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[Report This]Date: 01/20/2014 6:34:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
LOL!! You were able to pack a lot of story with a few words. Scott's and Pyro's comments were bang on. Keep up the good work.
Date: 07/06/2010 1:13:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was sweet. It made me smile. :)
Author's Response: im glad it made you smile :)
Date: 07/02/2010 3:45:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ha ha, I like it! Especially Pyro's response! :)
Author's Response: thanks! :)
Date: 07/01/2010 11:52:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is perfect! Everyone has their say and opinion and is in total character. Not sure about the 'gutting' threat from Logan, I mean, he IS speaking to the Professor, but he may be trying to hide something that even HE isn't ready to deal with.....yet.
Author's Response: Yeah Logan wouldnt say that, I guess I was too tempted to put these words on his mouth anyways LOL. Glad you liked it anyways :)
Date: 07/01/2010 8:43:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
With the possible exception of Logan's last comment, this is really perfectly played. Everyone is very much in character, even Ororo and Bobby who say the fewest words. Pyro is probably my favorite.
As for Logan's last line--it sounds like something he would say to anybody BUT the professor. However, I see where he could be doing the 'protest too much' thing, as in overreacting because he doesn't want the professor to see how he really feels.
This is yet another example of few words telling a big story, a talent I am so jealous of it ain't even funny. --Wendie
Author's Response: Yeah youre right, he wouldnt talk like that to the proffessor, Im glad you liked the story anyways
Date: 07/01/2010 8:13:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
LOL, love the responses from Pyro and Logan.
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 07/01/2010 7:47:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Okay so this is really cute, Pryo's comments amused me to no end. He is totally a playa, isn't he? I would love to know what Xavier decides. Could be an interesting conversation with Erik about it. (Can you see that those two discussing inapproperiate relationships? It would be fun.)
Author's Response: That'd be nice yeah, but I as I said I can only make short stories if anyone feels like they want to continue this or whatever they're more than welcome :)
Date: 07/01/2010 5:14:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oooooh, this deserves an elaboration for every answer.
Author's Response: Someone else would have to do that since my english is pretty bad, I couldn't make a much longer story than this lol
Date: 07/01/2010 3:47:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ok I loved it... Logan's response made me actually laugh out loud. Now people are staring at me like I am crazy.
Author's Response: you made me laugh :)