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Date: 01/03/2011 8:50:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
This line just haunts me:
Underweight babies screeched and were shushed by mothers who were louder—who in their turn were sworn at by their husbands/boyfriends/kidnappers.
Author's Response: Yes, rather fond of that myself... ;~D
Date: 12/21/2010 7:31:54 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh my gawd! Just beautiful in its own freakish way. Your descriptions are so wonderful. It's like I'm reading a comic book. Sorry, make that graphic novel.
Linda.
Author's Response: Haha!! This put a huge smile on my face. Thanks.
Date: 12/04/2010 1:48:25 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love it. *fangirl squee*
Author's Response: Every time somebody says the word "fangirl" I just about lose my mind with all the bouncing around 'n squealing. Gracias.
Date: 10/03/2010 6:12:43 AM Title: Chapter 2
"Skeletal drug addicts who looked at Logan once then hurriedly at their feet, an acknowledgment of the Alpha that they didn't even understand."
Who thinks like that? Well, you, obviously. But I mean, holy hell, you can do THAT and you work in a nursing home? I'm sure it's very rewarding and that you are well and truly loved by those you care for, but please, please, please tell me that somewhere there is an original manuscript being lovingly slaved over and that it will one day be sent far and wide to publishers who will arm wrestle each other if they have to for the right to say they were the genius who discovered your talent and gifted it to the world.
Stop that. You're laughing...No, really, I'm serious...A little melodramatic maybe, but serious all the same...Oh, fine, go ahead and laugh...Time for Chapter 3... --Wendie
Author's Response: It is very very difficult to respond to you without sounding full of myself. If I believed everything I read of these reviews, my ego would be large enough to reinflate the Hindenburg. Please excuse this slip of taking your words seriously...the nursing home is just part-time, as I get through school. I don't really care what I do after, as long as it pays the bills and leaves me time to write. And maybe after college there will be a manuscript to slave over, but right now I'm excersising with fanfiction.
Author's Response: It is very very difficult to respond to you without sounding full of myself. If I believed everything I read of these reviews, my ego would be large enough to reinflate the Hindenburg. Please excuse this slip of taking your words seriously...the nursing home is just part-time, as I get through school. I don't really care what I do after, as long as it pays the bills and leaves me time to write. And maybe after college there will be a manuscript to slave over, but right now I'm excersising with fanfiction.
Date: 09/21/2010 9:46:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
And thank YOU for writing! I have no time for a decent review (not even for as careful a read as this story deserves), just wanted to let you know how much i love your style! It takes so much time, and wonderfully little explanation and perfectly suits Logan'S stark lifestyle and how I would imagine him to "tick". Great! :-)
Author's Response: I really, really appreciate this. >hugs< Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 07/26/2010 6:59:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
You should PLEASE hurry up and give me more chapters! I'm dying for more.
Author's Response: Lol! I am finished with the third chapter, but I won't be able to type it up tonight. You will definately see it tomorrow. Im sorry, and thank you!
[Report This]Date: 07/26/2010 2:17:21 PM Title: Chapter 2
Another powerful chapter. Too many writers try to skirt away from what Logan does best - he's a killer through and through, however reluctantly he does it - but you have captured this side of him perfectly without being too melodramatic or over the top.
I am loving this story! Hope you continue soon.
Author's Response: Oh, dear lord thank you! I was worried that people would not like the gorier parts of this. Your review helped me finish the scene I was struggling with; thanks to you the third chapter will be up tomorrow. >hugs< Thankyouthankyouthankyou!
Date: 07/22/2010 12:03:23 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm not sure why I'm so fond of this. Or why I want to adopt it and bring it home like some sweet stray puppy that is still half feral and may be rabid but has this cute little torn ear, so you love it anyways. Huh. Thanks.
~Mia
Author's Response: Lmao! That may be the coolest compliment Ive ever gotten...I am eating these absolutely amazing, fancy mini-cake things-theyre like frosted orgasms-that I refuse to share with anyone in my house. But I touched one to the computer screen for you. Thanks.
Date: 07/21/2010 6:24:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
Ooooh my kinda story - I like very much!
more please soon
Author's Response: >hugs tightly< Thanks. You're awesome.
[Report This]Date: 07/21/2010 1:54:22 AM Title: Chapter 2
I must hurt, becoming human again. xXx
Author's Response: That is so sweet. :D
Date: 07/21/2010 1:41:44 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm intrigued to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
[Report This]Date: 07/20/2010 10:54:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
im still not sure im getting this story. but i like it so far. cant wait for next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks. :~)
[Report This]Date: 07/20/2010 7:32:49 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wondeful first 2 chapters you have here! I can't wait for more Logan/Marie interaction! Keep up the geat work and I'll be waiting for your updates!
Author's Response: Oh, mess. Muchas Gracias and a cookie for you. >hugs< Wanna make a deal? I give more great work and you give more reviews? Hmm?
Date: 07/20/2010 5:55:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
Thank you for writing this precious piece. Beautiful, tender, gentle. In Logan/Rogue way, of course. I can't wait for him to take her under his wing and starts protecting her really. And idea of her reading THOSE books in a place like that is just...amazing.
Author's Response: Thank you for writing this precious review. :~) Seriously, this was great to hear....er...read. >hugs< Im glad you thought so.
Date: 07/20/2010 5:55:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
YAY! *Throws confetti & ignores how hard it will be to vacuum up later*!! This made my day. This and a beer. So thank you for providing one of those.
Again a wonderful example of how visually appealing your writing is. Anybody can be descriptive, but few can pull it off effortlessly & without it becoming too wordy.
Also, how can you throw out that birthday suit comment and expect me to function normally & not creepily?!
Author's Response: Greetings, Awesome-Possum. Im glad you liked it, and almost as glad that you were drinking while you read. My writing's twice as good this way. Thank you. ;~) .....and I was going to attach that photo, but I wasn't sure how high that would register on the awkward creeper scale-I dont usually email penises to other women. But he's yours if you want it. >raises eyebrow<
Date: 07/20/2010 5:11:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hello! Yes, it's me again. :-)
"He carried the box up Prewer street, boots sloshing through gravy-thick water, cigarette foil and beer caps. He thought about Stebbins, what a waste the day had been--no names collected at all--and people who wouldn't steal money when they find it on the ground." - I love lines like these, I think they are almost hidden, do you know what I mean? Like 'filler' lines to move you from one place to the next, so easily over-looked, and yet they set the scene perfectly and say so much.
"She could be kinda pretty, he thought absently to himself. Nice--nice lips. Nice chin. Slender little neck. Pale." - I love the delicate way you describe Rogue here.
"Why are you surprised?, Logan asked himself as he walked to the door that belonged to him. You're not a nice person. You don't do nice things. Stop pretending." - great line, it says a lot about Logan's frame of mind.
So again, I'll stop re-quoting your story back to you (I'm sure you're familiar with every line!) and just tell you that I love your work.
Author's Response: Hello! The re-quoting is almost my favorite part. ;~) Im grateful for it. Thank you very very very much. Congratulations, you are my favorite person right now.
Date: 07/20/2010 4:35:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
Awww, I love that ending. :)
Author's Response: >hugs tightly< Thank you.