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Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2010 10:15:23 PM Title: That Don't Impress Me Much

Nice.... Thats all I got to say... Just NICE!

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Date: 06/02/2010 7:38:34 PM Title: That Don't Impress Me Much

go rogue
i agree with u rogue in the right not her fault logan is an idiot lol update soon

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Date: 06/02/2010 6:59:44 PM Title: You Can't Make It Fall

that was good cant wait for the next chapter update asap lol
so rogue gonna give into logan
make it very hard for him
will gambit make an apperance fyi jealous logan awesome

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Date: 06/02/2010 12:20:07 AM Title: Stay?

please update soon

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Date: 06/01/2010 11:43:13 PM Title: Stay?

please update soon

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Date: 06/01/2010 11:42:53 PM Title: Stay?

poor rogue so clueless cant wait to read wat logan has up his seelve next lol
stupid jean

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Date: 06/01/2010 6:08:15 AM Title: Closer to Where I Started

more please

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Date: 05/31/2010 6:50:50 PM Title: Closer to Where I Started

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH. He is one clever clever guy...

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2010 6:47:33 PM Title: Maybe He'll Open His Eyes

Well it was about damn time for him to start thinking. So glad he did.

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Date: 05/31/2010 6:40:19 PM Title: Maybe He'll Open His Eyes

...DAMNIT. I kinda like this Bryan character...

Author's Response: LOL You know what? That actually makes me kind of proud since he's a male character I just made up out of the blue. I was really a little unsure about him, especially since I have no husband here to ask, "Okay, how would YOU do this?"

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2010 6:31:39 PM Title: Baby Come on Over

She had sex with a guy that wasn't Logan????? Aaaaaargh!!!! Damn his slow brain!!!

Author's Response: I love how everyone's blaming Logan. If only he'd reacted here the way he did in my other story...see what happens when the characters get minds of their own? ;-)

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Date: 05/31/2010 6:22:53 PM Title: Fate's Little Game

"Only Rogue wasn't supposed to get hurt, dammit. She was supposed to stay wrapped up in her nice layers, such a threat that only he, with his healing power, wasn't afraid to touch her. Wasn't she?"

Awe! He thinks his touch isn't going to be special anymore.

Oh and Bryan was the name of the guy that gave me my first kiss... and yes he is a pussy..

Author's Response: Yeah, and I hope to get that across to her eventually. Sorry about the name Bryan. I just went to a baby name site. I wanted something that meant "strong" because the kind of guy I wanted for Rogue would be the anti-thesis, not of Logan, but of so many of the "other man" types she gets stuck with.

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2010 5:52:58 PM Title: What A Girl's Gotta Do

Okay. Mr. "I'm going to stay in the shadow and watch you all the time" needs to get off of his ass and tell her what's bothering him.

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Date: 05/31/2010 3:28:20 PM Title: Closer to Where I Started

ah rogue so clueless lol
great chapter

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2010 1:53:58 PM Title: Closer to Where I Started

I do hope the shoe goes on the other foot 'torture' wise for a while. I mean, what's fair is fair and Logan can't do all the suffering. Or can he? And where, exactly, is this going to leave poor Bryan? --Wendie

Author's Response: I plan on letting poor Bryan down as gently as possible, as well as confusing the hell out of Rogue for a bit. Yeah, good for the gander, good for the goose, right?

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2010 1:40:08 PM Title: Baby Come on Over

Truthfully, I'm disappointed. You gave us all this 'torture' for Logan, all this teasing build-up and then you bailed. I'm all for keeping the story moving, and God knows, I hate the fact the she basically had sex with him precisely because of who he WASN'T, not because of who he WAS or because he really meant anything to her, but I was kind of looking forward to how she perceived her first sexual encounter. Was she thrilled? Disappointed? Scared? Was she even a little bit sorry it wasn't with Logan? Not only did they not have sex 'on camera', as it were, but she didn't even dish about it with her girlfriends afterward. And wouldn't it have been great for her to really have something to compare Logan with eventually? Might that not make Logan just a tad nervous...talk about your torture...

Anyway, all of that having been said, I am still very much on board with this story and look forward to 'the campaign'. --Wendie

Author's Response: All right, I'm determined to make it up to you. I'll see what I can do in the next couple of chapters, okay?

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2010 1:09:33 PM Title: Maybe He'll Open His Eyes

Thank goodness the light bulb finally popped on. I can't wait to see Logan try to do 'subtle'. --Wendie

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2010 12:12:59 PM Title: Closer to Where I Started

*Sigh* Backrubs from Logan....... Is there anything better?

Author's Response: Not that I can think of! This one came to me in the shower this morning, and I just had to write it right away.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2010 11:10:06 AM Title: Fate's Little Game

Thanks for this look into Logan's head. It was absolutely necessary and perfectly timed. I like that he thought of her as 'safe' within the cocoon of her mutation--a place only he was brave enough to enter--and now that the 'butterfly' has been released, he's having a little trouble keeping up. On to the date... --Wendie

Author's Response: I'll be honest--I'm kind of nervous what you'll think of the date since I couldn't bring myself to write Rogue and Bryan sex. It just wasn't there, though I wanted it to be. :-( I loved it when the Logan in my head decided to give me that little tidbit. Wasn't it great? Good Logan. Maybe you'll get a cookie. Eventually. ;-)

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Date: 05/31/2010 10:29:19 AM Title: Maybe He'll Open His Eyes

Wow you have been busy! I loved Logan's point of view. I love that you had him hit with the proverbial brick. lol Love Rogue out there having fun and getting some experience! I can't wait to see what Logan does next and how Marie responds to it. lol Awesome job so far!

Author's Response: Rogue really does need at least a little experience to keep up with Logan, in my mind. Granted, a lot of people use her memories, but I figured, give the girl a break, let her have a little fun because Logan sure as hell had his opportunities!

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2010 8:27:08 AM Title: Fate's Little Game

Huh...I always thought of faith as a bastard...Go figure.

Author's Response: Well, in Greek and Roman mythology, the Three Fates are women, one who spins, one who measures, and one who cuts the thread of life. I've only ever heard "bitch" in reference to fate, and I guess that's where it comes from. (See the random bits of information you get when you're a history major?)

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2010 1:21:19 AM Title: Maybe He'll Open His Eyes

Finally!

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Date: 05/31/2010 12:23:35 AM Title: Maybe He'll Open His Eyes

awesome logan realized his mistake cant wait to read wat logan has plan
i hope rogue makes it hard for him

Author's Response: Since I really don't want any bodies of the dead sort here, it won't be too long, but...yeah, he's going to have to work for it. At least a few chapters, probably. I *may* be nice and get rid of Bryan sooner rather than later to give him a clearer playing field...But Rogue's gonna be one demanding bitch for a while.

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Date: 05/30/2010 7:47:44 PM Title: Baby Come on Over

awesome
when will logan wake up
brayan seems nice
so happy u updated so fast

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2010 5:32:31 PM Title: Baby Come on Over

she had sex

And it's alone Logan's fault that it wasn't with him *growls and smacks Logan on the back of his head*

Author's Response: Yep! Stupid Logan. Get a clue, boy, and get moving--oh, wait, that's my job, right? To make sure he does? ;-)

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