm thinking those mad, mad scientists never have that in mind. ;) I'll try to work that into the next one. Thanks again for the R&R.

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2010 3:13:44 AM Title: Outside Looking In

I agree that there could definitely be more continuation. Perhaps some side stories involving them dating more with some angst before she gets her memories back?

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love that you liked it enough to want more. I'll definitely give it some thought. I live in Africa right now, so internet and posting isn't as easy, but I definitely have the time to write things about.

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2010 2:43:20 AM Title: Outside Looking In

I have been waiting for a story where Rogue loses her memory and Logan has to help her back- THANK YOU! It was excellent :)

Author's Response: Cool! Ya know, it's really hard to come up with new storylines for this fandom - we have a creative group of writers - so I'm sure there are a few good ones out there of what you're looking for. I'm glad you found mine! :) Thank you.

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2010 12:58:21 PM Title: Outside Looking In

What brilliantly involved writing, boarding on angsty, but with a happy ending! And that’s my fav story-structure – yay! The quiet reserve of Logan, carefully keeping his distance, creeping ever-so-slowly nearer, was perfectly communicated throughout.

Fav line (and I had quite a number to choose from): “It wasn’t until she was leaving that she realized the room had stayed level. There was no tilt, no whirlwind in her head – she was balanced, she belonged there.”

Author's Response: Wow - thank you so very much. Too kind, too kind. I'm glad Logan's reluctance came across so clearly and consistently.rnrnI'm glad you liked that line, too - when I wrote it I was slightly self-satisfied if I do say so myself. *G* :P

Reviewer: Wolverette Signed star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2010 12:02:39 PM Title: Outside Looking In

Wonderful story! So beautifully written and full of emotion. I'm so sorry it's complete because I would love to read more. How about a sequel? Or a continuation?

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it as much as you did. I said above that I'll give it some thought. I hadn't really planned on anything else being added, but if I can come up with a decent enough storyline, it won't be a chore to write it out.

You must login (register) to review.